【写作导引】
本单元以“好的学习者”为话题,属于“人与自我”主题范畴中的“学习/语言”。此类话题常见的写作角度涉及:①学习的意义与乐趣;②名人学习范例;③学习问题与建议。写这类文章时常用一般现在时,以书信作文为主。
【写作任务】
假如你是陈杰,你在学校的英语竞赛中取得了第一名的好成绩。班主任要求你在班会上发言,介绍一下你学习英语的经验。请你根据以下内容提示,写一篇80词左右的发言稿,向同学
们介绍你学习英语的方法。
要点:1. 听一些英文歌曲、新闻;2. 每天读一些有趣的英文故事,也可以看一些英语电影;3. 每天在纸上写四五个生词,把它们放在房间里;4. 不怕犯错,努力大声说英语;5.……(请你补充一点)。
Good morning, everyone!
I’m glad to tell you something about my English study. Here is some advice for you.
本单元以“好的学习者”为话题,属于“人与自我”主题范畴中的“学习/语言”。此类话题常见的写作角度涉及:①学习的意义与乐趣;②名人学习范例;③学习问题与建议。写这类文章时常用一般现在时,以书信作文为主。
【写作任务】
假如你是陈杰,你在学校的英语竞赛中取得了第一名的好成绩。班主任要求你在班会上发言,介绍一下你学习英语的经验。请你根据以下内容提示,写一篇80词左右的发言稿,向同学
们介绍你学习英语的方法。
要点:1. 听一些英文歌曲、新闻;2. 每天读一些有趣的英文故事,也可以看一些英语电影;3. 每天在纸上写四五个生词,把它们放在房间里;4. 不怕犯错,努力大声说英语;5.……(请你补充一点)。
Good morning, everyone!
I’m glad to tell you something about my English study. Here is some advice for you.
答案
First, I often listen to English songs and news to improve my listening. Second, I read interesting English stories and watch some English movies every day. Third, I write four or five new words on paper and put them around my room to remember them at any time. Fourth, don't be afraid of making mistakes, and try to speak English loudly. Besides, I often ask my teacher for help when I meet problems. I hope these tips can help you.
解析
【分析】
本次写作是英语班会发言稿,身份为陈杰,主题是分享英语学习经验,需涵盖给定的5个要点(含补充项),使用一般现在时,结构清晰,用连接词串联内容,开头已给出,只需按要点展开并补充合理学习建议,控制词数在80词左右,符合学生发言的口语化规范。
【解析】
1. 承接开头,用First引出第一个要点:听英文歌曲和新闻提升听力;
2. Second引出第二个要点:每天读英文故事、看英文电影;
3. Third引出第三个要点:每天写四五个生词放房间随时记忆;
4. Fourth引出第四个要点:不怕犯错,努力大声说英语;
5. Besides补充合理建议(向老师求助);
6. 结尾表达希望建议能帮助同学,全程用一般现在时,用词贴合学生身份,确保词数达标。
【答案】
First, I often listen to English songs and news to improve my listening. Second, I read interesting English stories and watch some English movies every day. Third, I write four or five new words on paper and put them around my room to remember them at any time. Fourth, don't be afraid of making mistakes, and try to speak English loudly. Besides, I often ask my teacher for help when I meet problems. I hope these tips can help you.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、英语学习策略表达、一般现在时运用
【点评】
该发言稿紧扣写作任务,全面覆盖所有要点,补充的建议贴合实际,结构清晰,语言简洁流畅,符合班会发言的语境,是一篇符合要求的范文。
【难度系数】
0.3
本次写作是英语班会发言稿,身份为陈杰,主题是分享英语学习经验,需涵盖给定的5个要点(含补充项),使用一般现在时,结构清晰,用连接词串联内容,开头已给出,只需按要点展开并补充合理学习建议,控制词数在80词左右,符合学生发言的口语化规范。
【解析】
1. 承接开头,用First引出第一个要点:听英文歌曲和新闻提升听力;
2. Second引出第二个要点:每天读英文故事、看英文电影;
3. Third引出第三个要点:每天写四五个生词放房间随时记忆;
4. Fourth引出第四个要点:不怕犯错,努力大声说英语;
5. Besides补充合理建议(向老师求助);
6. 结尾表达希望建议能帮助同学,全程用一般现在时,用词贴合学生身份,确保词数达标。
【答案】
First, I often listen to English songs and news to improve my listening. Second, I read interesting English stories and watch some English movies every day. Third, I write four or five new words on paper and put them around my room to remember them at any time. Fourth, don't be afraid of making mistakes, and try to speak English loudly. Besides, I often ask my teacher for help when I meet problems. I hope these tips can help you.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、英语学习策略表达、一般现在时运用
【点评】
该发言稿紧扣写作任务,全面覆盖所有要点,补充的建议贴合实际,结构清晰,语言简洁流畅,符合班会发言的语境,是一篇符合要求的范文。
【难度系数】
0.3
跟踪演练
你们班最近开展了本学期英语学习感受分享活动,有些同学表示英语学习更难了,他们感到有些焦虑和担心,希望大家献计献策,一起应对这个问题。请你根据提示写一篇90词左右的短文,描述困难并提出建议,并做适当的补充。

Difficulties and Solutions in Learning English
This term, some of us have difficulty in learning English.
你们班最近开展了本学期英语学习感受分享活动,有些同学表示英语学习更难了,他们感到有些焦虑和担心,希望大家献计献策,一起应对这个问题。请你根据提示写一篇90词左右的短文,描述困难并提出建议,并做适当的补充。
Difficulties and Solutions in Learning English
This term, some of us have difficulty in learning English.
We find it hard to understand grammar rules and improve our speaking skills. To overcome this, we should be confident and don't be afraid to make mistakes. We should face our weaknesses bravely. We are supposed to try to remember grammar rules and use them as often as possible.
If we have problems in English learning, we must ask our teachers for help. Listening to English news, watching English TV programs, and speaking English can help us learn better. In addition, practicing regularly with classmates can build confidence and improve our language abilities.
Remember, persistence is the key to progress. Nothing is impossible if we put our hearts into it.
答案
Difficulties and Solutions in Learning English
This term, some of us have difficulty in learning English. We find it hard to understand grammar rules and improve our speaking skills. To overcome this, we should be confident and don't be afraid to make mistakes. We should face our weaknesses bravely. We are supposed to try to remember grammar rules and use them as often as possible. If we have problems in English learning, we must ask our teachers for help. Listening to English news, watching English TV programs, and speaking English can help us learn better. In addition, practicing regularly with classmates can build confidence and improve our language abilities. Remember, persistence is the key to progress. Nothing is impossible if we put our hearts into it.
This term, some of us have difficulty in learning English. We find it hard to understand grammar rules and improve our speaking skills. To overcome this, we should be confident and don't be afraid to make mistakes. We should face our weaknesses bravely. We are supposed to try to remember grammar rules and use them as often as possible. If we have problems in English learning, we must ask our teachers for help. Listening to English news, watching English TV programs, and speaking English can help us learn better. In addition, practicing regularly with classmates can build confidence and improve our language abilities. Remember, persistence is the key to progress. Nothing is impossible if we put our hearts into it.
解析
【分析】本题要求围绕英语学习的困难与建议写作,需结合插图中的提示(自信、别怕犯错、听英语内容、练习等),先点明学生遇到的英语学习困难,再给出对应可行建议,补充合理内容,控制词数在90词左右,确保结构清晰、内容贴合主题。
【解析】1. 开头点明本学期部分同学英语学习存在困难;2. 具体说明困难,如语法规则难理解、口语表达不自信;3. 结合插图给出建议:要自信、别怕犯错,多听英语新闻、看英语节目,常说英语,多和同学练习,遇到问题向老师求助;4. 结尾鼓励坚持学习,提升英语能力。
【答案】Difficulties and Solutions in Learning English
This term, some of us have difficulty in learning English. We find it hard to understand grammar rules and improve our speaking skills. To overcome this, we should be confident and don't be afraid to make mistakes. We should face our weaknesses bravely. We are supposed to try to remember grammar rules and use them as often as possible. If we have problems in English learning, we must ask our teachers for help. Listening to English news, watching English TV programs, and speaking English can help us learn better. In addition, practicing regularly with classmates can build confidence and improve our language abilities. Remember, persistence is the key to progress. Nothing is impossible if we put our hearts into it.
【知识点】英语写作、建议表达
【点评】本题结合插图素材,引导学生围绕英语学习的实际问题写作,既考查英语语言运用能力,又传递了正确的学习态度,结构清晰,内容贴合学生实际。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】1. 开头点明本学期部分同学英语学习存在困难;2. 具体说明困难,如语法规则难理解、口语表达不自信;3. 结合插图给出建议:要自信、别怕犯错,多听英语新闻、看英语节目,常说英语,多和同学练习,遇到问题向老师求助;4. 结尾鼓励坚持学习,提升英语能力。
【答案】Difficulties and Solutions in Learning English
This term, some of us have difficulty in learning English. We find it hard to understand grammar rules and improve our speaking skills. To overcome this, we should be confident and don't be afraid to make mistakes. We should face our weaknesses bravely. We are supposed to try to remember grammar rules and use them as often as possible. If we have problems in English learning, we must ask our teachers for help. Listening to English news, watching English TV programs, and speaking English can help us learn better. In addition, practicing regularly with classmates can build confidence and improve our language abilities. Remember, persistence is the key to progress. Nothing is impossible if we put our hearts into it.
【知识点】英语写作、建议表达
【点评】本题结合插图素材,引导学生围绕英语学习的实际问题写作,既考查英语语言运用能力,又传递了正确的学习态度,结构清晰,内容贴合学生实际。
【难度系数】0.5
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