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学校英语角即将开展一次以“My Best Friend”为题的演讲活动。假如你是李华，Peter是你最好的朋友，请写一篇80词左右的英文演讲稿来介绍他。
内容包括：
1. 简单介绍你最好的朋友；
2. 你们的相同和不同之处；
3. 你的交友观。
▶▶审作文题
1. 文体：
2. 人称：
3. 时态：
4. 写作要点：①
▶▶搭建框架
（温馨提示：请先完成下面的写作提纲）
▶▶小试身手
My Best Friend
内容包括：
1. 简单介绍你最好的朋友；
2. 你们的相同和不同之处；
3. 你的交友观。
▶▶审作文题
1. 文体：
应用文
2. 人称：
第一人称和第三人称
3. 时态：
一般现在时
4. 写作要点：①
介绍“我”的朋友
；②“我们”的异同点
；③“我”的交友观
▶▶搭建框架
（温馨提示：请先完成下面的写作提纲）
▶▶小试身手
My Best Friend
答案
▶▶审作文题
1. 应用文
2. 第一人称和第三人称
3. 一般现在时
4. ①介绍“我”的朋友 ②“我们”的异同点 ③“我”的交友观
▶▶搭建框架
Beginning: Everyone has friends.
Body: Similarities and differences between my best friend and me
My opinions about making friends
Ending: Thanks for listening.
▶▶小试身手
【基础版】
One possible version:
My Best Friend
Everyone has friends. Good friends are important in our lives. Peter is my best friend. He is 14 and he is tall. He has short black hair and always smiles. We have some similarities. Both he and I are interested in music. We also have similar hobbies. We often play basketball and sing together, so we become good friends. He is more outgoing than me, but not as hard-working as me. He is good at maths, but I do well in English.
I don't care if we're alike or different. Friends are like books. You just need a few good ones.
Thanks for listening.
【提升版】
One possible version:
My Best Friend
Everyone has friends. It's important for us to make good friends in our lives. Peter, a 14-year-old tall boy with short black hair and a big smile on his face, is my best friend. We are similar in some ways. He is as interested in music as me. We also have similar hobbies. We often play basketball and sing together. That's why we become good friends. He is more outgoing than me, but not as hard-working as me. He is better at maths than me, but I do better in English than him.
I don't care if we are alike or different because friends are like books—you don't need a lot of them as long as they're good.
Thanks for listening.
1. 应用文
2. 第一人称和第三人称
3. 一般现在时
4. ①介绍“我”的朋友 ②“我们”的异同点 ③“我”的交友观
▶▶搭建框架
Beginning: Everyone has friends.
Body: Similarities and differences between my best friend and me
My opinions about making friends
Ending: Thanks for listening.
▶▶小试身手
【基础版】
One possible version:
My Best Friend
Everyone has friends. Good friends are important in our lives. Peter is my best friend. He is 14 and he is tall. He has short black hair and always smiles. We have some similarities. Both he and I are interested in music. We also have similar hobbies. We often play basketball and sing together, so we become good friends. He is more outgoing than me, but not as hard-working as me. He is good at maths, but I do well in English.
I don't care if we're alike or different. Friends are like books. You just need a few good ones.
Thanks for listening.
【提升版】
One possible version:
My Best Friend
Everyone has friends. It's important for us to make good friends in our lives. Peter, a 14-year-old tall boy with short black hair and a big smile on his face, is my best friend. We are similar in some ways. He is as interested in music as me. We also have similar hobbies. We often play basketball and sing together. That's why we become good friends. He is more outgoing than me, but not as hard-working as me. He is better at maths than me, but I do better in English than him.
I don't care if we are alike or different because friends are like books—you don't need a lot of them as long as they're good.
Thanks for listening.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语应用文写作题，要求完成“My Best Friend”主题演讲稿的审题、框架搭建及写作。解题时，首先需明确审题核心要素：文体、人称、时态和写作要点；其次搭建演讲的结构框架，分为开头引入、主体阐述、结尾致谢三部分；最后紧扣要点，用规范英语句式完成作文，确保词数符合要求。
【解析】
1. 审题：①文体为应用文（演讲稿）；②人称使用第一人称和第三人称；③时态采用一般现在时；④写作要点为：介绍最好的朋友、阐述“我”与朋友的异同、表达个人交友观。
2. 搭建框架：开头点明朋友的重要性并引出Peter；主体介绍Peter基本情况，对比“我”与他的异同，说明交友理念；结尾致谢。
3. 写作时需语言通顺，要点齐全，控制在80词左右。
【答案】
▶▶审作文题
1. 应用文
2. 第一人称和第三人称
3. 一般现在时
4. ①介绍“我”的朋友 ②“我们”的异同点 ③“我”的交友观
▶▶搭建框架
Beginning: Everyone has friends.
Body: Similarities and differences between my best friend and me; My opinions about making friends
Ending: Thanks for listening.
▶▶小试身手
My Best Friend
Everyone has friends. Good friends are important in our lives. Peter is my best friend. He is 14 and tall with short black hair and a big smile. We both love music and often play basketball together. He is more outgoing than me but less hard-working. He is good at maths while I do well in English. I don’t care if we are alike or different—friends are like books, just need a few good ones. Thanks for listening.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作，英语演讲稿结构，英语写作要点梳理
【点评】
本题围绕学生熟悉的交友话题，考查英语写作的审题、框架搭建与要点落实能力，题型基础贴近生活，能有效检验学生英语综合运用能力，引导学生关注日常英语表达。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语应用文写作题，要求完成“My Best Friend”主题演讲稿的审题、框架搭建及写作。解题时，首先需明确审题核心要素：文体、人称、时态和写作要点；其次搭建演讲的结构框架，分为开头引入、主体阐述、结尾致谢三部分；最后紧扣要点，用规范英语句式完成作文，确保词数符合要求。
【解析】
1. 审题：①文体为应用文（演讲稿）；②人称使用第一人称和第三人称；③时态采用一般现在时；④写作要点为：介绍最好的朋友、阐述“我”与朋友的异同、表达个人交友观。
2. 搭建框架：开头点明朋友的重要性并引出Peter；主体介绍Peter基本情况，对比“我”与他的异同，说明交友理念；结尾致谢。
3. 写作时需语言通顺，要点齐全，控制在80词左右。
【答案】
▶▶审作文题
1. 应用文
2. 第一人称和第三人称
3. 一般现在时
4. ①介绍“我”的朋友 ②“我们”的异同点 ③“我”的交友观
▶▶搭建框架
Beginning: Everyone has friends.
Body: Similarities and differences between my best friend and me; My opinions about making friends
Ending: Thanks for listening.
▶▶小试身手
My Best Friend
Everyone has friends. Good friends are important in our lives. Peter is my best friend. He is 14 and tall with short black hair and a big smile. We both love music and often play basketball together. He is more outgoing than me but less hard-working. He is good at maths while I do well in English. I don’t care if we are alike or different—friends are like books, just need a few good ones. Thanks for listening.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作，英语演讲稿结构，英语写作要点梳理
【点评】
本题围绕学生熟悉的交友话题，考查英语写作的审题、框架搭建与要点落实能力，题型基础贴近生活，能有效检验学生英语综合运用能力，引导学生关注日常英语表达。
【难度系数】
0.5
