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每个人要爱自己的学校,以学校为荣。假设你是李明,现在你的学校正在组织一场“我爱我校”的演讲比赛。请你以“My School”为题,根据以下提示写一篇演讲稿来介绍你的学校。
提示词语:building, garden, trees, flowers, between, beside, in front of, classroom, library, lab
提示问题:·How many buildings are there?(at least two)
·What can you do in each building?
要求:1.词数70左右;
2.必须包含上述所有要点,可适当发挥想象。
My School
写作支架
开头 开篇点题 Hello, everyone. My name is Li Ming. I’d like to
中间 详细介绍学校里的建筑等 There are many modern buildings in my school. You can see
There are
There are
We can
结尾 表达对学校的热爱 This is my school. I like it because

教材原文
P41▶ I’d like to tell you about my school.
P40▶ There are many modern buildings.
优秀范文
My School
Hello, everyone. My name is Li Ming. I’d like to tell you about my school.
There are many modern buildings in my school. You can see a teaching building, a library and a gym. There are a lot of classrooms in the teaching building.① We can have classes in it. There are a lot of books in the library and we can read books there.② We can play sports in the gym.
This is my school. I like it because it’s a really great place.③
亮点评析
①该句是there be句型,将本单元语法融入写作中。
②该句是由and连接的并列句。
③该句含有because引导的原因状语从句,从句说明了作者喜欢学校的原因。
每个人要爱自己的学校,以学校为荣。假设你是李明,现在你的学校正在组织一场“我爱我校”的演讲比赛。请你以“My School”为题,根据以下提示写一篇演讲稿来介绍你的学校。
提示词语:building, garden, trees, flowers, between, beside, in front of, classroom, library, lab
提示问题:·How many buildings are there?(at least two)
·What can you do in each building?
要求:1.词数70左右;
2.必须包含上述所有要点,可适当发挥想象。
My School
写作支架
开头 开篇点题 Hello, everyone. My name is Li Ming. I’d like to
tell you about my school
.中间 详细介绍学校里的建筑等 There are many modern buildings in my school. You can see
a teaching building, a library and a gym
.There are
a lot of classrooms
in the teaching building. We can have classes
in it.There are
a lot of books
in the library and we can read books there
.(高分句式1)We can
play sports
in the gym.结尾 表达对学校的热爱 This is my school. I like it because
it’s a really great place
.(高分句式2)教材原文
P41▶ I’d like to tell you about my school.
P40▶ There are many modern buildings.
优秀范文
My School
Hello, everyone. My name is Li Ming. I’d like to tell you about my school.
There are many modern buildings in my school. You can see a teaching building, a library and a gym. There are a lot of classrooms in the teaching building.① We can have classes in it. There are a lot of books in the library and we can read books there.② We can play sports in the gym.
This is my school. I like it because it’s a really great place.③
亮点评析
①该句是there be句型,将本单元语法融入写作中。
②该句是由and连接的并列句。
③该句含有because引导的原因状语从句,从句说明了作者喜欢学校的原因。
答案
My School
Hello, everyone. My name is Li Ming. I’d like to tell you about my school.
There are many modern buildings in my school. You can see a teaching building, a library and a gym. There are a lot of classrooms in the teaching building.① We can have classes in it. There are a lot of books in the library and we can read books there.② We can play sports in the gym.
This is my school. I like it because it’s a really great place.③
亮点评析
①该句是there be句型,将本单元语法融入写作中。
②该句是由and连接的并列句。
③该句含有because引导的原因状语从句,从句说明了作者喜欢学校的原因。
Hello, everyone. My name is Li Ming. I’d like to tell you about my school.
There are many modern buildings in my school. You can see a teaching building, a library and a gym. There are a lot of classrooms in the teaching building.① We can have classes in it. There are a lot of books in the library and we can read books there.② We can play sports in the gym.
This is my school. I like it because it’s a really great place.③
亮点评析
①该句是there be句型,将本单元语法融入写作中。
②该句是由and连接的并列句。
③该句含有because引导的原因状语从句,从句说明了作者喜欢学校的原因。
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