2026年小题狂做全程测评卷五年级英语下册译林版第96页答案
七、书面表达。(10分)
现在是星期六上午九点,海伦和她的朋友们都在家。他们都在忙些什么呢?请根据表格提供的信息,以"Doing the housework"为题,写一篇短文。

要求:1. 书写规范,语句通顺,意思连贯,信息基本完整;
2. 不少于8句话(已给出的内容不计入总句数)。
Doing the housework
It's nine o'clock on Saturday morning. The children are doing the housework at home.
Helen is twelve years old. She likes cooking delicious food.
Now she is making a fruit salad in the kitchen. John is fourteen. He likes keeping pets. Look! He is playing with his dog in front of the house. There is a boy in the garden. He is planting the seeds. He likes growing flowers. That's Jimmy. He's thirteen.

答案

范文:
Doing the housework
It's nine o'clock on Saturday morning. The children are doing the housework at home.
Helen is twelve years old. She likes cooking delicious food. Now she is making a fruit salad in the kitchen. John is fourteen. He likes keeping pets. Look! He is playing with his dog in front of the house. There is a boy in the garden. He is planting the seeds. He likes growing flowers. That's Jimmy. He's thirteen.

解析

【分析】
本题要求根据表格提供的人物信息,以“Doing the housework”为题补全短文,需结合开头内容,用正确的时态(现在进行时,描述此刻正在做的事),依次介绍海伦、约翰、吉米的年龄、爱好、正在做的事及地点,确保信息完整、语句通顺、不少于8句话。解题思路:1. 明确表格中三人的各项信息;2. 统一使用现在进行时(结构:am/is/are + 现在分词)描述正在进行的动作;3. 补充细节使内容连贯,符合题目要求。
【解析】
首先承接开头,介绍海伦的动作:根据表格信息,海伦12岁,爱好烹饪,此刻正在厨房做水果沙拉,用现在进行时表达;接着介绍约翰:14岁,爱好养宠物,正在房子前和狗玩耍;最后介绍吉米:13岁,爱好种花,正在花园里种种子,补充身份说明使内容完整,确保语句连贯,满足不少于8句的要求。
【答案】
Doing the housework
It's nine o'clock on Saturday morning. The children are doing the housework at home.
Helen is twelve years old. She likes cooking delicious food. Now she is making a fruit salad in the kitchen. John is fourteen. He likes keeping pets. Look! He is playing with his dog in front of the house. There is a boy in the garden. He is planting the seeds. He likes growing flowers. That's Jimmy. He's thirteen.
【知识点】
现在进行时、英语书面表达、信息提取写作
【点评】
范文准确运用现在进行时描述人物正在做的事,完整提取表格中的所有关键信息,语句通顺、逻辑连贯,符合题目对书写规范、信息完整、句数的要求,是一篇符合标准的书面表达。
【难度系数】
0.6