假如你是李华,以下是你的朋友Linda在学校填写的关于日常生活习惯的问卷调查,请给她写一封电子邮件,指出她的问题并提出建议。
注意:1.分析问卷,找出Linda在饮食、睡眠以及锻炼方面不健康的习惯,并给出相应的建议;
2.文中不能出现真实的校名和姓名;
3.词数70左右;邮件开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Linda,
From the questionnaire, I found you didn't have a good living habit.





Yours,
Li Hua

One possible version:
Dear Linda,
From the questionnaire, I found you didn't have a good living habit.
Firstly, it's important to have breakfast every day. To make sure you have enough time for breakfast, you'd better get up early in the morning. Going to bed early can also help you get enough sleep and make you get up early in the morning. Staying up late can make you sleepy the next day, so you should go to bed early. Secondly, your exercise time is far from enough. You sit for long hours every day , so you should do more exercise to keep fit.
I hope my advice can be helpful and I believe you'll be much healthier after changing your bad habits.
Yours,
Li Hua

【分析】
首先明确写作任务：给朋友Linda写电子邮件，需从饮食、睡眠、锻炼三方面找出她的不健康习惯并提建议，邮件开头结尾已给出，词数70左右，不能出现真实信息。思考时先梳理问卷隐含的问题（不吃早餐、熬夜睡眠不足、锻炼不足），再对应给出具体可行的建议，用亲切的建议类句型组织语言，确保符合邮件格式和词数要求。
【解析】
1. 先点明发现的问题：饮食上不吃早餐，需建议早起留时间吃早餐；睡眠上熬夜，需建议早睡保证充足睡眠；锻炼上时间不足，需建议多运动保持健康。
2. 用you should...、you'd better...等建议句型组织内容，衔接自然，语气符合朋友间的交流，控制词数在70左右，不出现真实校名和姓名，完成邮件写作。
【答案】
Dear Linda,
From the questionnaire, I found you didn't have a good living habit.
Firstly, it's important to have breakfast every day. To make sure you have enough time for breakfast, you'd better get up early in the morning. Going to bed early can also help you get enough sleep and make you get up early in the morning. Staying up late can make you sleepy the next day, so you should go to bed early. Secondly, your exercise time is far from enough. You sit for long hours every day , so you should do more exercise to keep fit.
I hope my advice can be helpful and I believe you'll be much healthier after changing your bad habits.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、健康话题表达、建议类句型
【点评】
该范文紧扣题目要求，准确指出饮食、睡眠、锻炼三方面的不良生活习惯，对应建议合理可行，语言简洁流畅，符合邮件格式，词数达标，是符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.5