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Ⅳ. 书面表达(15 分)
31. 某英文报举办了以“家乡的变化”为主题的征文活动。请根据下表提示,以“The Changes in My Hometown”为题,用英语写一篇 100 词左右的短文。
2. 道路狭窄,垃圾遍地；
2. 环境:街道宽阔、干净,河流干净多了。
注意：
(1) 要点齐全,语言通顺,可适当发挥；
(2) 条理清楚,书写规范；
(3) 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
31. 某英文报举办了以“家乡的变化”为主题的征文活动。请根据下表提示,以“The Changes in My Hometown”为题,用英语写一篇 100 词左右的短文。
2. 道路狭窄,垃圾遍地；
2. 环境:街道宽阔、干净,河流干净多了。
注意：
(1) 要点齐全,语言通顺,可适当发挥；
(2) 条理清楚,书写规范；
(3) 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
答案
31.【参考范文】
The Changes in My Hometown
In the past, people in my hometown lived a poor life. The houses were old and small. Pollution was very serious, and there was rubbish everywhere. The traffic was not convenient and roads were narrow, so few visitors came here. Now great changes have taken place in my hometown. The houses are large and bright. Many people have their own cars. The roads are wide and clean. The rivers have become much clearer and the sky has been bluer. Every year, thousands of people come to visit my hometown.
I think we should take an active part in protecting the environment. I hope my hometown will become more and more beautiful in the future. There will be more tourists coming to my hometown.
The Changes in My Hometown
In the past, people in my hometown lived a poor life. The houses were old and small. Pollution was very serious, and there was rubbish everywhere. The traffic was not convenient and roads were narrow, so few visitors came here. Now great changes have taken place in my hometown. The houses are large and bright. Many people have their own cars. The roads are wide and clean. The rivers have become much clearer and the sky has been bluer. Every year, thousands of people come to visit my hometown.
I think we should take an active part in protecting the environment. I hope my hometown will become more and more beautiful in the future. There will be more tourists coming to my hometown.
解析
【分析】
本题是英语书面表达题，主题为“家乡的变化”，要求根据表格中过去、现在、将来的提示完成短文。解题思路：1. 明确文章结构，分为过去、现在、将来三个部分，对应表格要点；2. 选用正确时态：过去情况用一般过去时，现在情况用一般现在时或现在完成时，将来展望用一般将来时；3. 整合表格要点，适当补充合理内容（如保护环境的想法），确保语言通顺、要点齐全，控制词数在100左右，避免出现真实姓名和学校信息。
【解析】
1. 确定标题为The Changes in My Hometown；2. 描述过去：用一般过去时，写出生活贫困、房屋破旧、道路狭窄垃圾多、游客少的内容；3. 描述现在：用现在完成时或一般现在时，写出住房宽敞明亮、有私家车、环境变好、游客增多的内容；4. 展望将来：用一般将来时，表达家乡会更美丽、游客更多的期望，适当加入保护环境的想法使文章更完整；5. 检查要点是否齐全，语言是否通顺，词数是否符合要求。
【答案】
The Changes in My Hometown
In the past, people in my hometown lived a poor life. The houses were old and small. Pollution was very serious, and there was rubbish everywhere. The traffic was not convenient and roads were narrow, so few visitors came here. Now great changes have taken place in my hometown. The houses are large and bright. Many people have their own cars. The roads are wide and clean. The rivers have become much clearer and the sky has been bluer. Every year, thousands of people come to visit my hometown.
I think we should take an active part in protecting the environment. I hope my hometown will become more and more beautiful in the future. There will be more tourists coming to my hometown.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、时态运用、要点整合
【点评】
本题结合生活实际，考查学生的英语写作能力，要求学生准确运用不同时态描述家乡变化，要点清晰，贴近学生生活，易于发挥，能有效考查学生的语言组织和表达能力。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题是英语书面表达题，主题为“家乡的变化”，要求根据表格中过去、现在、将来的提示完成短文。解题思路：1. 明确文章结构，分为过去、现在、将来三个部分，对应表格要点；2. 选用正确时态：过去情况用一般过去时，现在情况用一般现在时或现在完成时，将来展望用一般将来时；3. 整合表格要点，适当补充合理内容（如保护环境的想法），确保语言通顺、要点齐全，控制词数在100左右，避免出现真实姓名和学校信息。
【解析】
1. 确定标题为The Changes in My Hometown；2. 描述过去：用一般过去时，写出生活贫困、房屋破旧、道路狭窄垃圾多、游客少的内容；3. 描述现在：用现在完成时或一般现在时，写出住房宽敞明亮、有私家车、环境变好、游客增多的内容；4. 展望将来：用一般将来时，表达家乡会更美丽、游客更多的期望，适当加入保护环境的想法使文章更完整；5. 检查要点是否齐全，语言是否通顺，词数是否符合要求。
【答案】
The Changes in My Hometown
In the past, people in my hometown lived a poor life. The houses were old and small. Pollution was very serious, and there was rubbish everywhere. The traffic was not convenient and roads were narrow, so few visitors came here. Now great changes have taken place in my hometown. The houses are large and bright. Many people have their own cars. The roads are wide and clean. The rivers have become much clearer and the sky has been bluer. Every year, thousands of people come to visit my hometown.
I think we should take an active part in protecting the environment. I hope my hometown will become more and more beautiful in the future. There will be more tourists coming to my hometown.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、时态运用、要点整合
【点评】
本题结合生活实际，考查学生的英语写作能力，要求学生准确运用不同时态描述家乡变化，要点清晰，贴近学生生活，易于发挥，能有效考查学生的语言组织和表达能力。
【难度系数】
0.5
