B. 趣味故事 阅读下面短文,根据短文内容完成句子。
One day,a baby snail(蜗牛)found that he had to carry a hard and heavy shell at any time. He wanted to know why,so he went up to his mother and asked,“Why was I born with a shell and it grew(变得)so hard and heavy?”His mother said,“Because we have no bones(骨头). We can only move slowly,so we need a shell to protect(保护)us.”
The baby snail asked again,“The caterpillar(毛毛虫)has no bones either,and she can’t move quickly. Why can she live without a shell?”The mother snail answered,“That’s because a caterpillar will become a butterfly(蝴蝶). She can fly high into the sky. The sky can protect her.”
The baby snail had one more question,“But the earthworm(蚯蚓)moves like us. He has no bones and he won’t become a butterfly. Why doesn’t he carry a hard and heavy shell?”His mother said,“He can dig(挖)a hole and hide(藏)in the ground,and then the earth(泥土)can protect him.”
The baby snail then cried,“We are so poor! We have no protection from the sky or from the ground!”His mother smiled at him,“That’s why we have a shell. My dear,if we don’t have the shells,what will happen to us? The hot sun will dry out(使变干)our bodies and we’ll have nowhere to sleep. Without a shell,maybe we’ll die in the heavy rain. How bad it is! We don’t depend on(依靠)the sky or the ground for protection. We should depend on ourselves.”
1. A baby snail couldn’t understand why he had to carry
2. In the story,a caterpillar will become
3. The earthworm can get protection by digging a hole and
4. The baby snail asked his mother
5. The snails should depend on
One day,a baby snail(蜗牛)found that he had to carry a hard and heavy shell at any time. He wanted to know why,so he went up to his mother and asked,“Why was I born with a shell and it grew(变得)so hard and heavy?”His mother said,“Because we have no bones(骨头). We can only move slowly,so we need a shell to protect(保护)us.”
The baby snail asked again,“The caterpillar(毛毛虫)has no bones either,and she can’t move quickly. Why can she live without a shell?”The mother snail answered,“That’s because a caterpillar will become a butterfly(蝴蝶). She can fly high into the sky. The sky can protect her.”
The baby snail had one more question,“But the earthworm(蚯蚓)moves like us. He has no bones and he won’t become a butterfly. Why doesn’t he carry a hard and heavy shell?”His mother said,“He can dig(挖)a hole and hide(藏)in the ground,and then the earth(泥土)can protect him.”
The baby snail then cried,“We are so poor! We have no protection from the sky or from the ground!”His mother smiled at him,“That’s why we have a shell. My dear,if we don’t have the shells,what will happen to us? The hot sun will dry out(使变干)our bodies and we’ll have nowhere to sleep. Without a shell,maybe we’ll die in the heavy rain. How bad it is! We don’t depend on(依靠)the sky or the ground for protection. We should depend on ourselves.”
1. A baby snail couldn’t understand why he had to carry
a hard and heavy shell
at any time.2. In the story,a caterpillar will become
a butterfly
when she grows up(长大).3. The earthworm can get protection by digging a hole and
hiding in the ground
.4. The baby snail asked his mother
three/3
questions in total(总共).5. The snails should depend on
themselves
according to the story.答案
1. a hard and heavy shell 2. a butterfly 3. hiding in the ground 4. three/3 5. themselves
解析
【分析】
这是一篇故事类阅读完成句子题型,解题时先通读全文理清小蜗牛和妈妈的对话逻辑,之后针对每道题干的关键词回到原文精准定位对应语句,提取匹配信息,同时注意空格前后的语法搭配要求,适当调整单词形式,确保答案语义和语法都正确。
【解析】
1. 定位原文第一句"One day,a baby snail(蜗牛)found that he had to carry a hard and heavy shell at any time.",直接提取对应内容即可,填a hard and heavy shell。
2. 定位原文第二段妈妈的回答"That’s because a caterpillar will become a butterfly(蝴蝶).",直接提取对应内容,填a butterfly。
3. 定位原文第三段妈妈的回答"He can dig(挖)a hole and hide(藏)in the ground,and then the earth(泥土)can protect him.",空格前by是介词,后面的动词要使用动名词形式,和前面的digging并列,因此hide变为hiding,填hiding in the ground。
4. 统计小蜗牛的提问:一共提出了3个问题,分别是自己为什么要带硬壳、毛毛虫为什么不需要壳、蚯蚓为什么不需要壳,因此填three/3。
5. 定位原文最后一句妈妈说的话"We don’t depend on(依靠)the sky or the ground for protection. We should depend on ourselves.",题干主语是snails,对应的反身代词是themselves,填themselves。
【答案】
1. a hard and heavy shell 2. a butterfly 3. hiding in the ground 4. three/3 5. themselves
【知识点】
阅读细节定位;动名词用法;反身代词
【点评】
本题属于低难度的故事类阅读题,绝大多数答案都可以直接从原文中找到,仅第三题需要注意介词后动词的形式变化,整体主要考察学生快速在文本中定位关键信息的能力,适合基础阶段的学生练习阅读信息查找能力。
【难度系数】
0.8
这是一篇故事类阅读完成句子题型,解题时先通读全文理清小蜗牛和妈妈的对话逻辑,之后针对每道题干的关键词回到原文精准定位对应语句,提取匹配信息,同时注意空格前后的语法搭配要求,适当调整单词形式,确保答案语义和语法都正确。
【解析】
1. 定位原文第一句"One day,a baby snail(蜗牛)found that he had to carry a hard and heavy shell at any time.",直接提取对应内容即可,填a hard and heavy shell。
2. 定位原文第二段妈妈的回答"That’s because a caterpillar will become a butterfly(蝴蝶).",直接提取对应内容,填a butterfly。
3. 定位原文第三段妈妈的回答"He can dig(挖)a hole and hide(藏)in the ground,and then the earth(泥土)can protect him.",空格前by是介词,后面的动词要使用动名词形式,和前面的digging并列,因此hide变为hiding,填hiding in the ground。
4. 统计小蜗牛的提问:一共提出了3个问题,分别是自己为什么要带硬壳、毛毛虫为什么不需要壳、蚯蚓为什么不需要壳,因此填three/3。
5. 定位原文最后一句妈妈说的话"We don’t depend on(依靠)the sky or the ground for protection. We should depend on ourselves.",题干主语是snails,对应的反身代词是themselves,填themselves。
【答案】
1. a hard and heavy shell 2. a butterfly 3. hiding in the ground 4. three/3 5. themselves
【知识点】
阅读细节定位;动名词用法;反身代词
【点评】
本题属于低难度的故事类阅读题,绝大多数答案都可以直接从原文中找到,仅第三题需要注意介词后动词的形式变化,整体主要考察学生快速在文本中定位关键信息的能力,适合基础阶段的学生练习阅读信息查找能力。
【难度系数】
0.8
十一、书面表达。(8 分)
请根据图片和词汇提示,用一般过去时讲述狐狸和乌鸦的故事。不少于 6 句话,并使用至少 2 个副词。词汇提示:happy,angry,beautiful,sweet,quick...
The fox and the crow

请根据图片和词汇提示,用一般过去时讲述狐狸和乌鸦的故事。不少于 6 句话,并使用至少 2 个副词。词汇提示:happy,angry,beautiful,sweet,quick...
The fox and the crow
答案
参考例文:
The fox and the crow
One day, a crow found a piece of meat. She flew happily to a big tree and sat on a branch, holding the meat in her mouth. Just then, a fox walked by. He looked up and saw the meat. "What a beautiful crow!" the fox shouted loudly. The crow felt very happy but didn't say anything. The fox said, "I heard your singing is wonderful. Could you sing for me?" The crow was so proud that she opened her mouth to sing. Oh, the meat fell down. The fox caught it and ran away quickly. The crow felt angry, but it was too late.
评价标准
1. 符合题目要求,故事完整,表达通顺,语法准确,不少于 6 句话,则得满分 8 分。
2. 普通错误扣 0.5 分/个:单词拼写、动词时态、副词形式等。扣 3 分封顶。
3. 小错 3 个扣 1 分:大小写、标点符号。扣 2 分封顶。
4. 故事有关键情节缺漏,无法衔接的,扣 1 分。
5. 如果表达碎片化,但拼写正确可保底得 2 分,否则不得分。
6. 酌情考虑书写和卷面整洁程度。
The fox and the crow
One day, a crow found a piece of meat. She flew happily to a big tree and sat on a branch, holding the meat in her mouth. Just then, a fox walked by. He looked up and saw the meat. "What a beautiful crow!" the fox shouted loudly. The crow felt very happy but didn't say anything. The fox said, "I heard your singing is wonderful. Could you sing for me?" The crow was so proud that she opened her mouth to sing. Oh, the meat fell down. The fox caught it and ran away quickly. The crow felt angry, but it was too late.
评价标准
1. 符合题目要求,故事完整,表达通顺,语法准确,不少于 6 句话,则得满分 8 分。
2. 普通错误扣 0.5 分/个:单词拼写、动词时态、副词形式等。扣 3 分封顶。
3. 小错 3 个扣 1 分:大小写、标点符号。扣 2 分封顶。
4. 故事有关键情节缺漏,无法衔接的,扣 1 分。
5. 如果表达碎片化,但拼写正确可保底得 2 分,否则不得分。
6. 酌情考虑书写和卷面整洁程度。
解析
【分析】
拿到这道书面表达题,首先要明确三个核心要求:全程使用一般过去时、句子不少于6句、至少使用2个副词,还要合理融入给出的提示词汇。接下来可以顺着经典的狐狸和乌鸦的故事脉络梳理写作逻辑:第一步交代故事开端,某天乌鸦找到一块肉,飞到大树的树枝上停留;第二步引入狐狸角色,狐狸路过树下,盯上了乌鸦嘴里的肉,想要把肉骗走;第三步写狐狸的诱骗过程,狐狸不断吹捧乌鸦外形好看、歌声动听,哄乌鸦开口说话;第四步写事件转折,乌鸦被夸得得意忘形,张嘴唱歌的时候肉直接掉了下去;第五步写结局,狐狸接住肉飞快跑走,乌鸦反应过来之后十分生气。顺着这个逻辑写,很容易就能满足所有题目的要求。
【解析】
写作可以按照以下步骤完成:
1. 开篇用"One day"作为故事的时间引子,用一般过去时描述故事开端:乌鸦找到一块肉,开心地飞到树枝上,这里加入副词happily修饰飞的动作,自然用上提示词happy的变形。
2. 接下来引入狐狸角色,描写狐狸路过树下,抬头看到乌鸦嘴里的肉,心生贪念。
3. 描写狐狸的诱骗行为:狐狸大声(副词loudly)吹捧乌鸦外形beautiful,还说自己想听乌鸦唱歌,哄乌鸦开口。
4. 描写乌鸦的反应:乌鸦被夸得十分得意,忘记自己嘴里叼着肉,张开嘴准备唱歌,肉直接从嘴里掉落。
5. 描写故事结局:狐狸立刻接住掉下来的肉,飞快地(副词quickly)叼着肉跑走,乌鸦反应过来之后非常angry,但是已经来不及了。
6. 最后通读全文检查:确认所有谓语动词都用了一般过去式,句子数量达标,用到了至少3个副词,提示词汇都自然融入,没有语法拼写错误,故事逻辑完整通顺。
【答案】
The fox and the crow
One day, a crow found a piece of meat. She flew happily to a big tree and sat on a branch, holding the meat in her mouth. Just then, a fox walked by. He looked up and saw the meat. "What a beautiful crow!" the fox shouted loudly. The crow felt very happy but didn't say anything. The fox said, "I heard your singing is wonderful. Could you sing for me?" The crow was so proud that she opened her mouth to sing. Oh, the meat fell down. The fox caught it and ran away quickly. The crow felt angry, but it was too late.
【知识点】
一般过去时应用,副词用法,寓言故事写作
【点评】
本题是小学高段/初中低年级的故事类书面表达题,依托学生耳熟能详的经典寓言降低了内容构思的门槛,核心考察学生对一般过去时的掌握程度和副词的正确使用,写作时只需要按照故事发展顺序把关键情节完整表述出来,注意规避时态混用、动词过去式变形错误的问题,很容易拿到高分。
【难度系数】
0.6
拿到这道书面表达题,首先要明确三个核心要求:全程使用一般过去时、句子不少于6句、至少使用2个副词,还要合理融入给出的提示词汇。接下来可以顺着经典的狐狸和乌鸦的故事脉络梳理写作逻辑:第一步交代故事开端,某天乌鸦找到一块肉,飞到大树的树枝上停留;第二步引入狐狸角色,狐狸路过树下,盯上了乌鸦嘴里的肉,想要把肉骗走;第三步写狐狸的诱骗过程,狐狸不断吹捧乌鸦外形好看、歌声动听,哄乌鸦开口说话;第四步写事件转折,乌鸦被夸得得意忘形,张嘴唱歌的时候肉直接掉了下去;第五步写结局,狐狸接住肉飞快跑走,乌鸦反应过来之后十分生气。顺着这个逻辑写,很容易就能满足所有题目的要求。
【解析】
写作可以按照以下步骤完成:
1. 开篇用"One day"作为故事的时间引子,用一般过去时描述故事开端:乌鸦找到一块肉,开心地飞到树枝上,这里加入副词happily修饰飞的动作,自然用上提示词happy的变形。
2. 接下来引入狐狸角色,描写狐狸路过树下,抬头看到乌鸦嘴里的肉,心生贪念。
3. 描写狐狸的诱骗行为:狐狸大声(副词loudly)吹捧乌鸦外形beautiful,还说自己想听乌鸦唱歌,哄乌鸦开口。
4. 描写乌鸦的反应:乌鸦被夸得十分得意,忘记自己嘴里叼着肉,张开嘴准备唱歌,肉直接从嘴里掉落。
5. 描写故事结局:狐狸立刻接住掉下来的肉,飞快地(副词quickly)叼着肉跑走,乌鸦反应过来之后非常angry,但是已经来不及了。
6. 最后通读全文检查:确认所有谓语动词都用了一般过去式,句子数量达标,用到了至少3个副词,提示词汇都自然融入,没有语法拼写错误,故事逻辑完整通顺。
【答案】
The fox and the crow
One day, a crow found a piece of meat. She flew happily to a big tree and sat on a branch, holding the meat in her mouth. Just then, a fox walked by. He looked up and saw the meat. "What a beautiful crow!" the fox shouted loudly. The crow felt very happy but didn't say anything. The fox said, "I heard your singing is wonderful. Could you sing for me?" The crow was so proud that she opened her mouth to sing. Oh, the meat fell down. The fox caught it and ran away quickly. The crow felt angry, but it was too late.
【知识点】
一般过去时应用,副词用法,寓言故事写作
【点评】
本题是小学高段/初中低年级的故事类书面表达题,依托学生耳熟能详的经典寓言降低了内容构思的门槛,核心考察学生对一般过去时的掌握程度和副词的正确使用,写作时只需要按照故事发展顺序把关键情节完整表述出来,注意规避时态混用、动词过去式变形错误的问题,很容易拿到高分。
【难度系数】
0.6
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