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学校将举行一场时装秀，要求同学们穿上自己设计的服装。请根据表格提示，描述你所设计的服装吧！
时 间：下星期五
地 点：学校礼堂
自己的设计：
T恤衫：棉制的，鲜红色，V形领
牛仔裤：
，有大口袋，与T恤衫相配
衬衫：有纽扣，长袖
运动鞋：皮革制的，舒适易穿……
个人感想：我希望……
要求:1. 表达中必须包含所给要点，可以适当发挥，不要简单翻译。2. 词数80左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
[思路点拨]1. 文体:说明文。2. 时态:以一般现在时为主。3. 人称:第一、三人称。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
We are going to have a fashion show in the school hall next Friday.
实战练笔，夯实写作功底
学校将举行一场时装秀，要求同学们穿上自己设计的服装。请根据表格提示，描述你所设计的服装吧！
时 间：下星期五
地 点：学校礼堂
自己的设计：
T恤衫：棉制的，鲜红色，V形领
牛仔裤：
，有大口袋，与T恤衫相配衬衫：有纽扣，长袖
运动鞋：皮革制的，舒适易穿……
个人感想：我希望……
要求:1. 表达中必须包含所给要点，可以适当发挥，不要简单翻译。2. 词数80左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
[思路点拨]1. 文体:说明文。2. 时态:以一般现在时为主。3. 人称:第一、三人称。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
We are going to have a fashion show in the school hall next Friday.
I am designing the clothes for myself. First, I design a cotton T-shirt. It is bright red and it is V-necked.
Then I design a pair of jeans with big pockets. They really go well with my T-shirt.
I also design a cotton shirt with long sleeves and buttons on the front.
My new trainers are white and very comfortable.
They are made of leather and they are easy to put on.
White matches any other colour.
I hope everyone will like my design.
答案
One possible version:
We are going to have a fashion show in the school hall next Friday.
I am designing the clothes for myself. First, I design a cotton T-shirt. It is bright red and it is V-necked. Then I design a pair of jeans with big pockets. They really go well with my T-shirt. I also design a cotton shirt with long sleeves and buttons on the front. My new trainers are white and very comfortable. They are made of leather and they are easy to put on. White matches any other colour.
I hope everyone will like my design.
We are going to have a fashion show in the school hall next Friday.
I am designing the clothes for myself. First, I design a cotton T-shirt. It is bright red and it is V-necked. Then I design a pair of jeans with big pockets. They really go well with my T-shirt. I also design a cotton shirt with long sleeves and buttons on the front. My new trainers are white and very comfortable. They are made of leather and they are easy to put on. White matches any other colour.
I hope everyone will like my design.
解析
【分析】这是一篇英语说明文写作题，需承接给定开头，按顺序介绍自己设计的服装，要涵盖所有表格要点（T恤、牛仔裤、衬衫、运动鞋的特征），最后表达个人感想；时态以一般现在时为主，人称用第一人称，适当发挥使语句连贯，词数控制在80左右，确保符合题目要求。
【解析】1. 承接开头，点明自己正在为时装秀设计服装；2. 依次介绍各服装：先写棉制鲜红色V领T恤，再写带大口袋且与T恤相配的牛仔裤，接着写带纽扣的长袖衬衫，最后写皮革制舒适易穿的运动鞋，补充运动鞋颜色使内容更丰富；3. 最后表达希望大家喜欢自己设计的感想，确保所有要点齐全，语句通顺连贯。
【答案】One possible version:
We are going to have a fashion show in the school hall next Friday.
I am designing the clothes for myself. First, I design a cotton T-shirt. It is bright red and it is V-necked. Then I design a pair of jeans with big pockets. They really go well with my T-shirt. I also design a cotton shirt with long sleeves and buttons on the front. My new trainers are white and very comfortable. They are made of leather and they are easy to put on. White matches any other colour.
I hope everyone will like my design.
【知识点】英语说明文写作；一般现在时；服装类词汇运用
【点评】本篇写作要点齐全，结构清晰，语句通顺，适当补充细节使内容更生动，符合初中英语写作的考查要求，完成了题目规定的写作任务。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】1. 承接开头，点明自己正在为时装秀设计服装；2. 依次介绍各服装：先写棉制鲜红色V领T恤，再写带大口袋且与T恤相配的牛仔裤，接着写带纽扣的长袖衬衫，最后写皮革制舒适易穿的运动鞋，补充运动鞋颜色使内容更丰富；3. 最后表达希望大家喜欢自己设计的感想，确保所有要点齐全，语句通顺连贯。
【答案】One possible version:
We are going to have a fashion show in the school hall next Friday.
I am designing the clothes for myself. First, I design a cotton T-shirt. It is bright red and it is V-necked. Then I design a pair of jeans with big pockets. They really go well with my T-shirt. I also design a cotton shirt with long sleeves and buttons on the front. My new trainers are white and very comfortable. They are made of leather and they are easy to put on. White matches any other colour.
I hope everyone will like my design.
【知识点】英语说明文写作；一般现在时；服装类词汇运用
【点评】本篇写作要点齐全，结构清晰，语句通顺，适当补充细节使内容更生动，符合初中英语写作的考查要求，完成了题目规定的写作任务。
【难度系数】0.5
