例3
旅行可以使人放松,开阔眼界。诸多旅行中,你最难忘的是哪次呢?请以“The trip I will never forget”为题,用英语写一篇短文。要点如下:
1. 哪次旅行让你难忘。
2. 该旅行的经历。
3. 该旅行的感受。
要求:
1. 词数100左右。
2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息。
The trip I will never forget
【写作提示】
1. 题目解读:本文为问题式中文提示类作文。话题是“我永远不会忘记的旅行(The trip I will never forget)”。三个要点分别如下:哪次旅行让你难忘,该旅行的经历,该旅行的感受。
2. 写作指导:本文是一篇记叙文,时态主要为一般过去时,要注意时态的转换。人称主要为第一三人称。学生要仔细阅读所给材料,认真审题,确定主题,根据主题和所给要点列出提纲,可适当发挥。尽量使用丰富句型,要运用合适的连接词或过渡词,使文章具有连贯性。旅游地点、活动及感受尽量描述得生动,以提高读者的兴趣。学生应根据提示要点先列出本文的写作提纲。写完后,注意再通读一遍,看看有无拼写、标点、语法错误(时态、主谓一致等)。
【参考范文】
The trip I will never forget
Last summer holiday, I took a trip to Yunnan with my family. Yunnan is in the southwestern part of our country. It is really a very good place with beautiful mountains, clean rivers, and kind people. Trees and flowers could be seen everywhere. The fruits there were very fresh. We stayed there for about one week. We went to Kunming, Dali, and the Old Town of Lijiang. We enjoyed the local food. We also went to climb Yulong Snow Mountain. The mountain was like a fairyland, and we couldn't stop taking photos. It was such an interesting trip that I will never forget it.
旅行可以使人放松,开阔眼界。诸多旅行中,你最难忘的是哪次呢?请以“The trip I will never forget”为题,用英语写一篇短文。要点如下:
1. 哪次旅行让你难忘。
2. 该旅行的经历。
3. 该旅行的感受。
要求:
1. 词数100左右。
2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息。
The trip I will never forget
【写作提示】
1. 题目解读:本文为问题式中文提示类作文。话题是“我永远不会忘记的旅行(The trip I will never forget)”。三个要点分别如下:哪次旅行让你难忘,该旅行的经历,该旅行的感受。
2. 写作指导:本文是一篇记叙文,时态主要为一般过去时,要注意时态的转换。人称主要为第一三人称。学生要仔细阅读所给材料,认真审题,确定主题,根据主题和所给要点列出提纲,可适当发挥。尽量使用丰富句型,要运用合适的连接词或过渡词,使文章具有连贯性。旅游地点、活动及感受尽量描述得生动,以提高读者的兴趣。学生应根据提示要点先列出本文的写作提纲。写完后,注意再通读一遍,看看有无拼写、标点、语法错误(时态、主谓一致等)。
【参考范文】
The trip I will never forget
Last summer holiday, I took a trip to Yunnan with my family. Yunnan is in the southwestern part of our country. It is really a very good place with beautiful mountains, clean rivers, and kind people. Trees and flowers could be seen everywhere. The fruits there were very fresh. We stayed there for about one week. We went to Kunming, Dali, and the Old Town of Lijiang. We enjoyed the local food. We also went to climb Yulong Snow Mountain. The mountain was like a fairyland, and we couldn't stop taking photos. It was such an interesting trip that I will never forget it.
答案
The trip I will never forget
Last summer holiday, I took a trip to Yunnan with my family. Yunnan is in the southwestern part of our country. It is really a very good place with beautiful mountains, clean rivers, and kind people. Trees and flowers could be seen everywhere. The fruits there were very fresh. We stayed there for about one week. We went to Kunming, Dali, and the Old Town of Lijiang. We enjoyed the local food. We also went to climb Yulong Snow Mountain. The mountain was like a fairyland, and we couldn't stop taking photos. It was such an interesting trip that I will never forget it.
Last summer holiday, I took a trip to Yunnan with my family. Yunnan is in the southwestern part of our country. It is really a very good place with beautiful mountains, clean rivers, and kind people. Trees and flowers could be seen everywhere. The fruits there were very fresh. We stayed there for about one week. We went to Kunming, Dali, and the Old Town of Lijiang. We enjoyed the local food. We also went to climb Yulong Snow Mountain. The mountain was like a fairyland, and we couldn't stop taking photos. It was such an interesting trip that I will never forget it.
解析
本文是一篇记叙文写作题,要求以“The trip I will never forget”为题进行创作,需涵盖“哪次旅行难忘、旅行经历、旅行感受”三个要点。写作时态以一般过去时为主,人称采用第一人称,可适当发挥内容,运用合适的连接词增强文章连贯性,完成后需检查拼写、语法等错误。
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