二、书面表达。
你校的英语之星社团将于国庆节期间为成员提供兼职(a part-time job)体验。请根据图表内容和要点提示用英语写一篇演讲稿,谈谈你的选择。

要点提示:
1. Which part-time job would you like to do?
2. Why do you want to try this job?
3. What do you need to do in this job?
要求:
1. 根据所给要点提示,写一篇短文,词数不少于80(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁;
3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名。
Hello, everyone. I’m happy to share my ideas with you. I would like a part-time job as
你校的英语之星社团将于国庆节期间为成员提供兼职(a part-time job)体验。请根据图表内容和要点提示用英语写一篇演讲稿,谈谈你的选择。
要点提示:
1. Which part-time job would you like to do?
2. Why do you want to try this job?
3. What do you need to do in this job?
要求:
1. 根据所给要点提示,写一篇短文,词数不少于80(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁;
3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名。
Hello, everyone. I’m happy to share my ideas with you. I would like a part-time job as
a photographer.
I want to try this job because I enjoy taking pictures and keeping beautiful moments. It makes me feel happy and proud.
As a photographer, I need to learn how to use different cameras, understand lighting, and edit photos to make them look their best.
I hope to improve my skills and have my own photo show one day.
Thank you for listening.
答案
Hello, everyone. I'm happy to share my ideas with you. I would like a part-time job as a photographer.
I want to try this job because I enjoy taking pictures and keeping beautiful moments. It makes me feel happy and proud. As a photographer, I need to learn how to use different cameras, understand lighting, and edit photos to make them look their best.
I hope to improve my skills and have my own photo show one day.
Thank you for listening.
I want to try this job because I enjoy taking pictures and keeping beautiful moments. It makes me feel happy and proud. As a photographer, I need to learn how to use different cameras, understand lighting, and edit photos to make them look their best.
I hope to improve my skills and have my own photo show one day.
Thank you for listening.
解析
【分析】首先明确题目要求:需写一篇关于兼职选择的英语演讲稿,要覆盖三个核心要点:选择的兼职、选择原因、工作内容,且需结合图表中的职业(传统或现代均可)。第一步,从图表中选定合适职业,如参考答案选了传统职业“摄影师”;第二步,结合自身情况说明选择该职业的原因(如兴趣爱好);第三步,具体阐述该兼职需完成的工作内容;最后补充合理期望,结尾礼貌致谢,确保词数达标、无真实信息。
【解析】开头已给出,先点明选择的兼职为“a photographer”;接着说明原因:因喜欢拍照、记录美好瞬间,能带来快乐与成就感;再阐述工作内容:学习使用不同相机、了解光线知识、编辑照片优化效果;最后补充期望(提升技能、举办摄影展),结尾致谢,保证语言流畅、要点完整,符合词数要求。
【答案】Hello, everyone. I'm happy to share my ideas with you. I would like a part-time job as a photographer.
I want to try this job because I enjoy taking pictures and keeping beautiful moments. It makes me feel happy and proud. As a photographer, I need to learn how to use different cameras, understand lighting, and edit photos to make them look their best.
I hope to improve my skills and have my own photo show one day.
Thank you for listening.
【知识点】英语书面表达;职业类词汇;演讲稿写作
【点评】本文严格遵循题目要求,要点齐全,语言流畅自然,结合图表中的传统职业,原因贴合实际,工作内容具体可行,结尾礼貌,符合英语演讲稿的格式,是一篇优秀范文。
【难度系数】0.3
【解析】开头已给出,先点明选择的兼职为“a photographer”;接着说明原因:因喜欢拍照、记录美好瞬间,能带来快乐与成就感;再阐述工作内容:学习使用不同相机、了解光线知识、编辑照片优化效果;最后补充期望(提升技能、举办摄影展),结尾致谢,保证语言流畅、要点完整,符合词数要求。
【答案】Hello, everyone. I'm happy to share my ideas with you. I would like a part-time job as a photographer.
I want to try this job because I enjoy taking pictures and keeping beautiful moments. It makes me feel happy and proud. As a photographer, I need to learn how to use different cameras, understand lighting, and edit photos to make them look their best.
I hope to improve my skills and have my own photo show one day.
Thank you for listening.
【知识点】英语书面表达;职业类词汇;演讲稿写作
【点评】本文严格遵循题目要求,要点齐全,语言流畅自然,结合图表中的传统职业,原因贴合实际,工作内容具体可行,结尾礼貌,符合英语演讲稿的格式,是一篇优秀范文。
【难度系数】0.3
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