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根据写作指导,完成写作训练。
• 写作任务:Describe a different kind of help through hobby sharing.
• 写作要求:参考示例课文 Emma’s
adventure 的结构和技巧,描述你或朋友如何通过分享爱好(如教朋友画画、一起唱歌、分享读书心得等)来帮助他人获得快乐或信心,并最终感受到幸福。
• 写作指导:
步骤1:通过回答以下问题来整理你的想法。
(1)Who is in the story?(例:My classmate/friend...)
(2)Where does the story happen?(例:In the art room)
(3)What challenge or problem do you see someone facing?(例:feels unhappy because...)
(4)What is your idea? And what do you do to help?(例:sit down and start drawing flowers)
(5)How do you feel?(例:fun,happy because my hobby helps...)
步骤2:撰写和修改。
(1)将第一步的句子组合成一个合乎逻辑的完整的短故事(60~80词);
(2)为你的故事拟一个好标题,例如:“Drawing Smiles Together”。
步骤3:评估并改进。
(1)内容:包含问题中的所有关键点;
(2)语言:句子清晰,语法正确(使用一般过去时)
(3)帮助描述:清楚地说明了如何通过分享爱好来帮助他人;
(4)感受:包括双方的感受描述。
步骤4:分享你的故事。
在课堂上与同学们分享你的故事,并听取同学们的评价。
根据写作指导,完成写作训练。
• 写作任务:Describe a different kind of help through hobby sharing.
• 写作要求:参考示例课文 Emma’s
adventure 的结构和技巧,描述你或朋友如何通过分享爱好(如教朋友画画、一起唱歌、分享读书心得等)来帮助他人获得快乐或信心,并最终感受到幸福。
• 写作指导:
步骤1:通过回答以下问题来整理你的想法。
(1)Who is in the story?(例:My classmate/friend...)
(2)Where does the story happen?(例:In the art room)
(3)What challenge or problem do you see someone facing?(例:feels unhappy because...)
(4)What is your idea? And what do you do to help?(例:sit down and start drawing flowers)
(5)How do you feel?(例:fun,happy because my hobby helps...)
步骤2:撰写和修改。
(1)将第一步的句子组合成一个合乎逻辑的完整的短故事(60~80词);
(2)为你的故事拟一个好标题,例如:“Drawing Smiles Together”。
步骤3:评估并改进。
(1)内容:包含问题中的所有关键点;
(2)语言:句子清晰,语法正确(使用一般过去时)
(3)帮助描述:清楚地说明了如何通过分享爱好来帮助他人;
(4)感受:包括双方的感受描述。
步骤4:分享你的故事。
在课堂上与同学们分享你的故事,并听取同学们的评价。
答案
A drawing, a smile
I love drawing. One day, I see my friend Betty looking sad in the art room. An idea hits me. I feel a little nervous, but I say, “Let's draw together.”
We start with easy flowers. Something wonderful happens—Betty's picture becomes colourful and bright. She smiles happily.
This is an important lesson for me. Sharing my hobby helps my friend feel happy. It is a simple thing, but it makes us closer friends.
I love drawing. One day, I see my friend Betty looking sad in the art room. An idea hits me. I feel a little nervous, but I say, “Let's draw together.”
We start with easy flowers. Something wonderful happens—Betty's picture becomes colourful and bright. She smiles happily.
This is an important lesson for me. Sharing my hobby helps my friend feel happy. It is a simple thing, but it makes us closer friends.
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