三、书面表达。
假如校英文报正在开展以“Animalsin Danger”为主题的征文活动,请你根据以下要点提示,写一篇短文投稿,先介绍一种濒危动物,再谈谈它们濒危的原因以及保护它们的措施。可适当发挥,不少于80词。
写作要点:
1. What kind of animal is in danger?
2. Why are they in danger?
3. How can we protect them?
假如校英文报正在开展以“Animalsin Danger”为主题的征文活动,请你根据以下要点提示,写一篇短文投稿,先介绍一种濒危动物,再谈谈它们濒危的原因以及保护它们的措施。可适当发挥,不少于80词。
写作要点:
1. What kind of animal is in danger?
2. Why are they in danger?
3. How can we protect them?
Asian elephants are big and friendly animals. They are the largest land animals in Asia. They have long trunks and big ears. They usually live in forests in South and Southeast Asia.
Now, Asian elephants are in danger. People cut down too many trees, so elephants are losing their homes. Also, some bad people kill them for their ivory.
What can we do to help them? First, the government should make laws to stop people from killing Asian elephants. Then, we can tell people not to buy things made of ivory. We can also join groups to plant trees and help save their homes.
Let's do our part in protecting Asian elephants!
答案
Asian elephants are big and friendly animals. They are the largest land animals in Asia. They have long trunks and big ears. They usually live in forests in South and Southeast Asia.
Now, Asian elephants are in danger. People cut down too many trees, so elephants are losing their homes. Also, some bad people kill them for their ivory.
What can we do to help them? First, the government should make laws to stop people from killing Asian elephants. Then, we can tell people not to buy things made of ivory. We can also join groups to plant trees and help save their homes.
Let's do our part in protecting Asian elephants!
Now, Asian elephants are in danger. People cut down too many trees, so elephants are losing their homes. Also, some bad people kill them for their ivory.
What can we do to help them? First, the government should make laws to stop people from killing Asian elephants. Then, we can tell people not to buy things made of ivory. We can also join groups to plant trees and help save their homes.
Let's do our part in protecting Asian elephants!
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达题,主题是“Animals in Danger”,要求介绍一种濒危动物、说明其濒危原因及保护措施,字数不少于80词。解题思路:首先选定常见的濒危动物(如亚洲象),对应三个写作要点依次组织内容:先描述动物的基本特征与分布,再分析濒危的原因,最后提出具体的保护措施,确保语句通顺、要点齐全、符合征文要求。
【解析】
1. 开篇介绍亚洲象:说明其体型、特征、分布区域,引出主题;
2. 阐述濒危原因:人类砍伐森林导致亚洲象失去栖息地,偷猎者为获取象牙猎杀它们;
3. 提出保护措施:政府制定法律禁止猎杀,公众拒绝购买象牙制品,参与植树保护栖息地;
4. 结尾呼吁大家共同保护亚洲象,完成征文。
【答案】
Asian elephants are big and friendly animals. They are the largest land animals in Asia. They have long trunks and big ears. They usually live in forests in South and Southeast Asia.
Now, Asian elephants are in danger. People cut down too many trees, so elephants are losing their homes. Also, some bad people kill them for their ivory.
What can we do to help them? First, the government should make laws to stop people from killing Asian elephants. Then, we can tell people not to buy things made of ivory. We can also join groups to plant trees and help save their homes.
Let's do our part in protecting Asian elephants!
【知识点】
英语书面表达、濒危动物话题、英语段落组织
【点评】
本文紧扣主题,完整覆盖所有写作要点,结构清晰(介绍-原因-措施-呼吁),语言流畅自然,用词准确恰当,符合校英文报征文的要求,能有效传递保护濒危动物的理念。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语书面表达题,主题是“Animals in Danger”,要求介绍一种濒危动物、说明其濒危原因及保护措施,字数不少于80词。解题思路:首先选定常见的濒危动物(如亚洲象),对应三个写作要点依次组织内容:先描述动物的基本特征与分布,再分析濒危的原因,最后提出具体的保护措施,确保语句通顺、要点齐全、符合征文要求。
【解析】
1. 开篇介绍亚洲象:说明其体型、特征、分布区域,引出主题;
2. 阐述濒危原因:人类砍伐森林导致亚洲象失去栖息地,偷猎者为获取象牙猎杀它们;
3. 提出保护措施:政府制定法律禁止猎杀,公众拒绝购买象牙制品,参与植树保护栖息地;
4. 结尾呼吁大家共同保护亚洲象,完成征文。
【答案】
Asian elephants are big and friendly animals. They are the largest land animals in Asia. They have long trunks and big ears. They usually live in forests in South and Southeast Asia.
Now, Asian elephants are in danger. People cut down too many trees, so elephants are losing their homes. Also, some bad people kill them for their ivory.
What can we do to help them? First, the government should make laws to stop people from killing Asian elephants. Then, we can tell people not to buy things made of ivory. We can also join groups to plant trees and help save their homes.
Let's do our part in protecting Asian elephants!
【知识点】
英语书面表达、濒危动物话题、英语段落组织
【点评】
本文紧扣主题,完整覆盖所有写作要点,结构清晰(介绍-原因-措施-呼吁),语言流畅自然,用词准确恰当,符合校英文报征文的要求,能有效传递保护濒危动物的理念。
【难度系数】
0.5
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