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76. 假设你是李华,将参加学校的“Meaningful Chores”主题演讲比赛。请写一篇英语短文,分享你印象深刻的一次做家务的经历,并说明你的收获。
要求:(1) 80—100词左右；
(2) 不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。
Good morning, everyone!
要求:(1) 80—100词左右；
(2) 不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。
Good morning, everyone!
答案
76. One possible version:
Good morning, everyone! I'm Li Hua. Today I'd like to share how helping with housework has taught me life lessons.
Last summer holiday, I volunteered to do the dishes after dinner. At first, I thought it would be easy. To my surprise, it needed lots of skills. At first, I added lots of dish soap into the water. The sink was full of bubbles at once. As a result, the dishes became so slippery that I nearly broke a bowl. Slowly, I learnt some proper tricks, like controlling water temperature. Finally, it took me almost an hour to clean up all the mess.
It made me realize that even small things in life need patience and skills. Doing chores helps to develop our independence. Everyone should play a part in sharing the housework.
Thank you!
Good morning, everyone! I'm Li Hua. Today I'd like to share how helping with housework has taught me life lessons.
Last summer holiday, I volunteered to do the dishes after dinner. At first, I thought it would be easy. To my surprise, it needed lots of skills. At first, I added lots of dish soap into the water. The sink was full of bubbles at once. As a result, the dishes became so slippery that I nearly broke a bowl. Slowly, I learnt some proper tricks, like controlling water temperature. Finally, it took me almost an hour to clean up all the mess.
It made me realize that even small things in life need patience and skills. Doing chores helps to develop our independence. Everyone should play a part in sharing the housework.
Thank you!
解析
【分析】
本题要求写一篇以“Meaningful Chores”为主题的英语演讲稿，需分享一次印象深刻的做家务经历并阐述收获，词数80—100，不得出现真实信息。解题思路：① 开头部分：问候听众，自我介绍并引出演讲主题；② 主体部分：选取具体家务经历，描述过程中的细节（如遇到的困难、解决过程），体现做家务的意义；③ 结尾部分：点明从经历中获得的收获，呼吁大家分担家务，符合演讲的感染力要求，同时控制词数。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：1. 开头：用标准演讲问候语“Good morning, everyone!”，点明身份并引出主题；2. 主体：选取洗碗的经历，描述过程：起初以为简单，实际需要技巧（如放太多洗洁精导致碗滑差点摔碎），慢慢学会方法，耗时近一小时完成；3. 结尾：点明收获（小事需耐心，做家务培养独立），呼吁大家分担家务，最后用“Thank you!”结束演讲，确保词数在要求范围内，无真实信息。
【答案】
One possible version:
Good morning, everyone! I'm Li Hua. Today I'd like to share how helping with housework has taught me life lessons.
Last summer holiday, I volunteered to do the dishes after dinner. At first, I thought it would be easy. To my surprise, it needed lots of skills. At first, I added lots of dish soap into the water. The sink was full of bubbles at once. As a result, the dishes became so slippery that I nearly broke a bowl. Slowly, I learnt some proper tricks, like controlling water temperature. Finally, it took me almost an hour to clean up all the mess.
It made me realize that even small things in life need patience and skills. Doing chores helps to develop our independence. Everyone should play a part in sharing the housework.
Thank you!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、话题类英语写作、英语写作结构
【点评】
该范文紧扣主题，结构清晰，有具体事例支撑，收获明确，语言流畅自然，符合演讲稿的格式要求，词数达标，很好地完成了题目要求的任务。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题要求写一篇以“Meaningful Chores”为主题的英语演讲稿，需分享一次印象深刻的做家务经历并阐述收获，词数80—100，不得出现真实信息。解题思路：① 开头部分：问候听众，自我介绍并引出演讲主题；② 主体部分：选取具体家务经历，描述过程中的细节（如遇到的困难、解决过程），体现做家务的意义；③ 结尾部分：点明从经历中获得的收获，呼吁大家分担家务，符合演讲的感染力要求，同时控制词数。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：1. 开头：用标准演讲问候语“Good morning, everyone!”，点明身份并引出主题；2. 主体：选取洗碗的经历，描述过程：起初以为简单，实际需要技巧（如放太多洗洁精导致碗滑差点摔碎），慢慢学会方法，耗时近一小时完成；3. 结尾：点明收获（小事需耐心，做家务培养独立），呼吁大家分担家务，最后用“Thank you!”结束演讲，确保词数在要求范围内，无真实信息。
【答案】
One possible version:
Good morning, everyone! I'm Li Hua. Today I'd like to share how helping with housework has taught me life lessons.
Last summer holiday, I volunteered to do the dishes after dinner. At first, I thought it would be easy. To my surprise, it needed lots of skills. At first, I added lots of dish soap into the water. The sink was full of bubbles at once. As a result, the dishes became so slippery that I nearly broke a bowl. Slowly, I learnt some proper tricks, like controlling water temperature. Finally, it took me almost an hour to clean up all the mess.
It made me realize that even small things in life need patience and skills. Doing chores helps to develop our independence. Everyone should play a part in sharing the housework.
Thank you!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、话题类英语写作、英语写作结构
【点评】
该范文紧扣主题，结构清晰，有具体事例支撑，收获明确，语言流畅自然，符合演讲稿的格式要求，词数达标，很好地完成了题目要求的任务。
【难度系数】
0.5
