十四 书面表达。(10分)
食物与我们的生活息息相关,它影响着我们的健康、文化和情感。请根据思维导图,写一写你最喜欢的食物。要求:包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥;不少于5句话。
1. What is your favourite food? 2. How does it look/taste/smell?

4. What are the health benefits(益处) of it? 3. Why do you like it?
食物与我们的生活息息相关,它影响着我们的健康、文化和情感。请根据思维导图,写一写你最喜欢的食物。要求:包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥;不少于5句话。
1. What is your favourite food? 2. How does it look/taste/smell?
4. What are the health benefits(益处) of it? 3. Why do you like it?
答案
参考范文:
My Favourite Food
My favourite food is tomato and egg noodles. It looks colourful with red tomatoes, yellow eggs and soft white noodles. It smells warm and delicious, and it tastes a little sweet. I love it because my mum often cooks it for me at weekends. Every time I eat it, I feel happy. It is also good for my health: Tomatoes are rich in vitamins, and eggs give me energy.
My Favourite Food
My favourite food is tomato and egg noodles. It looks colourful with red tomatoes, yellow eggs and soft white noodles. It smells warm and delicious, and it tastes a little sweet. I love it because my mum often cooks it for me at weekends. Every time I eat it, I feel happy. It is also good for my health: Tomatoes are rich in vitamins, and eggs give me energy.
解析
【分析】
这是一道英语书面表达题,要求围绕“My Favourite Food”主题,结合思维导图提示信息写作。解题思路:1. 确定自己最喜欢的食物;2. 依次描述食物的外观、气味、味道;3. 说明喜欢该食物的原因;4. 阐述其健康益处;5. 确保语句通顺,不少于5句话,覆盖所有提示要点。
【解析】
写作时需紧扣主题,按提示完成内容:①明确最喜欢的食物;②描述外观、气味、味道;③说明喜欢的理由;④介绍健康益处。参考范文依次完成各要点,结构清晰,语言自然,符合初中英语写作要求。
【答案】
My Favourite Food
My favourite food is tomato and egg noodles. It looks colourful with red tomatoes, yellow eggs and soft white noodles. It smells warm and delicious, and it tastes a little sweet. I love it because my mum often cooks it for me at weekends. Every time I eat it, I feel happy. It is also good for my health: Tomatoes are rich in vitamins, and eggs give me energy.
【知识点】
英语书面表达;话题写作
【点评】
该范文完整覆盖题目要求的所有提示信息,语句通顺,逻辑清晰,符合不少于5句话的要求,是一篇符合标准的书面表达范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
这是一道英语书面表达题,要求围绕“My Favourite Food”主题,结合思维导图提示信息写作。解题思路:1. 确定自己最喜欢的食物;2. 依次描述食物的外观、气味、味道;3. 说明喜欢该食物的原因;4. 阐述其健康益处;5. 确保语句通顺,不少于5句话,覆盖所有提示要点。
【解析】
写作时需紧扣主题,按提示完成内容:①明确最喜欢的食物;②描述外观、气味、味道;③说明喜欢的理由;④介绍健康益处。参考范文依次完成各要点,结构清晰,语言自然,符合初中英语写作要求。
【答案】
My Favourite Food
My favourite food is tomato and egg noodles. It looks colourful with red tomatoes, yellow eggs and soft white noodles. It smells warm and delicious, and it tastes a little sweet. I love it because my mum often cooks it for me at weekends. Every time I eat it, I feel happy. It is also good for my health: Tomatoes are rich in vitamins, and eggs give me energy.
【知识点】
英语书面表达;话题写作
【点评】
该范文完整覆盖题目要求的所有提示信息,语句通顺,逻辑清晰,符合不少于5句话的要求,是一篇符合标准的书面表达范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
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