Ⅲ.书面表达(共19分)
初中生活绚丽多彩,在近三年的磨砺中,你
们都变得越来越优秀,学习更加勤奋,与人相处
更加和谐。校报正在征集以“ To be a better
self "为题的英文作文,你决定分享自己的经验和
感受,谈一谈如何做更好的自己。
注意事项:1.围绕要点,合理展开,适当补充;
2.不得使用真实姓名,校名和地名;
3.词数不少于100,开头不计入总词数。
To be a better self
I am really proud that I have grown up and
achieved a lot in the past years.As a teenager,I
think the most important thing that we should
do is to make ourselves better persons.______
______
______
______
______
______
______
______
______
初中生活绚丽多彩,在近三年的磨砺中,你
们都变得越来越优秀,学习更加勤奋,与人相处
更加和谐。校报正在征集以“ To be a better
self "为题的英文作文,你决定分享自己的经验和
感受,谈一谈如何做更好的自己。
注意事项:1.围绕要点,合理展开,适当补充;
2.不得使用真实姓名,校名和地名;
3.词数不少于100,开头不计入总词数。
To be a better self
I am really proud that I have grown up and
achieved a lot in the past years.As a teenager,I
think the most important thing that we should
do is to make ourselves better persons.______
______
______
______
______
______
______
______
______
答案
One possible version:
To be a better self
I am really proud that I have grown up and achieved a lot in the past years. As a teenager, I think the most important thing that we should do is to make ourselves better persons. I'd love to share three methods of becoming a better self.
First of all, I do my best to improve my study. I manage my time reasonably. I go over what I have learned in time after class. Secondly, a good interpersonal relationship is also very important for us. I always listen to my friends patiently. In addition, I also encourage and help my friends when they meet difficulties. Last but not least, I am willing to take part in voluntary activities. I not only plant trees every year but also go to the old people's home to visit the elderly.
I hope my experiences are of some value to you. And I do believe you can become better and have a promising future.
【审题】本文是一篇材料作文,主要使用一般现在时和第一人称。同学们需要围绕要点,结合自己的经验和感受合理展开,适当补充要点并自行发挥。
【写作步骤】第一步,表明写作意图,以“为了成为更好的自己,应该要考虑以下三个方面”引出下文;第二步,按照要点提示展开阐述,注意多使用表示逻辑的词语,如 First of all, Moreover, Secondly, In addition 等,使文章连贯性更强,同时注意适当发挥;第三步,总结并祝愿可以成为更好的人以及拥有更好的未来。
【短语积累】①do my best to do sth 尽我最大能力做某事 ②good interpersonal relationship 好的人际关系 ③last but not least 最后但同样重要的
【高分句型】①I go over what I have learned in time after class.(what 引导的宾语从句) ②I also encourage and help my friends when they meet difficulties.(when 引导的时间状语从句)
To be a better self
I am really proud that I have grown up and achieved a lot in the past years. As a teenager, I think the most important thing that we should do is to make ourselves better persons. I'd love to share three methods of becoming a better self.
First of all, I do my best to improve my study. I manage my time reasonably. I go over what I have learned in time after class. Secondly, a good interpersonal relationship is also very important for us. I always listen to my friends patiently. In addition, I also encourage and help my friends when they meet difficulties. Last but not least, I am willing to take part in voluntary activities. I not only plant trees every year but also go to the old people's home to visit the elderly.
I hope my experiences are of some value to you. And I do believe you can become better and have a promising future.
【审题】本文是一篇材料作文,主要使用一般现在时和第一人称。同学们需要围绕要点,结合自己的经验和感受合理展开,适当补充要点并自行发挥。
【写作步骤】第一步,表明写作意图,以“为了成为更好的自己,应该要考虑以下三个方面”引出下文;第二步,按照要点提示展开阐述,注意多使用表示逻辑的词语,如 First of all, Moreover, Secondly, In addition 等,使文章连贯性更强,同时注意适当发挥;第三步,总结并祝愿可以成为更好的人以及拥有更好的未来。
【短语积累】①do my best to do sth 尽我最大能力做某事 ②good interpersonal relationship 好的人际关系 ③last but not least 最后但同样重要的
【高分句型】①I go over what I have learned in time after class.(what 引导的宾语从句) ②I also encourage and help my friends when they meet difficulties.(when 引导的时间状语从句)
