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写作实战 答案（含基础版范文和进阶版范文）D46
假如你叫李华，来自山东省潍坊市。你的美国笔友Jack得知你市是风筝之乡，他对风筝很感兴趣，于是给你发来一封电子邮件，想让你给他介绍一些风筝的相关情况。请你根据下面的提示给他回复邮件。
提示:1.潍坊被誉为“世界风筝之都”,风筝制作已有2000多年的历史；
2.制作需要竹子、纸、细绳等材料,形状有花、动物等,造型精美,色彩鲜艳；
3.风筝过去用于送信,而现在用来娱乐和锻炼；
4.每年4月,潍坊都会举办国际风筝节,吸引来自世界各地的风筝爱好者；
5.风筝不仅是一件传统艺术品,也象征着人们对美好生活的祝愿。
要求:1.文章包含以上要点,可适当发挥;2.条理清楚,语句通顺,语法正确;3.词数100左右,开头和结尾已给出(不计入总词数)。
提示词:世界风筝之都 the kite capital of the world;细绳 string
Dear Jack,
How are you doing these days? I’m excited to hear from you. I’d like to tell you something about kites in my city.
Yours,
Li Hua
假如你叫李华，来自山东省潍坊市。你的美国笔友Jack得知你市是风筝之乡，他对风筝很感兴趣，于是给你发来一封电子邮件，想让你给他介绍一些风筝的相关情况。请你根据下面的提示给他回复邮件。
提示:1.潍坊被誉为“世界风筝之都”,风筝制作已有2000多年的历史；
2.制作需要竹子、纸、细绳等材料,形状有花、动物等,造型精美,色彩鲜艳；
3.风筝过去用于送信,而现在用来娱乐和锻炼；
4.每年4月,潍坊都会举办国际风筝节,吸引来自世界各地的风筝爱好者；
5.风筝不仅是一件传统艺术品,也象征着人们对美好生活的祝愿。
要求:1.文章包含以上要点,可适当发挥;2.条理清楚,语句通顺,语法正确;3.词数100左右,开头和结尾已给出(不计入总词数)。
提示词:世界风筝之都 the kite capital of the world;细绳 string
Dear Jack,
How are you doing these days? I’m excited to hear from you. I’d like to tell you something about kites in my city.
Weifang is known as the kite capital of the world. It has a history of over 2,000 years in kite making. Kites are usually made from bamboo, paper and string. They come in beautiful shapes like flowers or animals. They usually have bright colors. In the past, kites were used to send messages, but now people fly them for fun and exercise.
Every April, the International Kite Festival is held here. A lot of kite lovers from all over the world will come here and take part in the festival.
Kites are not only traditional artworks but also stand for people's wishes for a better life.
I hope you can come to Weifang and learn more about kites and the festival here.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
主题写作专项
＞ 基础版范文
Dear Jack,
How are you doing these days? I'm excited to hear from you. I'd like to tell you something about kites in my city.
Weifang is known as the kite capital of the world. It has a history of over 2,000 years in kite making. Kites are usually made from bamboo, paper and string. They come in beautiful shapes like flowers or animals. They usually have bright colors. In the past, kites were used to send messages, but now people fly them for fun and exercise. Every April, the International Kite Festival is held here. A lot of kite lovers from all over the world will come here and take part in the festival. Kites are not only traditional artworks but also stand for people's wishes for a better life.
I hope you can come to Weifang and learn more about kites and the festival here.
Yours,
Li Hua
＞ 进阶版范文
Dear Jack,
How are you doing these days? I'm excited to hear from you. I'd like to tell you something about kites in my city.
Weifang, known as the kite capital of the world, has a history of over 2,000 years in kite making. Traditional kites are usually made from different materials such as bamboo, paper and string. We can see different kites which come in beautiful shapes like flowers or animals and are often painted in bright colors. In the past, kites were used to send messages, but now people fly them for fun and exercise. In Weifang, there is an international festival which is related to kites. Every April, the International Kite Festival is held here, attracting a lot of kite lovers from all over the world. Kites are not only traditional artworks but also stand for people's wishes for a better life.
If you have the chance, you can visit Weifang to learn more about its rich kite culture and experience the lively festival yourself.
Yours,
Li Hua
＞ 基础版范文
Dear Jack,
How are you doing these days? I'm excited to hear from you. I'd like to tell you something about kites in my city.
Weifang is known as the kite capital of the world. It has a history of over 2,000 years in kite making. Kites are usually made from bamboo, paper and string. They come in beautiful shapes like flowers or animals. They usually have bright colors. In the past, kites were used to send messages, but now people fly them for fun and exercise. Every April, the International Kite Festival is held here. A lot of kite lovers from all over the world will come here and take part in the festival. Kites are not only traditional artworks but also stand for people's wishes for a better life.
I hope you can come to Weifang and learn more about kites and the festival here.
Yours,
Li Hua
＞ 进阶版范文
Dear Jack,
How are you doing these days? I'm excited to hear from you. I'd like to tell you something about kites in my city.
Weifang, known as the kite capital of the world, has a history of over 2,000 years in kite making. Traditional kites are usually made from different materials such as bamboo, paper and string. We can see different kites which come in beautiful shapes like flowers or animals and are often painted in bright colors. In the past, kites were used to send messages, but now people fly them for fun and exercise. In Weifang, there is an international festival which is related to kites. Every April, the International Kite Festival is held here, attracting a lot of kite lovers from all over the world. Kites are not only traditional artworks but also stand for people's wishes for a better life.
If you have the chance, you can visit Weifang to learn more about its rich kite culture and experience the lively festival yourself.
Yours,
Li Hua
