七 书面表达。(7分)
Amy 想在妈妈的下一个生日来临之前为她策划一个难忘的生日。假如你是 Amy,请写一下你的计划,不少于五句话。参考词汇:a birthday party,a birthday cake,cook,make a card,clean the house,do some housework,say “Thank you!” ...
Amy 想在妈妈的下一个生日来临之前为她策划一个难忘的生日。假如你是 Amy,请写一下你的计划,不少于五句话。参考词汇:a birthday party,a birthday cake,cook,make a card,clean the house,do some housework,say “Thank you!” ...
答案
参考范文:
My mother's birthday is coming. It's on July 2nd. My family will have a birthday party for her. In the morning, my father and I will cook birthday noodles for Mother. And I will say "Thank you!" to her. Then we will do the housework. In the afternoon, my father will go shopping for food and drinks for the party. And I will make a birthday cake. At the party, we will play games, play music, sing and dance. All of us will have a good time!
My mother's birthday is coming. It's on July 2nd. My family will have a birthday party for her. In the morning, my father and I will cook birthday noodles for Mother. And I will say "Thank you!" to her. Then we will do the housework. In the afternoon, my father will go shopping for food and drinks for the party. And I will make a birthday cake. At the party, we will play games, play music, sing and dance. All of us will have a good time!
解析
【分析】
本题要求以Amy的身份为妈妈策划难忘的生日,需围绕生日计划展开,不少于五句话,要运用参考词汇。解题思路:1. 先点明妈妈生日即将到来,引出主题;2. 分时段(早上、下午、派对时)安排具体活动,用到参考词汇(如做饭、做蛋糕、做家务、办派对等);3. 加入对妈妈的感谢,最后说明大家会开心,全程用一般将来时表达计划,确保内容连贯、符合要求。
【解析】
My mother's birthday is coming. It's on July 2nd. My family will have a birthday party for her. In the morning, my father and I will cook birthday noodles for Mother. And I will say "Thank you!" to her. Then we will do the housework. In the afternoon, my father will go shopping for food and drinks for the party. And I will make a birthday cake. At the party, we will play games, play music, sing and dance. All of us will have a good time!
【答案】
My mother's birthday is coming. It's on July 2nd. My family will have a birthday party for her. In the morning, my father and I will cook birthday noodles for Mother. And I will say "Thank you!" to her. Then we will do the housework. In the afternoon, my father will go shopping for food and drinks for the party. And I will make a birthday cake. At the party, we will play games, play music, sing and dance. All of us will have a good time!
【知识点】
一般将来时、英语书面表达、话题词汇运用
【点评】
范文紧扣主题,以Amy的视角分时段规划生日活动,合理运用参考词汇,语句通顺,情感真挚,符合初中英语书面表达的要求,内容具体充实。
【难度系数】
0.7
本题要求以Amy的身份为妈妈策划难忘的生日,需围绕生日计划展开,不少于五句话,要运用参考词汇。解题思路:1. 先点明妈妈生日即将到来,引出主题;2. 分时段(早上、下午、派对时)安排具体活动,用到参考词汇(如做饭、做蛋糕、做家务、办派对等);3. 加入对妈妈的感谢,最后说明大家会开心,全程用一般将来时表达计划,确保内容连贯、符合要求。
【解析】
My mother's birthday is coming. It's on July 2nd. My family will have a birthday party for her. In the morning, my father and I will cook birthday noodles for Mother. And I will say "Thank you!" to her. Then we will do the housework. In the afternoon, my father will go shopping for food and drinks for the party. And I will make a birthday cake. At the party, we will play games, play music, sing and dance. All of us will have a good time!
【答案】
My mother's birthday is coming. It's on July 2nd. My family will have a birthday party for her. In the morning, my father and I will cook birthday noodles for Mother. And I will say "Thank you!" to her. Then we will do the housework. In the afternoon, my father will go shopping for food and drinks for the party. And I will make a birthday cake. At the party, we will play games, play music, sing and dance. All of us will have a good time!
【知识点】
一般将来时、英语书面表达、话题词汇运用
【点评】
范文紧扣主题,以Amy的视角分时段规划生日活动,合理运用参考词汇,语句通顺,情感真挚,符合初中英语书面表达的要求,内容具体充实。
【难度系数】
0.7
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