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(2025·江苏泰州姜堰第四中学期中)根据所给中文提示，以“The changes in my hometown”为题，写一篇100词左右的短文。
【提示】
1. 我的家乡是一个古老而美丽的城市，过去城市很小，人们常常步行或骑自行车出行……
2. 但近年发生了很大的变化(从生活、交通等方面阐述)，每年有成千上万来自世界各地的游客……
3. 为家乡的变化感到欣喜……
【要求】
1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯。
2. 必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥。
3. 词数100左右。
4. 不得使用真实姓名。
The changes in my hometown
(2025·江苏泰州姜堰第四中学期中)根据所给中文提示，以“The changes in my hometown”为题，写一篇100词左右的短文。
【提示】
1. 我的家乡是一个古老而美丽的城市，过去城市很小，人们常常步行或骑自行车出行……
2. 但近年发生了很大的变化(从生活、交通等方面阐述)，每年有成千上万来自世界各地的游客……
3. 为家乡的变化感到欣喜……
【要求】
1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯。
2. 必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥。
3. 词数100左右。
4. 不得使用真实姓名。
The changes in my hometown
One possible version
The changes in my hometown
My hometown is an old and beautiful city. In the past, my hometown was very small. People used to live a poor life. The houses used to be old and small. The traffic used to be not convenient. They used to walk or ride to town, but the mountains were greener. They enjoyed a clearer sky.
Now great changes have taken place in my hometown. People live a better life. Their houses are large and bright. Many people have their own cars. People can take a bus or a taxi to the town. But the air is not as fresh as before, and there are fewer trees. Now we all know protecting the environment is very important. Every year, thousands of visitors from all over the world come to visit my hometown.
I'm sure my hometown will become better and better in the future!
The changes in my hometown
My hometown is an old and beautiful city. In the past, my hometown was very small. People used to live a poor life. The houses used to be old and small. The traffic used to be not convenient. They used to walk or ride to town, but the mountains were greener. They enjoyed a clearer sky.
Now great changes have taken place in my hometown. People live a better life. Their houses are large and bright. Many people have their own cars. People can take a bus or a taxi to the town. But the air is not as fresh as before, and there are fewer trees. Now we all know protecting the environment is very important. Every year, thousands of visitors from all over the world come to visit my hometown.
I'm sure my hometown will become better and better in the future!
答案
One possible version
The changes in my hometown
My hometown is an old and beautiful city. In the past, my hometown was very small. People used to live a poor life. The houses used to be old and small. The traffic used to be not convenient. They used to walk or ride to town, but the mountains were greener. They enjoyed a clearer sky.
Now great changes have taken place in my hometown. People live a better life. Their houses are large and bright. Many people have their own cars. People can take a bus or a taxi to the town. But the air is not as fresh as before, and there are fewer trees. Now we all know protecting the environment is very important. Every year, thousands of visitors from all over the world come to visit my hometown.
I'm sure my hometown will become better and better in the future!
The changes in my hometown
My hometown is an old and beautiful city. In the past, my hometown was very small. People used to live a poor life. The houses used to be old and small. The traffic used to be not convenient. They used to walk or ride to town, but the mountains were greener. They enjoyed a clearer sky.
Now great changes have taken place in my hometown. People live a better life. Their houses are large and bright. Many people have their own cars. People can take a bus or a taxi to the town. But the air is not as fresh as before, and there are fewer trees. Now we all know protecting the environment is very important. Every year, thousands of visitors from all over the world come to visit my hometown.
I'm sure my hometown will become better and better in the future!
解析
【分析】
首先拿到这道写作题先明确核心要求：主题是家乡的变化，词数100左右，必须覆盖所有提示信息。解题思路可以按照时间线梳理逻辑：第一步先开篇介绍家乡的基本属性，对应提示里“古老而美丽的城市”的要求，接着描述过去家乡的状态，点明过去城市规模小、人们出行靠步行或骑自行车的特点；第二步转而描述近年的变化，从生活水平提升、交通更便利两个维度展开，补充提示里“成千上万世界各地游客来访”的信息，还可以适当增加合理细节让内容更饱满；最后收尾抒发对家乡变化的欣喜之情，适当展望未来。写作时注意区分描述过去的一般过去时，和描述当下变化的现在完成时、一般现在时，保证语法正确，上下文连贯。
【解析】
这篇短文可以按照“过去-现在-感受”的三层结构完成：
1. 开篇引入：先点明我的家乡是一座古老美丽的城市，接着用used to的结构描述过去的状态：过去城市规模很小，人们过去生活条件普通，房屋老旧狭小，出行只能靠步行或者骑自行车，交通十分不便。
2. 主体阐述变化：用“great changes have taken place”作为过渡句，引出近年的改变：人们的生活水平大幅提升，房屋宽敞明亮，很多家庭有了私家车，公交、出租车等出行选择十分丰富，每年都有成千上万来自全球各地的游客前来游玩，同时可以补充大家现在越来越重视环境保护的细节，让内容更真实。
3. 结尾收尾：表达自己为家乡的变化感到十分自豪，相信未来家乡会发展得越来越好。
最后通读全文，检查所有提示要点是否都覆盖，语法是否有误，调整词数到100词左右即可。
【答案】
One possible version
The changes in my hometown
My hometown is an old and beautiful city. In the past, my hometown was very small. People used to live a poor life. The houses used to be old and small. The traffic used to be not convenient. They used to walk or ride to town, but the mountains were greener. They enjoyed a clearer sky.
Now great changes have taken place in my hometown. People live a better life. Their houses are large and bright. Many people have their own cars. People can take a bus or a taxi to the town. But the air is not as fresh as before, and there are fewer trees. Now we all know protecting the environment is very important. Every year, thousands of visitors from all over the world come to visit my hometown.
I'm sure my hometown will become better and better in the future!
【知识点】
提纲类英语写作
一般过去时应用
现在完成时应用
【点评】
本文严格按照时间顺序行文，逻辑脉络清晰，完整覆盖了题干给出的全部提示要点，时态切换准确自然，从生活、交通多个维度对比了家乡的今昔差异，补充的环保相关细节让内容更有真实感，上下文衔接流畅，完全符合题目对内容、词数的各项要求，是一篇合格的初中英语习作。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先拿到这道写作题先明确核心要求：主题是家乡的变化，词数100左右，必须覆盖所有提示信息。解题思路可以按照时间线梳理逻辑：第一步先开篇介绍家乡的基本属性，对应提示里“古老而美丽的城市”的要求，接着描述过去家乡的状态，点明过去城市规模小、人们出行靠步行或骑自行车的特点；第二步转而描述近年的变化，从生活水平提升、交通更便利两个维度展开，补充提示里“成千上万世界各地游客来访”的信息，还可以适当增加合理细节让内容更饱满；最后收尾抒发对家乡变化的欣喜之情，适当展望未来。写作时注意区分描述过去的一般过去时，和描述当下变化的现在完成时、一般现在时，保证语法正确，上下文连贯。
【解析】
这篇短文可以按照“过去-现在-感受”的三层结构完成：
1. 开篇引入：先点明我的家乡是一座古老美丽的城市，接着用used to的结构描述过去的状态：过去城市规模很小，人们过去生活条件普通，房屋老旧狭小，出行只能靠步行或者骑自行车，交通十分不便。
2. 主体阐述变化：用“great changes have taken place”作为过渡句，引出近年的改变：人们的生活水平大幅提升，房屋宽敞明亮，很多家庭有了私家车，公交、出租车等出行选择十分丰富，每年都有成千上万来自全球各地的游客前来游玩，同时可以补充大家现在越来越重视环境保护的细节，让内容更真实。
3. 结尾收尾：表达自己为家乡的变化感到十分自豪，相信未来家乡会发展得越来越好。
最后通读全文，检查所有提示要点是否都覆盖，语法是否有误，调整词数到100词左右即可。
【答案】
One possible version
The changes in my hometown
My hometown is an old and beautiful city. In the past, my hometown was very small. People used to live a poor life. The houses used to be old and small. The traffic used to be not convenient. They used to walk or ride to town, but the mountains were greener. They enjoyed a clearer sky.
Now great changes have taken place in my hometown. People live a better life. Their houses are large and bright. Many people have their own cars. People can take a bus or a taxi to the town. But the air is not as fresh as before, and there are fewer trees. Now we all know protecting the environment is very important. Every year, thousands of visitors from all over the world come to visit my hometown.
I'm sure my hometown will become better and better in the future!
【知识点】
提纲类英语写作
一般过去时应用
现在完成时应用
【点评】
本文严格按照时间顺序行文，逻辑脉络清晰，完整覆盖了题干给出的全部提示要点，时态切换准确自然，从生活、交通多个维度对比了家乡的今昔差异，补充的环保相关细节让内容更有真实感，上下文衔接流畅，完全符合题目对内容、词数的各项要求，是一篇合格的初中英语习作。
【难度系数】
0.7
