假如你是李辉，最近你收到了外国好友 Mike 的电子邮件，请你根据该邮件内容给 Mike 回复。

注意：
1. 邮件必须回复上述邮件中提出的所有问题，并适当发挥；
2. 词数为80左右；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4. 邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,
I’m glad to hear from you.







Hope you’ll have a good time next month!
Yours,
Li Hui
【写作评价】

| | 分项 | 自评分 | 互评分 | 老师评分 |
| --- | --- | --- | --- | --- |
| 内容分布（8分） | 1. 四季的天气特征（2分） | | | |
| | 2. 每个季节的活动（4分） | | | |
| | 3. 你最喜欢的季节及原因（2分） | | | |
| 文体特征和结构（3分） | 1. 文体特征（1分） | | | |
| | 2. 结构完整（1分） | | | |
| | 3. 逻辑清晰，衔接自然（1分） | | | |
| 语言质量（3分） | 第一档：表达自然得体，用词准确丰富（3分） | | | |
| | 第二档：语言尚可，较准确，少量错误（2分） | | | |
| | 第三档：错误较多（1分） | | | |
| 卷面（1分） | 不影响正常阅读识别，不扣分（1分） | | | |
| 总分（15分） | | | | |

Writing
One possible version:
Dear Mike,
I'm glad to hear from you. My hometown is in the north-east of China. There are four seasons in my hometown.
It is warm and windy in spring. Everything turns green. It is exciting to climb mountains in spring. The weather is hot in summer. The Sun shines brightly. People like to go to the beach and swim in the sea. In autumn, leaves turn brown, red or yellow. It is nice to go on a picnic at this time of year because the weather is cool. It is cold and snowy in winter. Sometimes it snows, so people stay at home and enjoy the beautiful scenery.
I love winter best because I can play in the snow and make snowmen with my friends. It's really fun!
Hope you'll have a good time next month!
Yours,
Li Hui

【分析】本题要求给外国好友Mike写一封回信，需覆盖三个核心要点：介绍家乡四季的天气特征、每个季节对应的活动、自己最喜欢的季节及原因。写作时要遵循邮件格式（开头结尾已给出），词数控制在80左右，不得出现真实信息，语言需自然得体、衔接连贯，确保所有要求的要点都被体现。
【解析】写作步骤：1. 承接开头，引出家乡有四季；2. 依次描述各季节：春季温暖多风，适合爬山；夏季炎热，适合去海边游泳；秋季凉爽，适合野餐；冬季寒冷多雪，适合玩雪；3. 说明最喜欢冬季的原因（和朋友堆雪人很有趣）；4. 使用合适的衔接词（如in spring, in summer等），保证结构完整、逻辑清晰，符合邮件的文体特征。
【答案】Writing
One possible version:
Dear Mike,
I'm glad to hear from you. My hometown is in the north-east of China. There are four seasons in my hometown.
It is warm and windy in spring. Everything turns green. It is exciting to climb mountains in spring. The weather is hot in summer. The Sun shines brightly. People like to go to the beach and swim in the sea. In autumn, leaves turn brown, red or yellow. It is nice to go on a picnic at this time of year because the weather is cool. It is cold and snowy in winter. Sometimes it snows, so people stay at home and enjoy the beautiful scenery.
I love winter best because I can play in the snow and make snowmen with my friends. It's really fun!
Hope you'll have a good time next month!
Yours,
Li Hui
【知识点】英语邮件写作、四季话题英语表达
【点评】该范文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖所有要点，结构清晰，衔接自然，语言流畅准确，符合邮件的文体格式，是一篇符合要求的优秀回信。
【难度系数】0.6