【典型例题】
请以“The Most Amazing Plant/Animal I Know”为题，参考下方表格信息，写一篇短文，在班级英语角分享。
| Topic | Details | |
| --- | --- | --- |
| Name | Venus Flytrap（维纳斯捕蝇草） | Cheetah |
| Habitat（栖息地） | Wet areas of the USA | African grasslands |
| Reason | Eats insects | Fastest runner |
| Fun Fact 1 | Closes leaves in 0.1 seconds | Runs 112 km/h |
| Fun Fact 2 | Lives 20 years | Spots（斑点） help hide |
要求：
1. 选择一种动植物进行描述，须包括所有要点提示，并适当补充；
2. 词数：80词左右；
3. 文中不得出现个人真实姓名和校名。
【思路点拨】
写作框架
├─开头：引出话题 → The... is one of the most amazing...；It lives/grows in...
├─正文：描述细节 → I chose it because...；For emple, ...；Moreover, ...
└─结尾：总结感受 → I think it is...；Let’s protect it!
【素材积累】
常用短语
1. 最令人惊叹的……
2. 生活/成长在……
常用句子
1. 它不仅奇怪，而且对其生态系统也很重要。
It is strange important for its ecosystem.
2. 让我们共同努力保护它！
Let’s to protect it!

常用短语
1. one of the most amazing...
2. live/grow in...
常用句子
1. not only,but also
2. work together

【分析】
首先明确写作任务：以指定题目写英语短文，需从两种动植物中选一种，涵盖表格所有要点，运用给定素材，词数80左右，结构遵循思路点拨的框架。解题思路：1. 选择维纳斯捕蝇草（Venus Flytrap），便于组织内容；2. 按框架分三段：开头引出话题，点明其为最神奇的植物之一及栖息地；正文说明选择原因（吃昆虫），补充两个趣味事实（0.1秒闭合叶子、寿命20年），运用给定的“not only...but also...”说明其特点；结尾总结感受并呼吁保护，运用“work together”短语；3. 确保无真实信息，词数符合要求。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 开头：引出话题，点明写作对象及栖息地：The Venus Flytrap is one of the most amazing plants I know. It grows in wet areas of the USA.
2. 正文：说明选择原因，补充趣味事实，运用积累的短语和句子：I chose it because it eats insects, which is quite special. For example, its leaves can close in 0.1 seconds when small insects touch them. Moreover, it can live up to 20 years. It is not only strange but also important for its ecosystem.
3. 结尾：总结感受并呼吁保护：I think it’s a wonderful plant. Let’s work together to protect it!
检查：涵盖所有表格要点，运用给定素材，词数约80，符合要求。
【答案】
The Most Amazing Plant I Know
The Venus Flytrap is one of the most amazing plants I know. It grows in wet areas of the USA.
I chose it because it eats insects, which is quite special. For example, its leaves can close in 0.1 seconds when small insects touch them. Moreover, it can live up to 20 years. It is not only strange but also important for its ecosystem.
I think it’s a wonderful plant. Let’s work together to protect it!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作；词汇短语运用
【点评】
本题考查英语应用文写作能力，要求学生根据给定信息组织内容，覆盖所有要点，运用积累的短语和句子，结构清晰，符合词数要求，注重语言准确性与要点完整性，是基础写作题型。
【难度系数】
0.6