写作方法提优
精研高分写作范式
掌握考场实战技法
D9
同学们，本单元我们围绕“如何做一名聪明的购物者”展开学习，学会了制定购物清单、规划购物预算、区分“需要”和“想要”的实用表达。现在让我们写一写怎样理性购物吧。
写作思路

例题演练

假设你有125元零花钱，请根据下表提示，规划你的支出，写一篇不少于6句话的短文。
范文展示
I’d like to buy some books. This is my shopping plan.
I need a storybook. It’s 10 yuan. I also need a picture book and an English book. The picture book is 15 yuan and the English book is 20 yuan. I will use 45 yuan for these books. I save 80 yuan.
I will buy what I need. I can be a smart shopper.
小试身手
My Shopping Plan
○Things to buy:
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○Have yuan
○Want to use yuan
理性购物是我们生活中的一项重要技能。请先完成左边的购物清单，再以“My Shopping Plan”为题，根据清单内容写一篇不少于5句话的小作文，分享你如何制定购物计划，让自己成为一个理性的小购物者。
My Shopping Plan

写作方法提优
参考范文：
My Shopping Plan
Things to buy:
▶ a sweater
▶ a pair of socks
▶ a small scarf
Have 100 yuan
Want to use 70 yuan
My Shopping Plan
I'd like to buy some new clothes. This is my shopping plan.
I need a sweater. I also need a pair of socks and a small scarf. I have 100 yuan. I want to use 70 yuan for these things.
I will only buy what I need. I can be a smart shopper.

【分析】
本题要求围绕“理性购物”完成“My Shopping Plan”写作，需先梳理购物清单再成文。解题思路：1. 明确核心：选“需要”而非“想要”的实用物品，体现理性消费；2. 填写清单：确定3件实用物品、合理的总零花钱、计划花费（剩余储蓄）；3. 写短文：开头点题，中间介绍清单内容，结尾升华理性购物的意义，确保句子不少于5句，结构完整。
【解析】
1. 填写购物清单：选择3件生活必需品（如毛衣、袜子、小围巾），总零花钱设为100元，计划花费70元（剩余30元储蓄，符合理性消费）；2. 撰写短文：①开头点明主题：My Shopping Plan，说明要制定购物计划；②中间介绍：说明买的物品、总钱数和计划花费；③结尾强调：只买需要的，做理性购物者，确保句子连贯，不少于5句。
【答案】
My Shopping Plan
Things to buy:
▶ a sweater
▶ a pair of socks
▶ a small scarf
Have 100 yuan
Want to use 70 yuan
My Shopping Plan
I'd like to buy some new clothes. This is my shopping plan.
I need a sweater. I also need a pair of socks and a small scarf. I have 100 yuan. I want to use 70 yuan for these things.
I will only buy what I need. I can be a smart shopper.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、理性消费表达
【点评】
本题结合生活实际，将英语写作与理性消费观念融合，要求学生先梳理购物逻辑再成文，既考察英语写作能力，又培养实用技能，结构清晰，符合提优训练要求。
【难度系数】
0.6