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Ⅳ. Think and write. 书面表达。
Write a passage about making friends through sharing a hobby. Use the following information to help.
My hobby
What is your hobby? | I like / enjoy / love / have interest in ...
How do you make friends through the hobby? | ◎At first, ... ◎Then, ... ◎At last, I get ...
What do you learn from this experience? | Sharing the hobby can make us ... and help ...
Write a passage about making friends through sharing a hobby. Use the following information to help.
My hobby
What is your hobby? | I like / enjoy / love / have interest in ...
How do you make friends through the hobby? | ◎At first, ... ◎Then, ... ◎At last, I get ...
What do you learn from this experience? | Sharing the hobby can make us ... and help ...
答案
One possible version:
I am fond of reading. And I often share the hobby with my friends. We often talk about the books we have read and we sometimes write reviews for the book. Once, I entered a writing competition. I wrote about Harry Potter, my favourite books. Lily, who wrote about the same books as me, became my best friend. From that day on, we often went to the library and bookstore together and we formed close friendship with each other.
So, sharing a hobby not only makes us happier, but also develops our friendship.
I am fond of reading. And I often share the hobby with my friends. We often talk about the books we have read and we sometimes write reviews for the book. Once, I entered a writing competition. I wrote about Harry Potter, my favourite books. Lily, who wrote about the same books as me, became my best friend. From that day on, we often went to the library and bookstore together and we formed close friendship with each other.
So, sharing a hobby not only makes us happier, but also develops our friendship.
解析
【分析】
本题是话题书面表达题，要求围绕“通过爱好交朋友”写短文。解题思路：1. 先明确自己的爱好，用like/enjoy等表达；2. 按照表格中“如何通过爱好交朋友”的结构，用At first/Then/At last串联具体事例，比如参加相关活动遇到同好，一起做相关的事；3. 最后总结分享爱好的意义，用make us...and help...的结构。写作时要注意语句通顺，符合逻辑，结合具体事例让内容充实。
【解析】
写作步骤：
1. 开篇点明爱好：用“I am fond of reading.”说明爱好，引出分享爱好的主题；
2. 举例说明通过爱好交朋友：先讲自己常和朋友聊读过的书、写书评，再具体举例参加写作比赛，遇到同样写《哈利波特》的Lily，之后一起去图书馆、书店，成为好朋友；
3. 总结感悟：用“not only...but also...”结构说明分享爱好的意义，即让我们更快乐，还能发展友谊。
【答案】
One possible version:
I am fond of reading. And I often share the hobby with my friends. We often talk about the books we have read and we sometimes write reviews for the book. Once, I entered a writing competition. I wrote about Harry Potter, my favourite books. Lily, who wrote about the same books as me, became my best friend. From that day on, we often went to the library and bookstore together and we formed close friendship with each other.
So, sharing a hobby not only makes us happier, but also develops our friendship.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、话题写作（爱好与交友）
【点评】
本题结合给定结构考查学生的话题写作能力，要求学生围绕“爱好交友”主题组织语言，结合具体事例使内容生动，同时考查学生对常用句型的运用，是初中英语常见的书面表达题型。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题是话题书面表达题，要求围绕“通过爱好交朋友”写短文。解题思路：1. 先明确自己的爱好，用like/enjoy等表达；2. 按照表格中“如何通过爱好交朋友”的结构，用At first/Then/At last串联具体事例，比如参加相关活动遇到同好，一起做相关的事；3. 最后总结分享爱好的意义，用make us...and help...的结构。写作时要注意语句通顺，符合逻辑，结合具体事例让内容充实。
【解析】
写作步骤：
1. 开篇点明爱好：用“I am fond of reading.”说明爱好，引出分享爱好的主题；
2. 举例说明通过爱好交朋友：先讲自己常和朋友聊读过的书、写书评，再具体举例参加写作比赛，遇到同样写《哈利波特》的Lily，之后一起去图书馆、书店，成为好朋友；
3. 总结感悟：用“not only...but also...”结构说明分享爱好的意义，即让我们更快乐，还能发展友谊。
【答案】
One possible version:
I am fond of reading. And I often share the hobby with my friends. We often talk about the books we have read and we sometimes write reviews for the book. Once, I entered a writing competition. I wrote about Harry Potter, my favourite books. Lily, who wrote about the same books as me, became my best friend. From that day on, we often went to the library and bookstore together and we formed close friendship with each other.
So, sharing a hobby not only makes us happier, but also develops our friendship.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、话题写作（爱好与交友）
【点评】
本题结合给定结构考查学生的话题写作能力，要求学生围绕“爱好交友”主题组织语言，结合具体事例使内容生动，同时考查学生对常用句型的运用，是初中英语常见的书面表达题型。
【难度系数】
0.6
