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七、书面表达(满分 25 分)
同学们对《愚公移山》的故事一定有着比较深刻的印象。请根据所学的内容及以下提示，以“The Story of Yu Gong”为题，把这个故事用英语简要叙述一下，并谈一谈你从故事中学到了什么。
要求：
1. 书写规范，逻辑清晰；
2. 词数 90 左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
提示词：move the mountains，Zhi Sou，grandson，continue(继续)，be moved，impossible(不可能的)
The Story of Yu Gong
Once upon a time, there lived an old man called Yu Gong. Two high mountains stopped his family from walking to the other side.
同学们对《愚公移山》的故事一定有着比较深刻的印象。请根据所学的内容及以下提示，以“The Story of Yu Gong”为题，把这个故事用英语简要叙述一下，并谈一谈你从故事中学到了什么。
要求：
1. 书写规范，逻辑清晰；
2. 词数 90 左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
提示词：move the mountains，Zhi Sou，grandson，continue(继续)，be moved，impossible(不可能的)
The Story of Yu Gong
Once upon a time, there lived an old man called Yu Gong. Two high mountains stopped his family from walking to the other side.
答案
One possible version:
The Story of Yu Gong
Once upon a time, there lived an old man called Yu Gong. Two high mountains stopped his family from walking to the other side. Although Yu Gong was old, he decided to move the mountains with his family. Then Yu Gong started digging. At that time, a man called Zhi Sou laughed at him and told him that it was impossible to move such high mountains. But Yu Gong didn't listen to him and said that his sons and grandsons would continue to move the mountains after he died. Then a god was moved by Yu Gong, so he sent two gods to help him move the mountains.
The story tells us that nothing is impossible as long as we work hard. We should not give up.
The Story of Yu Gong
Once upon a time, there lived an old man called Yu Gong. Two high mountains stopped his family from walking to the other side. Although Yu Gong was old, he decided to move the mountains with his family. Then Yu Gong started digging. At that time, a man called Zhi Sou laughed at him and told him that it was impossible to move such high mountains. But Yu Gong didn't listen to him and said that his sons and grandsons would continue to move the mountains after he died. Then a god was moved by Yu Gong, so he sent two gods to help him move the mountains.
The story tells us that nothing is impossible as long as we work hard. We should not give up.
解析
【分析】
本题要求以“The Story of Yu Gong”为题写英语短文，需结合《愚公移山》故事内容，包含故事情节与个人感悟，且要用到提示词，词数90左右，开头已给出。解题思路：1. 承接开头，说明愚公决定移山的行动；2. 引入智叟的质疑（用到提示词impossible），再写愚公的回应（用到grandson、continue）；3. 点明故事结果（用到be moved）；4. 总结故事传递的道理，完成写作。
【解析】
按照写作逻辑，先承接开头，用让步状语从句引出愚公移山的决定：Although Yu Gong was old, he decided to move the mountains with his family. 接着写智叟的质疑：At that time, a man called Zhi Sou laughed at him and told him that it was impossible to move such high mountains. 再写愚公的回应：But Yu Gong didn't listen to him and said that his sons and grandsons would continue to move the mountains after he died. 然后点明故事结果：Then a god was moved by Yu Gong, so he sent two gods to help him move the mountains. 最后总结感悟：The story tells us that nothing is impossible as long as we work hard. We should not give up. 确保用到所有提示词，逻辑连贯，符合词数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
The Story of Yu Gong
Once upon a time, there lived an old man called Yu Gong. Two high mountains stopped his family from walking to the other side. Although Yu Gong was old, he decided to move the mountains with his family. Then Yu Gong started digging. At that time, a man called Zhi Sou laughed at him and told him that it was impossible to move such high mountains. But Yu Gong didn't listen to him and said that his sons and grandsons would continue to move the mountains after he died. Then a god was moved by Yu Gong, so he sent two gods to help him move the mountains.
The story tells us that nothing is impossible as long as we work hard. We should not give up.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作；故事话题表达；常用短语运用
【点评】
范文紧扣题目要求，完整呈现《愚公移山》核心情节，合理运用所有提示词，逻辑清晰，感悟明确，语言简洁规范，符合初中英语书面表达评分标准。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题要求以“The Story of Yu Gong”为题写英语短文，需结合《愚公移山》故事内容，包含故事情节与个人感悟，且要用到提示词，词数90左右，开头已给出。解题思路：1. 承接开头，说明愚公决定移山的行动；2. 引入智叟的质疑（用到提示词impossible），再写愚公的回应（用到grandson、continue）；3. 点明故事结果（用到be moved）；4. 总结故事传递的道理，完成写作。
【解析】
按照写作逻辑，先承接开头，用让步状语从句引出愚公移山的决定：Although Yu Gong was old, he decided to move the mountains with his family. 接着写智叟的质疑：At that time, a man called Zhi Sou laughed at him and told him that it was impossible to move such high mountains. 再写愚公的回应：But Yu Gong didn't listen to him and said that his sons and grandsons would continue to move the mountains after he died. 然后点明故事结果：Then a god was moved by Yu Gong, so he sent two gods to help him move the mountains. 最后总结感悟：The story tells us that nothing is impossible as long as we work hard. We should not give up. 确保用到所有提示词，逻辑连贯，符合词数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
The Story of Yu Gong
Once upon a time, there lived an old man called Yu Gong. Two high mountains stopped his family from walking to the other side. Although Yu Gong was old, he decided to move the mountains with his family. Then Yu Gong started digging. At that time, a man called Zhi Sou laughed at him and told him that it was impossible to move such high mountains. But Yu Gong didn't listen to him and said that his sons and grandsons would continue to move the mountains after he died. Then a god was moved by Yu Gong, so he sent two gods to help him move the mountains.
The story tells us that nothing is impossible as long as we work hard. We should not give up.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作；故事话题表达；常用短语运用
【点评】
范文紧扣题目要求，完整呈现《愚公移山》核心情节，合理运用所有提示词，逻辑清晰，感悟明确，语言简洁规范，符合初中英语书面表达评分标准。
【难度系数】
0.6
