九、书面表达。(5 分)
中秋节是中国的传统节日。请根据思维导图,以"My
Favourite Festival"为题写一篇短文。
要求:语句通顺,书写规范,不少于5句话。

My Favourite Festival
中秋节是中国的传统节日。请根据思维导图,以"My
Favourite Festival"为题写一篇短文。
要求:语句通顺,书写规范,不少于5句话。
My Favourite Festival
The Mid-Autumn Festival is my
favourite festival. It is usually in September
or October. My mother usually makes some
moon cakes. My father usually makes some
soup. And we usually visit my grandparents.
We look at the moon and have a big dinner
together. We are happy on that day!
favourite festival. It is usually in September
or October. My mother usually makes some
moon cakes. My father usually makes some
soup. And we usually visit my grandparents.
We look at the moon and have a big dinner
together. We are happy on that day!
答案
My Favourite Festival
The Mid-Autumn Festival is my
favourite festival. It is usually in September
or October. My mother usually makes some
moon cakes. My father usually makes some
soup. And we usually visit my grandparents.
We look at the moon and have a big dinner
together. We are happy on that day!
The Mid-Autumn Festival is my
favourite festival. It is usually in September
or October. My mother usually makes some
moon cakes. My father usually makes some
soup. And we usually visit my grandparents.
We look at the moon and have a big dinner
together. We are happy on that day!
解析
【分析】
拿到这道写作题,首先先根据思维导图的提示确定核心主题:要写的节日是中秋节。第一步先梳理所有给定要点:1. 节日时间在九月或十月;2. 活动部分:妈妈做月饼、爸爸做汤、全家团聚赏月聚餐;3. 整体感受是开心。接下来按照逻辑顺序排布内容:开篇先直接点出我最喜欢的节日是中秋节,接着介绍节日的时间,再依次介绍不同家人在节日里做的事,最后收尾写全家的感受,保证句子数量不少于5句,语句通顺,把所有要点都覆盖到就可以完成写作。
【解析】
1. 开篇点题:直接说明自己最喜欢的节日是中秋节,开门见山。
2. 介绍节日时间:对应思维导图的"When"部分,说明中秋节通常在每年的九月或者十月。
3. 介绍家人的节日活动:先写妈妈的行为,对应图里妈妈做月饼的画面,说明妈妈通常会做月饼;再写爸爸的行为,对应爸爸做饭的画面,说明爸爸通常会做汤;接着写全家的集体活动,说明一家人会团聚,拜访祖父母,一起赏月享用大餐。
4. 收尾表达感受:对应思维导图的"Feeling"部分,说明全家人在节日里都很开心,完成全文。
【答案】
My Favourite Festival
The Mid-Autumn Festival is my favourite festival. It is usually in September or October. My mother usually makes some moon cakes. My father usually makes some soup. And we usually visit my grandparents. We look at the moon and have a big dinner together. We are happy on that day!
【知识点】
节日英语表达,一般现在时,提纲类写作
【点评】
本题属于小学阶段的基础提示类写作,难度较低,只需要准确提取思维导图给出的全部信息,用常用的一般现在时态串联成逻辑通顺的句子,满足不少于5句话的要求即可得分,写作时也可以适当补充"the moon is round and bright"这类细节让内容更生动。
【难度系数】
0.7
拿到这道写作题,首先先根据思维导图的提示确定核心主题:要写的节日是中秋节。第一步先梳理所有给定要点:1. 节日时间在九月或十月;2. 活动部分:妈妈做月饼、爸爸做汤、全家团聚赏月聚餐;3. 整体感受是开心。接下来按照逻辑顺序排布内容:开篇先直接点出我最喜欢的节日是中秋节,接着介绍节日的时间,再依次介绍不同家人在节日里做的事,最后收尾写全家的感受,保证句子数量不少于5句,语句通顺,把所有要点都覆盖到就可以完成写作。
【解析】
1. 开篇点题:直接说明自己最喜欢的节日是中秋节,开门见山。
2. 介绍节日时间:对应思维导图的"When"部分,说明中秋节通常在每年的九月或者十月。
3. 介绍家人的节日活动:先写妈妈的行为,对应图里妈妈做月饼的画面,说明妈妈通常会做月饼;再写爸爸的行为,对应爸爸做饭的画面,说明爸爸通常会做汤;接着写全家的集体活动,说明一家人会团聚,拜访祖父母,一起赏月享用大餐。
4. 收尾表达感受:对应思维导图的"Feeling"部分,说明全家人在节日里都很开心,完成全文。
【答案】
My Favourite Festival
The Mid-Autumn Festival is my favourite festival. It is usually in September or October. My mother usually makes some moon cakes. My father usually makes some soup. And we usually visit my grandparents. We look at the moon and have a big dinner together. We are happy on that day!
【知识点】
节日英语表达,一般现在时,提纲类写作
【点评】
本题属于小学阶段的基础提示类写作,难度较低,只需要准确提取思维导图给出的全部信息,用常用的一般现在时态串联成逻辑通顺的句子,满足不少于5句话的要求即可得分,写作时也可以适当补充"the moon is round and bright"这类细节让内容更生动。
【难度系数】
0.7
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