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十、书面表达。(8 分)
今天是 Nancy 的生日,你们正在她的家里给她举办一场生
日派对。请根据思维导图和所给内容,发挥想象,完成短文。
要求:1.条理清晰,意思连贯,语句通顺,标点正确,书写
规范;
2.词数不少于40,不含所给单词。
Nancy's Birthday
Today is Nancy's birthday. It's on
It's nine thirty in the morning. We are having a party at
Nancy's house. Look!
It's time for the cake now. Nancy is making a wish. She
wants to
We
今天是 Nancy 的生日,你们正在她的家里给她举办一场生
日派对。请根据思维导图和所给内容,发挥想象,完成短文。
要求:1.条理清晰,意思连贯,语句通顺,标点正确,书写
规范;
2.词数不少于40,不含所给单词。
Nancy's Birthday
Today is Nancy's birthday. It's on
the twentieth of July
It's nine thirty in the morning. We are having a party at
Nancy's house. Look!
Her father is making a fruit salad. Her mother is cooking some nice food. Some boys are playing games. And some girls are singing songs.
It's time for the cake now. Nancy is making a wish. She
wants to
have a nice doll and dance well
We
all have a good time
at the party.答案
Nancy's Birthday
Today is Nancy's birthday. It's on the
twentieth of July.
It's nine thirty in the morning. We are
having a party at Nancy's house. Look! Her
father is making a fruit salad. Her mother is
cooking some nice food. Some boys are playing
games. And some girls are singing songs.
It's time for the cake now. Nancy is
making a wish. She wants to have a nice doll
and dance well.
We all have a good time at the party.
Today is Nancy's birthday. It's on the
twentieth of July.
It's nine thirty in the morning. We are
having a party at Nancy's house. Look! Her
father is making a fruit salad. Her mother is
cooking some nice food. Some boys are playing
games. And some girls are singing songs.
It's time for the cake now. Nancy is
making a wish. She wants to have a nice doll
and dance well.
We all have a good time at the party.
解析
【分析】
这道题是图表提示类英语书面表达，我们可以按照思维导图的四个模块对应题目空缺依次补全内容：首先第一空对应Date模块的7月20日，先回忆日期的正确英文表达；第二部分空缺对应Activities模块，场景是正在举办生日派对，需要用现在进行时描述所有人正在进行的活动，按照家人、来访朋友的顺序梳理动作，把思维导图给出的爸爸做水果沙拉、妈妈做美食、男孩玩游戏、女孩唱歌的内容自然串联；第三空对应Wishes模块，把南希的两个愿望整合到句子里即可；最后一空对应Feelings模块，填入派对的整体感受，最后检查语句通顺、时态正确，满足字数要求就完成写作。
【解析】
1. 补全第一处空缺：思维导图给出生日日期为7月20日，英语中日期的规范书面表达为the twentieth of July，填入横线。
2. 补全活动部分空缺：该句场景为上午九点半派对正在进行，需使用现在进行时（be动词+动词现在分词）描述当下正在发生的行为，按照逻辑顺序依次介绍家人和同伴的活动，完全匹配思维导图给出的活动要点，符合语境。
3. 补全许愿部分空缺：思维导图给出南希的愿望是拥有漂亮娃娃、舞跳得好，将两个内容整合，语义通顺。
4. 补全最后感受部分空缺：结合思维导图提示的玩得开心的要点，补充完整句子，作为文段收尾自然合理。
【答案】
Nancy's Birthday
Today is Nancy's birthday. It's on the twentieth of July.
It's nine thirty in the morning. We are having a party at Nancy's house. Look! Her father is making a fruit salad. Her mother is cooking some nice food. Some boys are playing games. And some girls are singing songs.
It's time for the cake now. Nancy is making a wish. She wants to have a nice doll and dance well.
We all have a good time at the party.
【知识点】
现在进行时、日期英文表达、情景写作
【点评】
本题属于提示类基础英语写作，绝大多数核心要点都在思维导图中给出，不需要学生进行大量的自由创作，只需要按照行文逻辑将提示信息有序串联，正确使用现在进行时描述正在发生的派对场景，注意日期的规范书写，就可以写出符合要求的文段，同时也能锻炼学生从图表提取信息、组织连贯语句的能力。
【难度系数】
0.7
这道题是图表提示类英语书面表达，我们可以按照思维导图的四个模块对应题目空缺依次补全内容：首先第一空对应Date模块的7月20日，先回忆日期的正确英文表达；第二部分空缺对应Activities模块，场景是正在举办生日派对，需要用现在进行时描述所有人正在进行的活动，按照家人、来访朋友的顺序梳理动作，把思维导图给出的爸爸做水果沙拉、妈妈做美食、男孩玩游戏、女孩唱歌的内容自然串联；第三空对应Wishes模块，把南希的两个愿望整合到句子里即可；最后一空对应Feelings模块，填入派对的整体感受，最后检查语句通顺、时态正确，满足字数要求就完成写作。
【解析】
1. 补全第一处空缺：思维导图给出生日日期为7月20日，英语中日期的规范书面表达为the twentieth of July，填入横线。
2. 补全活动部分空缺：该句场景为上午九点半派对正在进行，需使用现在进行时（be动词+动词现在分词）描述当下正在发生的行为，按照逻辑顺序依次介绍家人和同伴的活动，完全匹配思维导图给出的活动要点，符合语境。
3. 补全许愿部分空缺：思维导图给出南希的愿望是拥有漂亮娃娃、舞跳得好，将两个内容整合，语义通顺。
4. 补全最后感受部分空缺：结合思维导图提示的玩得开心的要点，补充完整句子，作为文段收尾自然合理。
【答案】
Nancy's Birthday
Today is Nancy's birthday. It's on the twentieth of July.
It's nine thirty in the morning. We are having a party at Nancy's house. Look! Her father is making a fruit salad. Her mother is cooking some nice food. Some boys are playing games. And some girls are singing songs.
It's time for the cake now. Nancy is making a wish. She wants to have a nice doll and dance well.
We all have a good time at the party.
【知识点】
现在进行时、日期英文表达、情景写作
【点评】
本题属于提示类基础英语写作，绝大多数核心要点都在思维导图中给出，不需要学生进行大量的自由创作，只需要按照行文逻辑将提示信息有序串联，正确使用现在进行时描述正在发生的派对场景，注意日期的规范书写，就可以写出符合要求的文段，同时也能锻炼学生从图表提取信息、组织连贯语句的能力。
【难度系数】
0.7
