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假如你是李平，请根据下面思维导图中提供的信息，给你来自美国的新朋友Jack写一封不少于60词的电子邮件，介绍你的业余爱好。
要求：必须包含思维导图中的全部信息，可在此基础上适当发挥。
[审题指导]
1. 体裁：应用文
2. 人称：以第一人称为主
3. 时态：以一般现在时为主
[思路构建]
[精彩范文]
Dear Jack,
Hobbies can bring us pleasure, friendship and knowledge. My hobbies are flying kites and collecting kites.
My love for kites started at the age of five, and I have about 90 kites now. I put my kites in boxes. I will try to collect more kites. I often fly kites in the park. I think that I can do better than any other student in my class. Flying kites makes me happy. I feel relaxed when they fly high.
I hope that everyone has his own hobby and enjoys it like me. What’s your hobby? I hope to get an email from you soon.
Yours,
Li Ping
假如你是李平，请根据下面思维导图中提供的信息，给你来自美国的新朋友Jack写一封不少于60词的电子邮件，介绍你的业余爱好。
要求：必须包含思维导图中的全部信息，可在此基础上适当发挥。
[审题指导]
1. 体裁：应用文
2. 人称：以第一人称为主
3. 时态：以一般现在时为主
[思路构建]
[精彩范文]
Dear Jack,
Hobbies can bring us pleasure, friendship and knowledge. My hobbies are flying kites and collecting kites.
My love for kites started at the age of five, and I have about 90 kites now. I put my kites in boxes. I will try to collect more kites. I often fly kites in the park. I think that I can do better than any other student in my class. Flying kites makes me happy. I feel relaxed when they fly high.
I hope that everyone has his own hobby and enjoys it like me. What’s your hobby? I hope to get an email from you soon.
Yours,
Li Ping
答案
参考范文：
Dear Jack,
Hobbies can bring us much pleasure and make our free time colorful. My hobbies are flying kites and collecting kites.
I often fly kites with my friends on the weekend on the grassland of the park near my home. I fell in love with kites when I was seven years old, and now I have over 80 different kinds of kites. I keep all my kites in a large wooden box under my bed. Flying kites makes me feel really relaxed, and collecting different kites lets me learn a lot of interesting knowledge.
I hope everyone can have a fun hobby to enjoy. What's your hobby? I hope to get your email soon.
Yours,
Li Ping
Dear Jack,
Hobbies can bring us much pleasure and make our free time colorful. My hobbies are flying kites and collecting kites.
I often fly kites with my friends on the weekend on the grassland of the park near my home. I fell in love with kites when I was seven years old, and now I have over 80 different kinds of kites. I keep all my kites in a large wooden box under my bed. Flying kites makes me feel really relaxed, and collecting different kites lets me learn a lot of interesting knowledge.
I hope everyone can have a fun hobby to enjoy. What's your hobby? I hope to get your email soon.
Yours,
Li Ping
解析
【分析】
本题要求写一封给美国朋友Jack的电子邮件，核心是介绍自己的业余爱好。解题思路：1. 明确体裁为应用文（电子邮件），人称用第一人称，时态以一般现在时为主；2. 围绕指定爱好（放风筝、收集风筝），补充细节（开始时间、数量、存放方式、活动场景、感受）；3. 结尾询问对方爱好并期待回信，确保词数达标，符合邮件格式要求。
【解析】
按照电子邮件的规范格式写作：
1. 开头：称呼Dear Jack，点明爱好；
2. 主体：具体介绍爱好细节：七岁爱上风筝，现有80多种，存放在床下木箱，周末和朋友在公园草地放风筝，放风筝让人放松，收集能学知识；
3. 结尾：询问Jack的爱好，期待回信；
4. 落款：Yours, Li Ping。
【答案】
参考范文：
Dear Jack,
Hobbies can bring us much pleasure and make our free time colorful. My hobbies are flying kites and collecting kites.
I often fly kites with my friends on the weekend on the grassland of the park near my home. I fell in love with kites when I was seven years old, and now I have over 80 different kinds of kites. I keep all my kites in a large wooden box under my bed. Flying kites makes me feel really relaxed, and collecting different kites lets me learn a lot of interesting knowledge.
I hope everyone can have a fun hobby to enjoy. What's your hobby? I hope to get your email soon.
Yours,
Li Ping
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、一般现在时、话题写作（业余爱好）
【点评】
本题考查初中英语书面表达能力，围绕“业余爱好”话题展开，要求整合指定信息完成邮件写作，既考查邮件格式、人称时态等基础写作知识，也锻炼学生的信息整合与连贯表达能力，是常见的写作题型。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题要求写一封给美国朋友Jack的电子邮件，核心是介绍自己的业余爱好。解题思路：1. 明确体裁为应用文（电子邮件），人称用第一人称，时态以一般现在时为主；2. 围绕指定爱好（放风筝、收集风筝），补充细节（开始时间、数量、存放方式、活动场景、感受）；3. 结尾询问对方爱好并期待回信，确保词数达标，符合邮件格式要求。
【解析】
按照电子邮件的规范格式写作：
1. 开头：称呼Dear Jack，点明爱好；
2. 主体：具体介绍爱好细节：七岁爱上风筝，现有80多种，存放在床下木箱，周末和朋友在公园草地放风筝，放风筝让人放松，收集能学知识；
3. 结尾：询问Jack的爱好，期待回信；
4. 落款：Yours, Li Ping。
【答案】
参考范文：
Dear Jack,
Hobbies can bring us much pleasure and make our free time colorful. My hobbies are flying kites and collecting kites.
I often fly kites with my friends on the weekend on the grassland of the park near my home. I fell in love with kites when I was seven years old, and now I have over 80 different kinds of kites. I keep all my kites in a large wooden box under my bed. Flying kites makes me feel really relaxed, and collecting different kites lets me learn a lot of interesting knowledge.
I hope everyone can have a fun hobby to enjoy. What's your hobby? I hope to get your email soon.
Yours,
Li Ping
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、一般现在时、话题写作（业余爱好）
【点评】
本题考查初中英语书面表达能力，围绕“业余爱好”话题展开，要求整合指定信息完成邮件写作，既考查邮件格式、人称时态等基础写作知识，也锻炼学生的信息整合与连贯表达能力，是常见的写作题型。
【难度系数】
0.5
实战演练
（20 分）得分
假设你校的英文校刊将举办题为“My hobby”的征文活动，你计划参加。请你根据下面的提示内容，用英语写一篇短文介绍你的爱好，然后参加该活动。
注意：不少于 60 词(短文题目与开头已为你写好，不计入总词数)。
My hobby
Hobbies make people happy, so everyone should make time for them in their lives.
My hobby is
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AI错题本
CETC
（20 分）得分
假设你校的英文校刊将举办题为“My hobby”的征文活动，你计划参加。请你根据下面的提示内容，用英语写一篇短文介绍你的爱好，然后参加该活动。
注意：不少于 60 词(短文题目与开头已为你写好，不计入总词数)。
My hobby
Hobbies make people happy, so everyone should make time for them in their lives.
My hobby is
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CETC
答案
My hobby
Hobbies make people happy, so everyone should make time for them in their lives.
My hobby is paper-cutting. I learn it from my grandma. She is very good at it and teaches me step by step. At first, I made easy things like stars and hearts. Now, I try to make more things. I often look for new ideas in books and on the Internet.
The joy of paper-cutting is not just about making beautiful things. It also helps me find a way to enjoy myself. When I finish a new one, I feel happy and proud. I really love my hobby!
【思路点拨】第一步,点明我的爱好是什么;第二步,具体介绍我的爱好是怎么开始的及坚持的过程;第三步,表达爱好带给自己的好处。
Hobbies make people happy, so everyone should make time for them in their lives.
My hobby is paper-cutting. I learn it from my grandma. She is very good at it and teaches me step by step. At first, I made easy things like stars and hearts. Now, I try to make more things. I often look for new ideas in books and on the Internet.
The joy of paper-cutting is not just about making beautiful things. It also helps me find a way to enjoy myself. When I finish a new one, I feel happy and proud. I really love my hobby!
【思路点拨】第一步,点明我的爱好是什么;第二步,具体介绍我的爱好是怎么开始的及坚持的过程;第三步,表达爱好带给自己的好处。
解析
【分析】首先明确题目要求：以“My hobby”为题写短文，需包含“爱好是什么、如何开始、怎样坚持”三个要点，开头已给出，词数不少于60。解题思路：第一步，确定具体爱好（如剪纸），点明爱好；第二步，说明爱好的开始过程（如向长辈学习，初期的练习内容）；第三步，阐述坚持的方法（如通过书籍、网络获取灵感）；最后补充爱好带来的感受，使文章完整充实。
【解析】按照题目要求，依次展开内容：1. 点明爱好：My hobby is paper-cutting. 2. 说明如何开始：I learn it from my grandma. She teaches me step by step, starting with simple works like stars and hearts. 3. 说明怎样坚持：I often look for new ideas in books and on the Internet to提升自己。最后补充爱好带来的快乐与自豪感，使文章符合要求。
【答案】My hobby
Hobbies make people happy, so everyone should make time for them in their lives.
My hobby is paper-cutting. I learn it from my grandma. She is very good at it and teaches me step by step. At first, I made easy things like stars and hearts. Now, I try to make more things. I often look for new ideas in books and on the Internet.
The joy of paper-cutting is not just about making beautiful things. It also helps me find a way to enjoy myself. When I finish a new one, I feel happy and proud. I really love my hobby!
【知识点】英语应用文写作、记叙文写作
【点评】本题为英语书面表达题，围绕“My hobby”主题，结合给定提示要点完成短文，贴近学生生活，考查语言组织与书面表达能力，难度适中。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】按照题目要求，依次展开内容：1. 点明爱好：My hobby is paper-cutting. 2. 说明如何开始：I learn it from my grandma. She teaches me step by step, starting with simple works like stars and hearts. 3. 说明怎样坚持：I often look for new ideas in books and on the Internet to提升自己。最后补充爱好带来的快乐与自豪感，使文章符合要求。
【答案】My hobby
Hobbies make people happy, so everyone should make time for them in their lives.
My hobby is paper-cutting. I learn it from my grandma. She is very good at it and teaches me step by step. At first, I made easy things like stars and hearts. Now, I try to make more things. I often look for new ideas in books and on the Internet.
The joy of paper-cutting is not just about making beautiful things. It also helps me find a way to enjoy myself. When I finish a new one, I feel happy and proud. I really love my hobby!
【知识点】英语应用文写作、记叙文写作
【点评】本题为英语书面表达题，围绕“My hobby”主题，结合给定提示要点完成短文，贴近学生生活，考查语言组织与书面表达能力，难度适中。
【难度系数】0.6
