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如何写介绍学校的文章
本单元的话题是“介绍学校”，要求学生能正确描述学校相关信息与校园活动。与此相关的写作通常有：①介绍学校建筑及校园生活；②介绍自己最喜欢的校园地点并说明原因。
在具体介绍学校时，通常包含以下要点：
①介绍学校位置、上学距离和方式；
②介绍学校的外观、布局、设施及其功能；
③介绍校园活动及个人感受；
④介绍学校课程和师生关系。
【抛砖引玉】
假如你是Simon，最近你的英国笔友Daniel发来邮件，询问你新学校的情况。请你根据邮件内容用英文给他回封邮件，介绍你的新学校
和校园生活。
Dear Simon，
I'm glad to hear that you are studying at a new school now. I want to know more about your new school: What is your school like? What's your favourite place at school? What are the teachers and classmates like?
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Daniel
要求：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 内容必须包括邮件涉及的全部要点，可适当发挥；
3. 文章条理清晰、意思连贯、语句通顺。
本单元的话题是“介绍学校”，要求学生能正确描述学校相关信息与校园活动。与此相关的写作通常有：①介绍学校建筑及校园生活；②介绍自己最喜欢的校园地点并说明原因。
在具体介绍学校时，通常包含以下要点：
①介绍学校位置、上学距离和方式；
②介绍学校的外观、布局、设施及其功能；
③介绍校园活动及个人感受；
④介绍学校课程和师生关系。
【抛砖引玉】
假如你是Simon，最近你的英国笔友Daniel发来邮件，询问你新学校的情况。请你根据邮件内容用英文给他回封邮件，介绍你的新学校
和校园生活。
Dear Simon，
I'm glad to hear that you are studying at a new school now. I want to know more about your new school: What is your school like? What's your favourite place at school? What are the teachers and classmates like?
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Daniel
要求：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 内容必须包括邮件涉及的全部要点，可适当发挥；
3. 文章条理清晰、意思连贯、语句通顺。
答案
Dear Daniel,
Thanks for your email. Let me tell you about my new school.
It is a big and beautiful modern school with three classroom buildings, a large playground and a new dining hall. It takes me 20 minutes to get to school by bike every day. My favourite place is the school library, because there are many different kinds of books there, and I can read freely after class. All my teachers are kind to us, and my classmates are very helpful. I always have a great time at school.
Welcome to visit my school one day!
Yours,
Simon
Thanks for your email. Let me tell you about my new school.
It is a big and beautiful modern school with three classroom buildings, a large playground and a new dining hall. It takes me 20 minutes to get to school by bike every day. My favourite place is the school library, because there are many different kinds of books there, and I can read freely after class. All my teachers are kind to us, and my classmates are very helpful. I always have a great time at school.
Welcome to visit my school one day!
Yours,
Simon
解析
【分析】本题为英文书信写作题，需回复笔友Daniel关于新学校的询问。解题思路：1. 明确需覆盖的内容：Daniel提出的三个问题（学校样貌、最爱校园地点及原因、师生情况），同时结合题目给出的学校介绍要点（上学方式、校园设施、师生关系等）；2. 遵循英文书信格式：开头问候感谢，主体分块阐述，结尾邀请来访并署名；3. 控制词数在100左右，确保语句连贯、要点齐全。
【解析】写作步骤：①开头：感谢Daniel的来信，点明将介绍新学校；②主体：介绍学校为大而美的现代学校，有教学楼、操场、餐厅，上学方式为骑车20分钟；说明最爱图书馆，原因是书籍多可课后自由阅读；提及老师友善、同学乐于助人；③结尾：邀请Daniel来访，署名Simon。
【答案】Dear Daniel,
Thanks for your email. Let me tell you about my new school.
It is a big and beautiful modern school with three classroom buildings, a large playground and a new dining hall. It takes me 20 minutes to get to school by bike every day. My favourite place is the school library, because there are many different kinds of books there, and I can read freely after class. All my teachers are kind to us, and my classmates are very helpful. I always have a great time at school.
Welcome to visit my school one day!
Yours,
Simon
【知识点】英文书信写作、校园话题英语表达、应用文写作
【点评】本题以真实书信交流为场景，考查学生围绕“介绍学校”话题的英文写作能力，要求覆盖指定信息要点，兼顾格式规范与内容连贯，贴近学生日常学习生活，难度适中。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】写作步骤：①开头：感谢Daniel的来信，点明将介绍新学校；②主体：介绍学校为大而美的现代学校，有教学楼、操场、餐厅，上学方式为骑车20分钟；说明最爱图书馆，原因是书籍多可课后自由阅读；提及老师友善、同学乐于助人；③结尾：邀请Daniel来访，署名Simon。
【答案】Dear Daniel,
Thanks for your email. Let me tell you about my new school.
It is a big and beautiful modern school with three classroom buildings, a large playground and a new dining hall. It takes me 20 minutes to get to school by bike every day. My favourite place is the school library, because there are many different kinds of books there, and I can read freely after class. All my teachers are kind to us, and my classmates are very helpful. I always have a great time at school.
Welcome to visit my school one day!
Yours,
Simon
【知识点】英文书信写作、校园话题英语表达、应用文写作
【点评】本题以真实书信交流为场景，考查学生围绕“介绍学校”话题的英文写作能力，要求覆盖指定信息要点，兼顾格式规范与内容连贯，贴近学生日常学习生活，难度适中。
【难度系数】0.5
【实战演练】
你的英国朋友 John 即将作为交换生来你校学习,请你根据以下提示写一篇短文向 John 介绍一下你的学校。
提示:
1. What's the school like?
2. What places does it have?
3. Which is your favourite place? Why?
要求:
1. 90 词左右;
2. 内容须包括上面所给全部要点,可适当发挥;
3. 条理清楚,行文连贯,语句通顺。
你的英国朋友 John 即将作为交换生来你校学习,请你根据以下提示写一篇短文向 John 介绍一下你的学校。
提示:
1. What's the school like?
2. What places does it have?
3. Which is your favourite place? Why?
要求:
1. 90 词左右;
2. 内容须包括上面所给全部要点,可适当发挥;
3. 条理清楚,行文连贯,语句通顺。
答案
Hi, John. Let me tell you something about my school. Our school is great! It's large and beautiful.
We have a sports field in the middle of the school. All the students go there and do exercise together in the morning. Every Monday we raise the flag there. The classroom building is modern and we spend most of the time in our bright classroom. We also have an art room and a music room. We always have a good time there. My favourite place is the library. There are thousands of books on different subjects. I can borrow books from it. It gives me both knowledge and lots of fun.
I'm sure you will like my school. I can't wait to see you.
We have a sports field in the middle of the school. All the students go there and do exercise together in the morning. Every Monday we raise the flag there. The classroom building is modern and we spend most of the time in our bright classroom. We also have an art room and a music room. We always have a good time there. My favourite place is the library. There are thousands of books on different subjects. I can borrow books from it. It gives me both knowledge and lots of fun.
I'm sure you will like my school. I can't wait to see you.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语应用文写作任务，要求向交换生John介绍学校，需覆盖三个核心要点：学校整体情况、校内场所、个人最喜欢的场所及原因。解题思路：①开篇问候并引出介绍主题；②先简述学校整体特点，再依次介绍校内具体场所；③明确说明自己最喜欢的场所及理由；④结尾表达对John到来的期待，确保内容完整、语句连贯，词数符合要求。
【解析】
写作遵循“总-分-总”结构：1. 开篇用“Hi, John. Let me tell you something about my school.”引出介绍；2. 点明学校整体特点：“Our school is great! It's large and beautiful.”；3. 介绍校内场所：依次写运动场（用途：晨练、周一升旗）、现代明亮的教学楼、艺术/音乐室；4. 说明最喜欢的场所（图书馆）及理由：“There are thousands of books on different subjects. I can borrow books from it. It gives me both knowledge and lots of fun.”；5. 结尾表达期待：“I'm sure you will like my school. I can't wait to see you.”，全程控制词数约90，适当发挥使内容连贯。
【答案】
Hi, John. Let me tell you something about my school. Our school is great! It's large and beautiful.
We have a sports field in the middle of the school. All the students go there and do exercise together in the morning. Every Monday we raise the flag there. The classroom building is modern and we spend most of the time in our bright classroom. We also have an art room and a music room. We always have a good time there. My favourite place is the library. There are thousands of books on different subjects. I can borrow books from it. It gives me both knowledge and lots of fun.
I'm sure you will like my school. I can't wait to see you.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、学校介绍类短文写作、要点整合表达
【点评】
本题为贴近生活的实用写作题，考查学生的英语信息整合与书面表达能力，要求覆盖所有给定要点，内容完整、行文连贯，难度适中，适合学生练习。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语应用文写作任务，要求向交换生John介绍学校，需覆盖三个核心要点：学校整体情况、校内场所、个人最喜欢的场所及原因。解题思路：①开篇问候并引出介绍主题；②先简述学校整体特点，再依次介绍校内具体场所；③明确说明自己最喜欢的场所及理由；④结尾表达对John到来的期待，确保内容完整、语句连贯，词数符合要求。
【解析】
写作遵循“总-分-总”结构：1. 开篇用“Hi, John. Let me tell you something about my school.”引出介绍；2. 点明学校整体特点：“Our school is great! It's large and beautiful.”；3. 介绍校内场所：依次写运动场（用途：晨练、周一升旗）、现代明亮的教学楼、艺术/音乐室；4. 说明最喜欢的场所（图书馆）及理由：“There are thousands of books on different subjects. I can borrow books from it. It gives me both knowledge and lots of fun.”；5. 结尾表达期待：“I'm sure you will like my school. I can't wait to see you.”，全程控制词数约90，适当发挥使内容连贯。
【答案】
Hi, John. Let me tell you something about my school. Our school is great! It's large and beautiful.
We have a sports field in the middle of the school. All the students go there and do exercise together in the morning. Every Monday we raise the flag there. The classroom building is modern and we spend most of the time in our bright classroom. We also have an art room and a music room. We always have a good time there. My favourite place is the library. There are thousands of books on different subjects. I can borrow books from it. It gives me both knowledge and lots of fun.
I'm sure you will like my school. I can't wait to see you.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、学校介绍类短文写作、要点整合表达
【点评】
本题为贴近生活的实用写作题，考查学生的英语信息整合与书面表达能力，要求覆盖所有给定要点，内容完整、行文连贯，难度适中，适合学生练习。
【难度系数】
0.6
