假如你是李华,你校《阳光英语报》举办了“My colourful school life”的征文活动,请你根据以下提示写一篇80词左右的英语短文投稿。
1. What lessons do you like best? Why?
2. What do you do after school?
3. What is special about your after-school activities?
1. What lessons do you like best? Why?
2. What do you do after school?
3. What is special about your after-school activities?
答案
My colourful school life
My name is Li Hua. My school life is very colourful and I love it so much.
I like English lessons best, because my English teacher is kind and her classes are great fun. I can learn a lot of useful knowledge in English classes.
After school, I join the basketball club and play basketball with my classmates. What is special about our after-school activities is that we often have friendly matches with students from other schools. I can make many new friends and learn to work well in teams.
My name is Li Hua. My school life is very colourful and I love it so much.
I like English lessons best, because my English teacher is kind and her classes are great fun. I can learn a lot of useful knowledge in English classes.
After school, I join the basketball club and play basketball with my classmates. What is special about our after-school activities is that we often have friendly matches with students from other schools. I can make many new friends and learn to work well in teams.
解析
【分析】
本次写作任务是围绕“My colourful school life”主题完成英语征文,身份设定为李华,需覆盖三个核心提示:①最喜欢的课程及原因;②课后活动内容;③课后活动的特别之处。解题思路为:1. 开篇点明身份并总述校园生活特点,引出下文;2. 针对第一个提示,选择具体课程(如英语),结合老师特点、课堂趣味性说明原因;3. 针对第二个提示,明确课后活动(如篮球俱乐部);4. 针对第三个提示,说明活动的特别之处(如跨校友谊赛)及收获;5. 调整语句流畅度,控制词数在80左右。
【解析】
1. 开篇:介绍身份(My name is Li Hua.),总述校园生活(My school life is very colourful and I love it so much.);
2. 回答课程问题:说明最喜欢英语课,原因是老师友善、课堂有趣,能学有用知识(I like English lessons best, because my English teacher is kind and her classes are great fun. I can learn a lot of useful knowledge in English classes.);
3. 回答课后活动问题:说明加入篮球俱乐部,和同学打球(After school, I join the basketball club and play basketball with my classmates.);
4. 回答特别之处问题:指出活动特别之处是常和其他学校学生打友谊赛,能交新朋友、学会团队合作(What is special about our after-school activities is that we often have friendly matches with students from other schools. I can make many new friends and learn to work well in teams.);
5. 整体调整语句,确保流畅,词数符合要求。
【答案】
My colourful school life
My name is Li Hua. My school life is very colourful and I love it so much.
I like English lessons best, because my English teacher is kind and her classes are great fun. I can learn a lot of useful knowledge in English classes.
After school, I join the basketball club and play basketball with my classmates. What is special about our after-school activities is that we often have friendly matches with students from other schools. I can make many new friends and learn to work well in teams.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、要点整合表达
【点评】
本文紧扣主题,完整覆盖题目要求的三个提示要点,语言简洁流畅,符合李华的身份设定,词数控制合理,是一篇符合要求的优秀征文。
【难度系数】
0.3
本次写作任务是围绕“My colourful school life”主题完成英语征文,身份设定为李华,需覆盖三个核心提示:①最喜欢的课程及原因;②课后活动内容;③课后活动的特别之处。解题思路为:1. 开篇点明身份并总述校园生活特点,引出下文;2. 针对第一个提示,选择具体课程(如英语),结合老师特点、课堂趣味性说明原因;3. 针对第二个提示,明确课后活动(如篮球俱乐部);4. 针对第三个提示,说明活动的特别之处(如跨校友谊赛)及收获;5. 调整语句流畅度,控制词数在80左右。
【解析】
1. 开篇:介绍身份(My name is Li Hua.),总述校园生活(My school life is very colourful and I love it so much.);
2. 回答课程问题:说明最喜欢英语课,原因是老师友善、课堂有趣,能学有用知识(I like English lessons best, because my English teacher is kind and her classes are great fun. I can learn a lot of useful knowledge in English classes.);
3. 回答课后活动问题:说明加入篮球俱乐部,和同学打球(After school, I join the basketball club and play basketball with my classmates.);
4. 回答特别之处问题:指出活动特别之处是常和其他学校学生打友谊赛,能交新朋友、学会团队合作(What is special about our after-school activities is that we often have friendly matches with students from other schools. I can make many new friends and learn to work well in teams.);
5. 整体调整语句,确保流畅,词数符合要求。
【答案】
My colourful school life
My name is Li Hua. My school life is very colourful and I love it so much.
I like English lessons best, because my English teacher is kind and her classes are great fun. I can learn a lot of useful knowledge in English classes.
After school, I join the basketball club and play basketball with my classmates. What is special about our after-school activities is that we often have friendly matches with students from other schools. I can make many new friends and learn to work well in teams.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、要点整合表达
【点评】
本文紧扣主题,完整覆盖题目要求的三个提示要点,语言简洁流畅,符合李华的身份设定,词数控制合理,是一篇符合要求的优秀征文。
【难度系数】
0.3
为了培养学生的劳动意识,增强他们的动手能力,光华中学打破年级限制,成立了多个劳动社团。请根据以下表格提示,以“Our Labour Clubs(我们的劳动社团)”为题,写一篇英语短文,介绍以下两个劳动社团,并在其中选一个你最喜欢的社团,详细说明喜欢的理由。
答案
Our Labour Clubs
To develop our labour awareness and improve our hands-on skills, Guanghua Middle School sets up many different labour clubs. All students can join them, and we don't need to stay in our own grade groups.
There are two very popular clubs now. The first one is the Cooking Club. We learn to make simple but tasty food there every week. The other one is the Planting Club. We grow vegetables and beautiful flowers in our school's small garden.
My favourite club is the Planting Club. I love watching small seeds grow into big little plants day by day. It teaches me to be a careful and patient person. I can also learn lots of interesting facts about plants that I can't learn from my textbooks. I really have great fun in the club.
To develop our labour awareness and improve our hands-on skills, Guanghua Middle School sets up many different labour clubs. All students can join them, and we don't need to stay in our own grade groups.
There are two very popular clubs now. The first one is the Cooking Club. We learn to make simple but tasty food there every week. The other one is the Planting Club. We grow vegetables and beautiful flowers in our school's small garden.
My favourite club is the Planting Club. I love watching small seeds grow into big little plants day by day. It teaches me to be a careful and patient person. I can also learn lots of interesting facts about plants that I can't learn from my textbooks. I really have great fun in the club.
解析
【分析】
首先审题,明确体裁为英语说明文,主题是介绍光华中学的劳动社团并说明个人偏好。解题思路分三步:1. 开头点明成立劳动社团的目的(培养劳动意识、提升动手能力)及特点(打破年级限制,所有学生可加入);2. 介绍两个核心社团:烹饪社团(每周学习制作简单美味的食物)、种植社团(在学校小花园种植蔬菜和花卉);3. 选择最喜欢的社团(如种植社团),从见证植物成长、培养耐心细心、获取课本外知识、收获乐趣等角度说明理由,确保内容完整、逻辑清晰。
【解析】
按照审题确定的结构,组织语言形成短文:先开篇说明成立社团的初衷与特点,再介绍两个社团的内容,最后阐述个人偏好及理由,语言符合初中英语表达规范,要点齐全。
【答案】
Our Labour Clubs
To develop our labour awareness and improve our hands-on skills, Guanghua Middle School sets up many different labour clubs. All students can join them, and we don't need to stay in our own grade groups.
There are two very popular clubs now. The first one is the Cooking Club. We learn to make simple but tasty food there every week. The other one is the Planting Club. We grow vegetables and beautiful flowers in our school's small garden.
My favourite club is the Planting Club. I love watching small seeds grow into big little plants day by day. It teaches me to be a careful and patient person. I can also learn lots of interesting facts about plants that I can't learn from my textbooks. I really have great fun in the club.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、话题作文
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求,结构清晰,要点完整,语言通顺自然,准确传达了劳动社团的相关信息及个人偏好,符合初中英语写作的评分标准。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先审题,明确体裁为英语说明文,主题是介绍光华中学的劳动社团并说明个人偏好。解题思路分三步:1. 开头点明成立劳动社团的目的(培养劳动意识、提升动手能力)及特点(打破年级限制,所有学生可加入);2. 介绍两个核心社团:烹饪社团(每周学习制作简单美味的食物)、种植社团(在学校小花园种植蔬菜和花卉);3. 选择最喜欢的社团(如种植社团),从见证植物成长、培养耐心细心、获取课本外知识、收获乐趣等角度说明理由,确保内容完整、逻辑清晰。
【解析】
按照审题确定的结构,组织语言形成短文:先开篇说明成立社团的初衷与特点,再介绍两个社团的内容,最后阐述个人偏好及理由,语言符合初中英语表达规范,要点齐全。
【答案】
Our Labour Clubs
To develop our labour awareness and improve our hands-on skills, Guanghua Middle School sets up many different labour clubs. All students can join them, and we don't need to stay in our own grade groups.
There are two very popular clubs now. The first one is the Cooking Club. We learn to make simple but tasty food there every week. The other one is the Planting Club. We grow vegetables and beautiful flowers in our school's small garden.
My favourite club is the Planting Club. I love watching small seeds grow into big little plants day by day. It teaches me to be a careful and patient person. I can also learn lots of interesting facts about plants that I can't learn from my textbooks. I really have great fun in the club.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、话题作文
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求,结构清晰,要点完整,语言通顺自然,准确传达了劳动社团的相关信息及个人偏好,符合初中英语写作的评分标准。
【难度系数】
0.6
Club | Cooking Club | Flower Growing Club
--- | --- | ---
What we need | * a pot
bowls
a knife
ingredients(调料)
... | * flower seeds(花种子)
earth(泥土)
flowerpots(花盆)
...
What we do | * cook delicious food for...
make a healthy menu(菜谱) about
... | * grow flowers...
have a close look at...
...
What we get | * learn cooking skills
become confident(自信的)
... | * get close to...
relax from...
...
★★★★★ | Your favourite club
Reasons |
--- | --- | ---
What we need | * a pot
bowls
a knife
ingredients(调料)
... | * flower seeds(花种子)
earth(泥土)
flowerpots(花盆)
...
What we do | * cook delicious food for...
make a healthy menu(菜谱) about
... | * grow flowers...
have a close look at...
...
What we get | * learn cooking skills
become confident(自信的)
... | * get close to...
relax from...
...
★★★★★ | Your favourite club
Reasons |
答案
Your favourite club: Cooking Club
Reasons: I love delicious food very much. In the club, I can learn to cook tasty dishes for my parents, and make a healthy vegetable menu for my whole family. I can also master many useful cooking skills here, and I will become more confident when I can make nice food all by myself. It will be really great fun to stay with other members who have the same hobby as me.
Reasons: I love delicious food very much. In the club, I can learn to cook tasty dishes for my parents, and make a healthy vegetable menu for my whole family. I can also master many useful cooking skills here, and I will become more confident when I can make nice food all by myself. It will be really great fun to stay with other members who have the same hobby as me.
解析
【分析】首先明确题目要求是从烹饪俱乐部和种花俱乐部中选择自己最喜欢的俱乐部,并结合表格中两个俱乐部的相关信息(所需物品、活动内容、收获)说明理由。本题选择烹饪俱乐部,需从表格中烹饪俱乐部的活动(做美食、做健康菜谱)、收获(学技能、变自信)等内容出发,组织通顺合理的理由。
【解析】解题时,第一步:确定选择的俱乐部,本题选烹饪俱乐部;第二步:提取表格中烹饪俱乐部的相关信息,包括能做的事(烹饪美食、制作健康菜谱)、能获得的收获(学习烹饪技能、变得自信)等;第三步:将这些信息整合,用通顺的英语表达出来,说明选择该俱乐部的原因,符合题目要求。
【答案】Your favourite club: Cooking Club
Reasons: I love delicious food very much. In the club, I can learn to cook tasty dishes for my parents, and make a healthy vegetable menu for my whole family. I can also master many useful cooking skills here, and I will become more confident when I can make nice food all by myself. It will be really great fun to stay with other members who have the same hobby as me.
【知识点】英语书面表达、信息提取与写作、理由阐述
【点评】本题是结合表格信息的英语写作题,考查学生对表格信息的提取能力和英语表达能力,要求学生能清晰阐述选择俱乐部的理由,贴近学生生活实际,易于上手。
【难度系数】0.3
【解析】解题时,第一步:确定选择的俱乐部,本题选烹饪俱乐部;第二步:提取表格中烹饪俱乐部的相关信息,包括能做的事(烹饪美食、制作健康菜谱)、能获得的收获(学习烹饪技能、变得自信)等;第三步:将这些信息整合,用通顺的英语表达出来,说明选择该俱乐部的原因,符合题目要求。
【答案】Your favourite club: Cooking Club
Reasons: I love delicious food very much. In the club, I can learn to cook tasty dishes for my parents, and make a healthy vegetable menu for my whole family. I can also master many useful cooking skills here, and I will become more confident when I can make nice food all by myself. It will be really great fun to stay with other members who have the same hobby as me.
【知识点】英语书面表达、信息提取与写作、理由阐述
【点评】本题是结合表格信息的英语写作题,考查学生对表格信息的提取能力和英语表达能力,要求学生能清晰阐述选择俱乐部的理由,贴近学生生活实际,易于上手。
【难度系数】0.3
要求:
1. 词数80左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 介绍表格中的两个社团,结合实际情况,可适当发挥;
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名;
4. 字迹工整,语言流畅,表达正确,逻辑
清晰。
Our Labour Clubs
Are you ready for an interesting and colourful labour club? Now I'd like to introduce some of our labour clubs.
1. 词数80左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 介绍表格中的两个社团,结合实际情况,可适当发挥;
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名;
4. 字迹工整,语言流畅,表达正确,逻辑
清晰。
Our Labour Clubs
Are you ready for an interesting and colourful labour club? Now I'd like to introduce some of our labour clubs.
We have a Cooking Club. We need a pot, bowls, a knife and some ingredients. In the club, we cook delicious food for parents and friends. We make a healthy menu about a healthy diet. Here, we can learn cooking skills and become confident.
We also have a Flower Growing Club. We need flower seeds, earth and flowerpots. We grow flowers and have a close look at flowers and plants. Here we can get close to nature and relax from enjoying flowers. We always enjoy ourselves.
The Cooking Club is my favourite because I like cooking and I want to let my parents enjoy nice food.
答案
We have a Cooking Club. We need a pot, bowls, a knife and some ingredients. In the club, we cook delicious food for parents and friends. We make a healthy menu about a healthy diet. Here, we can learn cooking skills and become confident. We also have a Flower Growing Club. We need flower seeds, earth and flowerpots. We grow flowers and have a close look at flowers and plants. Here we can get close to nature and relax from enjoying flowers. We always enjoy ourselves.
The Cooking Club is my favourite because I like cooking and I want to let my parents enjoy nice food.
The Cooking Club is my favourite because I like cooking and I want to let my parents enjoy nice food.
解析
【分析】本题要求介绍两个劳动社团,词数80左右,开头已给出。解题思路:1. 衔接开头,明确介绍两个社团;2. 分别说明每个社团所需物品、活动内容及收获;3. 补充个人对其中一个社团的喜好,使内容完整,同时注意语言流畅、无真实信息,符合词数要求。
【解析】先承接开头介绍烹饪社团:We have a Cooking Club. We need a pot, bowls, a knife and some ingredients. In the club, we cook delicious food for parents and friends. We make a healthy menu about a healthy diet. Here, we can learn cooking skills and become confident. 接着介绍种花社团:We also have a Flower Growing Club. We need flower seeds, earth and flowerpots. We grow flowers and have a close look at flowers and plants. Here we can get close to nature and relax from enjoying flowers. 最后补充个人感受:The Cooking Club is my favourite because I like cooking and I want to let my parents enjoy nice food. 整体符合词数与要求。
【答案】We have a Cooking Club. We need a pot, bowls, a knife and some ingredients. In the club, we cook delicious food for parents and friends. We make a healthy menu about a healthy diet. Here, we can learn cooking skills and become confident. We also have a Flower Growing Club. We need flower seeds, earth and flowerpots. We grow flowers and have a close look at flowers and plants. Here we can get close to nature and relax from enjoying flowers. We always enjoy ourselves. The Cooking Club is my favourite because I like cooking and I want to let my parents enjoy nice food.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、社团介绍
【点评】本题要求清晰,内容贴合劳动社团主题,语言流畅,逻辑连贯,补充个人感受使文章更生动,符合所有写作规范。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】先承接开头介绍烹饪社团:We have a Cooking Club. We need a pot, bowls, a knife and some ingredients. In the club, we cook delicious food for parents and friends. We make a healthy menu about a healthy diet. Here, we can learn cooking skills and become confident. 接着介绍种花社团:We also have a Flower Growing Club. We need flower seeds, earth and flowerpots. We grow flowers and have a close look at flowers and plants. Here we can get close to nature and relax from enjoying flowers. 最后补充个人感受:The Cooking Club is my favourite because I like cooking and I want to let my parents enjoy nice food. 整体符合词数与要求。
【答案】We have a Cooking Club. We need a pot, bowls, a knife and some ingredients. In the club, we cook delicious food for parents and friends. We make a healthy menu about a healthy diet. Here, we can learn cooking skills and become confident. We also have a Flower Growing Club. We need flower seeds, earth and flowerpots. We grow flowers and have a close look at flowers and plants. Here we can get close to nature and relax from enjoying flowers. We always enjoy ourselves. The Cooking Club is my favourite because I like cooking and I want to let my parents enjoy nice food.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、社团介绍
【点评】本题要求清晰,内容贴合劳动社团主题,语言流畅,逻辑连贯,补充个人感受使文章更生动,符合所有写作规范。
【难度系数】0.6
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