[高分技巧]
1.模板并不是固定的一个模式,而是考生根据考题具体要求,在熟练掌握这10种句型的情况下,灵活选择合适句型组合成自己的模板。所以十句模板作文法是一种写作的理念和思维方式,高考书面表达范围一般都在6—10个句子左右,同学可以根据实际情况适当增减句子。
2.十句模板写作文是兼具机械性和灵活性的模板作文法。固定结构与经典句型体现了作文的机械性、套路化,适用于基础较差的同学,套用模板成文,可以快捷高效地提高自己的作文成绩,彻底摆脱不会写、写不出的窘境。基础较好的同学在能够熟练应用模板写作之后,可以根据试题要求,在十句模板思路的指导下,灵活运用各种句型,进一步优化自己的语言表达,这也是十句模板的灵活性体现。
[典例]
假定你是李华,学校要在12月底为高三学生举行一场成人礼活动(a coming-of-age ceremony),你希望参加此次活动的策划工作。请根据以下提示,用英语给学校写一封申请信,内容包括:
1.对此活动的认识;
2.你的活动创意。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Sir/Madam,
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
[参考范文]
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am applying for the position of activity planner for the upcoming coming-of-age ceremony falling on Dec. 30th.
This once-in-a-lifetime ceremony, I believe, is a golden opportunity to impress upon us the significance of shouldering responsibility and fulfilling our obligation as young adults. To make this event memorable, firstly, I suggest inviting the principal to deliver an inspiring speech articulating the real meaning of being a grown-up. Then, accompanied by our parents, we will walk through the Longmen, a traditional symbol of maturity, and have photos taken to mark this special occasion.
I hope my ideas above will help me secure this position.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
1.模板并不是固定的一个模式,而是考生根据考题具体要求,在熟练掌握这10种句型的情况下,灵活选择合适句型组合成自己的模板。所以十句模板作文法是一种写作的理念和思维方式,高考书面表达范围一般都在6—10个句子左右,同学可以根据实际情况适当增减句子。
2.十句模板写作文是兼具机械性和灵活性的模板作文法。固定结构与经典句型体现了作文的机械性、套路化,适用于基础较差的同学,套用模板成文,可以快捷高效地提高自己的作文成绩,彻底摆脱不会写、写不出的窘境。基础较好的同学在能够熟练应用模板写作之后,可以根据试题要求,在十句模板思路的指导下,灵活运用各种句型,进一步优化自己的语言表达,这也是十句模板的灵活性体现。
[典例]
假定你是李华,学校要在12月底为高三学生举行一场成人礼活动(a coming-of-age ceremony),你希望参加此次活动的策划工作。请根据以下提示,用英语给学校写一封申请信,内容包括:
1.对此活动的认识;
2.你的活动创意。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Sir/Madam,
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
[参考范文]
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am applying for the position of activity planner for the upcoming coming-of-age ceremony falling on Dec. 30th.
This once-in-a-lifetime ceremony, I believe, is a golden opportunity to impress upon us the significance of shouldering responsibility and fulfilling our obligation as young adults. To make this event memorable, firstly, I suggest inviting the principal to deliver an inspiring speech articulating the real meaning of being a grown-up. Then, accompanied by our parents, we will walk through the Longmen, a traditional symbol of maturity, and have photos taken to mark this special occasion.
I hope my ideas above will help me secure this position.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
答案
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to apply for the position of activity planner for the coming-of-age ceremony to be held for Grade 3 students at the end of December.
From my perspective, this ceremony is a precious chance for us to fully understand that we are no longer kids and we should learn to shoulder responsibilities as adults. For the activity, I suggest we hold a small wish-sharing session, where every student can read their growth notes written in advance.
I sincerely hope I can get this opportunity to join in the planning work.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
I am writing to apply for the position of activity planner for the coming-of-age ceremony to be held for Grade 3 students at the end of December.
From my perspective, this ceremony is a precious chance for us to fully understand that we are no longer kids and we should learn to shoulder responsibilities as adults. For the activity, I suggest we hold a small wish-sharing session, where every student can read their growth notes written in advance.
I sincerely hope I can get this opportunity to join in the planning work.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
解析
本题属于高二英语书信类应用文写作,要求写一封申请信申请参与学校12月底高三成人礼的策划工作,词数要求80左右,核心内容需覆盖两个要点:①你对本次成人礼活动的认识;②你提出的相关活动创意。
写作可按照三步搭建框架:
1. 开篇直接点明写信意图,说明自己想要申请成为本次成人礼的活动策划人员;
2. 主体部分先阐述成人礼的意义,点明该活动是帮助高三学生理解成年内涵、树立责任意识的重要契机,之后给出具体可落地的活动创意,内容贴合主题即可;
3. 结尾礼貌表达自己希望获得本次策划机会的诉求。
写作时可根据自身英语基础灵活调整句式难度,基础薄弱的同学用简单句串联保证内容完整不遗漏要点,基础较好的同学可以适当使用非谓语、同位语等高级表达提升作文档次,符合本次介绍的十句模板写作灵活调整的高分技巧要求。
写作可按照三步搭建框架:
1. 开篇直接点明写信意图,说明自己想要申请成为本次成人礼的活动策划人员;
2. 主体部分先阐述成人礼的意义,点明该活动是帮助高三学生理解成年内涵、树立责任意识的重要契机,之后给出具体可落地的活动创意,内容贴合主题即可;
3. 结尾礼貌表达自己希望获得本次策划机会的诉求。
写作时可根据自身英语基础灵活调整句式难度,基础薄弱的同学用简单句串联保证内容完整不遗漏要点,基础较好的同学可以适当使用非谓语、同位语等高级表达提升作文档次,符合本次介绍的十句模板写作灵活调整的高分技巧要求。
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