四、书面表达。(计15分)
假如今天英语写作课的主题是“My Favourite Story”,请你根据以下图示写一篇短文。

注意: 1. 短文须包含图示所有信息,并谈谈对你的启示;
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
3. 词数60左右,题目自拟。
参考词汇: 撞上树桩 bump into a stump
假如今天英语写作课的主题是“My Favourite Story”,请你根据以下图示写一篇短文。
注意: 1. 短文须包含图示所有信息,并谈谈对你的启示;
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
3. 词数60左右,题目自拟。
参考词汇: 撞上树桩 bump into a stump
答案
四、评分标准:
(一)内容要点认定及分值(12分)
1. 题目(1分)
2. 开头(1分)、挖地(1分)、兔子撞树桩(1分)、农夫看见(1分)、农夫抓回家(1分)、饱餐一顿(1分)、等在树桩旁(1分)、幻想(还有兔子会撞上树桩1分,幻想破灭1分)、田地荒废(1分)
3. 启示(1分)
(二)行文认定及分值(3分)
参考范文:
Waiting for a Rabbit (1分)
There is a story about a farmer. (1分) One day, when he worked in his field (1分), a rabbit bumped into a stump and died. (1分) The farmer saw this and was very happy. (1分) He took it home and had a big meal. (2分) After that, he sat by the stump every day. (1分) He waited for more rabbits to come. (1分) But it didn't happen. (1分) Finally, his field was full of grass. (1分)
This story tells us not to wait for good luck but to work hard. (1分)
(一)内容要点认定及分值(12分)
1. 题目(1分)
2. 开头(1分)、挖地(1分)、兔子撞树桩(1分)、农夫看见(1分)、农夫抓回家(1分)、饱餐一顿(1分)、等在树桩旁(1分)、幻想(还有兔子会撞上树桩1分,幻想破灭1分)、田地荒废(1分)
3. 启示(1分)
(二)行文认定及分值(3分)
参考范文:
Waiting for a Rabbit (1分)
There is a story about a farmer. (1分) One day, when he worked in his field (1分), a rabbit bumped into a stump and died. (1分) The farmer saw this and was very happy. (1分) He took it home and had a big meal. (2分) After that, he sat by the stump every day. (1分) He waited for more rabbits to come. (1分) But it didn't happen. (1分) Finally, his field was full of grass. (1分)
This story tells us not to wait for good luck but to work hard. (1分)
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