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(二)根据英文提示之书面表达
1. 假设你是Andy,你七年级的外教老师Kate给你写了一封电子邮
件,想询问你进入八年级之后的变化,包括外貌、学业、爱好和交友
等方面,请你给她写一封回信。
Dear Andy,
How are you doing? I'd love to know how you have changed
since you entered Grade 8. Have you noticed any differences in your
looks, studies, hobbies, or friendships?
Please share your stories!
Looking forward to your reply!
Best wishes,
Kate
注意:(1)词数100左右,开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数;
(2)回复须包含所有要点,可适当发挥,使全文连贯、通顺;(3)文中
不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Kate,
Thank you for your email. I'm very happy to tell you my
changes in Grade 8.
What about you? How are you doing in Spain? I'm looking
forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Andy
2. Now it's your turn to write down your ideas.
You see this announcement in an international
teenage magazine. Write your article.
注意:(1)内容涵盖所有要点,全文连贯、通顺;(2)词数不少于80;
(3)文中不得提及有关个人身
份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
It is learning that makes us better people.
1. 假设你是Andy,你七年级的外教老师Kate给你写了一封电子邮
件,想询问你进入八年级之后的变化,包括外貌、学业、爱好和交友
等方面,请你给她写一封回信。
Dear Andy,
How are you doing? I'd love to know how you have changed
since you entered Grade 8. Have you noticed any differences in your
looks, studies, hobbies, or friendships?
Please share your stories!
Looking forward to your reply!
Best wishes,
Kate
注意:(1)词数100左右,开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数;
(2)回复须包含所有要点,可适当发挥,使全文连贯、通顺;(3)文中
不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Kate,
Thank you for your email. I'm very happy to tell you my
changes in Grade 8.
I have changed a lot since I was a student in Grade 8. I used to be short and thin. But now I am tall and strong. I used to be a shy boy. But now I am brave and outgoing. I have made many new friends, and our friendships have become stronger and stronger. I have made great progress in my studies, especially in English. I can even communicate with foreigners in English on some topics. These days, I am keen on sport and music. In a word, I am becoming better and better.
What about you? How are you doing in Spain? I'm looking
forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Andy
2. Now it's your turn to write down your ideas.
You see this announcement in an international
teenage magazine. Write your article.
注意:(1)内容涵盖所有要点,全文连贯、通顺;(2)词数不少于80;
(3)文中不得提及有关个人身
份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
It is learning that makes us better people.
My experience of learning to play basketball was a good example. I used to think myself too short for the game, but my best friend encouraged me to have a go. He taught me some basic skills and practised with me every day. Little by little, I can play well. Now I play basketball every week and get great fun.
This experience made me more confident and braver. I feel that we shouldn't be too shy to try new things. Just face challenges with a powerful heart.
This experience made me more confident and braver. I feel that we shouldn't be too shy to try new things. Just face challenges with a powerful heart.
答案
(二)1. One possible version:
Dear Kate,
Thank you for your email. I'm very happy to tell you my
changes in Grade 8.
I have changed a lot since I was a student in Grade 8. I
used to be short and thin. But now I am tall and strong. I
used to be a shy boy. But now I am brave and outgoing. I
have made many new friends, and our friendships have
become stronger and stronger. I have made great progress in
my studies, especially in English. I can even communicate
with foreigners in English on some topics. These days, I am
keen on sport and music. In a word, I am becoming better and
better.
What about you? How are you doing in Spain? I'm
looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Andy
思路引导 [总体分析]
①体裁:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件。②时态:以一般
现在时和现在完成时为主。③提示:写作要点已给出,不要
遗漏要点,可适当发挥。能够围绕主题准确使用语法、词汇、
短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作
任务。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,引出话题;第二步,具体阐述写作内
容,分别从外貌、学业、爱好和交友方面具体介绍自己进入
八年级之后的变化;第三步,书写结语,表达对对方的问候。
[亮点词汇]
①make friends 交朋友 ②make progress 取得进步
③communicate with 与……交流 ④be keen on 喜爱……
[高分句型]
①I have changed a lot since I was a student in Grade 8.
since引导时间状语从句
②I used to be short and thin. 固定结构used to
2. One possible version:
It is learning that makes us better people.
My experience of learning to play basketball was a good
example. I used to think myself too short for the game, but
my best friend encouraged me to have a go. He taught me
some basic skills and practised with me every day. Little by
little, I can play well. Now I play basketball every week and
get great fun.
This experience made me more confident and braver. I
feel that we shouldn't be too shy to try new things. Just face
challenges with a powerful heart.
思路引导 [总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文。②时态:一般过去时和一般
现在时。③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,并适
当添加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己学习的某件事物;第二步,介绍学习前后
的变化;第三步,分享自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①learn to do sth 学习做某事 ②encourage sb to do sth 鼓
励某人做某事 ③too... to... 太……而不能……
[高分句型]
I feel that we shouldn't be too shy to try new things. that
引导宾语从句
Dear Kate,
Thank you for your email. I'm very happy to tell you my
changes in Grade 8.
I have changed a lot since I was a student in Grade 8. I
used to be short and thin. But now I am tall and strong. I
used to be a shy boy. But now I am brave and outgoing. I
have made many new friends, and our friendships have
become stronger and stronger. I have made great progress in
my studies, especially in English. I can even communicate
with foreigners in English on some topics. These days, I am
keen on sport and music. In a word, I am becoming better and
better.
What about you? How are you doing in Spain? I'm
looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Andy
思路引导 [总体分析]
①体裁:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件。②时态:以一般
现在时和现在完成时为主。③提示:写作要点已给出,不要
遗漏要点,可适当发挥。能够围绕主题准确使用语法、词汇、
短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作
任务。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,引出话题;第二步,具体阐述写作内
容,分别从外貌、学业、爱好和交友方面具体介绍自己进入
八年级之后的变化;第三步,书写结语,表达对对方的问候。
[亮点词汇]
①make friends 交朋友 ②make progress 取得进步
③communicate with 与……交流 ④be keen on 喜爱……
[高分句型]
①I have changed a lot since I was a student in Grade 8.
since引导时间状语从句
②I used to be short and thin. 固定结构used to
2. One possible version:
It is learning that makes us better people.
My experience of learning to play basketball was a good
example. I used to think myself too short for the game, but
my best friend encouraged me to have a go. He taught me
some basic skills and practised with me every day. Little by
little, I can play well. Now I play basketball every week and
get great fun.
This experience made me more confident and braver. I
feel that we shouldn't be too shy to try new things. Just face
challenges with a powerful heart.
思路引导 [总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文。②时态:一般过去时和一般
现在时。③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,并适
当添加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己学习的某件事物;第二步,介绍学习前后
的变化;第三步,分享自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①learn to do sth 学习做某事 ②encourage sb to do sth 鼓
励某人做某事 ③too... to... 太……而不能……
[高分句型]
I feel that we shouldn't be too shy to try new things. that
引导宾语从句
解析
【分析】
本题包含两道英语写作题，第1题是给外教的电子邮件回信，需围绕八年级后的变化，涵盖外貌、学业、爱好、交友四个指定要点，使用一般现在时和现在完成时，词数100左右，开头结尾固定；第2题是材料作文，围绕“学习让我们更好”的主题，需结合个人经历，词数不少于80，不得透露个人身份信息。解题思路：第1题先承接开头引出变化，再分点阐述四个方面的具体变化，最后按要求写结尾问候；第2题先点题，再举具体学习经历说明变化，最后升华主题表达感悟。
【解析】
第1题写作步骤：
1. 承接开头，点明八年级以来变化很大；
2. 分述要点：外貌（过去矮瘦→现在高壮）、性格（过去害羞→现在外向）、交友（交新朋友，友谊更深厚）、学业（进步，尤其英语，能和外国人交流）、爱好（喜欢运动和音乐）；
3. 按要求写结尾问候Kate。
第2题写作步骤：
1. 开头点题“学习让我们更好”；
2. 举具体例子：学篮球的经历（过去觉得太矮不行，朋友鼓励，学技能，每天练习，现在打得好，每周玩）；
3. 升华主题：这次经历让自己更自信勇敢，鼓励尝试新事物。
【答案】
(二)1. One possible version:
Dear Kate,
Thank you for your email. I'm very happy to tell you my changes in Grade 8.
I have changed a lot since I was in Grade 8. I used to be short and thin, but now I am tall and strong. I used to be shy, but now I am brave and outgoing. I have made many new friends, and our friendships are stronger. I have made great progress in studies, especially English, and I can even communicate with foreigners on some topics. These days, I am keen on sports and music. In a word, I am becoming better and better.
What about you? How are you doing in Spain? I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Andy
2. One possible version:
It is learning that makes us better people.
My experience of learning to play basketball is a good example. I used to think I was too short to play basketball, but my best friend encouraged me to have a try. He taught me basic skills and practiced with me every day. Little by little, I can play well now. I play basketball every week and get great fun.
This experience made me more confident and braver. I feel that we shouldn't be too shy to try new things. We should face challenges with a brave heart.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作；英语材料作文写作；时态运用
【点评】
本题考查初中英语写作能力，涵盖书信和材料作文两种常见题型，要求学生准确把握写作要点，运用恰当的时态和词汇，使内容连贯通顺，符合初中英语写作的核心要求，能有效考查学生的语言综合运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题包含两道英语写作题，第1题是给外教的电子邮件回信，需围绕八年级后的变化，涵盖外貌、学业、爱好、交友四个指定要点，使用一般现在时和现在完成时，词数100左右，开头结尾固定；第2题是材料作文，围绕“学习让我们更好”的主题，需结合个人经历，词数不少于80，不得透露个人身份信息。解题思路：第1题先承接开头引出变化，再分点阐述四个方面的具体变化，最后按要求写结尾问候；第2题先点题，再举具体学习经历说明变化，最后升华主题表达感悟。
【解析】
第1题写作步骤：
1. 承接开头，点明八年级以来变化很大；
2. 分述要点：外貌（过去矮瘦→现在高壮）、性格（过去害羞→现在外向）、交友（交新朋友，友谊更深厚）、学业（进步，尤其英语，能和外国人交流）、爱好（喜欢运动和音乐）；
3. 按要求写结尾问候Kate。
第2题写作步骤：
1. 开头点题“学习让我们更好”；
2. 举具体例子：学篮球的经历（过去觉得太矮不行，朋友鼓励，学技能，每天练习，现在打得好，每周玩）；
3. 升华主题：这次经历让自己更自信勇敢，鼓励尝试新事物。
【答案】
(二)1. One possible version:
Dear Kate,
Thank you for your email. I'm very happy to tell you my changes in Grade 8.
I have changed a lot since I was in Grade 8. I used to be short and thin, but now I am tall and strong. I used to be shy, but now I am brave and outgoing. I have made many new friends, and our friendships are stronger. I have made great progress in studies, especially English, and I can even communicate with foreigners on some topics. These days, I am keen on sports and music. In a word, I am becoming better and better.
What about you? How are you doing in Spain? I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Andy
2. One possible version:
It is learning that makes us better people.
My experience of learning to play basketball is a good example. I used to think I was too short to play basketball, but my best friend encouraged me to have a try. He taught me basic skills and practiced with me every day. Little by little, I can play well now. I play basketball every week and get great fun.
This experience made me more confident and braver. I feel that we shouldn't be too shy to try new things. We should face challenges with a brave heart.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作；英语材料作文写作；时态运用
【点评】
本题考查初中英语写作能力，涵盖书信和材料作文两种常见题型，要求学生准确把握写作要点，运用恰当的时态和词汇，使内容连贯通顺，符合初中英语写作的核心要求，能有效考查学生的语言综合运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
