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【写作导引】
本单元以“介绍家人”为话题，属于“人与自我”主题范畴中“生活与学习”这一主题群。此类话题常见的写作角度涉及：①介绍自己家人的基本情况；②家庭的意义；③如何共同创建一个幸福的家庭。
【写作任务】
假如你是李华，你所在的班级组织了一场以“美丽家庭”为主题的分享活动。请根据以下提示内容，写一篇不少于60词的文章分享一下你的家庭。
要求：1. 文中须包含提示中的主要信息，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称。
本单元以“介绍家人”为话题，属于“人与自我”主题范畴中“生活与学习”这一主题群。此类话题常见的写作角度涉及：①介绍自己家人的基本情况；②家庭的意义；③如何共同创建一个幸福的家庭。
【写作任务】
假如你是李华，你所在的班级组织了一场以“美丽家庭”为主题的分享活动。请根据以下提示内容，写一篇不少于60词的文章分享一下你的家庭。
要求：1. 文中须包含提示中的主要信息，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称。
答案
【精彩范文】
My Beautiful Family
There are three people in my family.⁴ My father is tall and strong. He is very kind and funny.
He likes reading books¹ in his free time. My mother is beautiful with long hair⁵ She is kind and loves cooking delicious meals for us. I am an active student and like playing sports. We often go for a walk² in the park together on weekends³. We also enjoy watching movies and sharing laughter and tears.
I love my family. We always support and care about each other.
亮点词块
① read books 读书
② go for a walk 去散步
③ on weekends 在周末
高分句子
④ There are three people in my family.（there be 句型）
⑤ My mother is beautiful with long hair.（with 介词短语作伴随状语）
⑥ We also enjoy watching movies and sharing laughter and tears.（enjoy 后跟动词的 -ing 形式）
My Beautiful Family
There are three people in my family.⁴ My father is tall and strong. He is very kind and funny.
He likes reading books¹ in his free time. My mother is beautiful with long hair⁵ She is kind and loves cooking delicious meals for us. I am an active student and like playing sports. We often go for a walk² in the park together on weekends³. We also enjoy watching movies and sharing laughter and tears.
I love my family. We always support and care about each other.
亮点词块
① read books 读书
② go for a walk 去散步
③ on weekends 在周末
高分句子
④ There are three people in my family.（there be 句型）
⑤ My mother is beautiful with long hair.（with 介词短语作伴随状语）
⑥ We also enjoy watching movies and sharing laughter and tears.（enjoy 后跟动词的 -ing 形式）
解析
【分析】这是一篇以“My Beautiful Family”为主题的英语话题写作，需围绕给定的三个核心模块展开：家庭成员基本信息（外貌、性格、兴趣）、家人共同活动、对家庭的情感及理由。写作思路为：首先用There be句型开篇介绍家庭总人数，引出主题；接着分别描述父亲、母亲和自己的外貌、性格、兴趣，运用恰当的修饰短语；然后列举家人常一起参与的活动；最后表达对家庭的热爱，说明家人相互支持的理由，确保词数达标，不出现真实个人信息。
【解析】写作步骤如下：1. 开篇：使用There be句型介绍家庭人数，点题“My Beautiful Family”；2. 介绍成员：分别描述父亲（外貌：tall and strong；性格：kind and funny；兴趣：reading books）、母亲（外貌：beautiful with long hair；性格：kind；兴趣：cooking delicious meals）、自己（active；兴趣：playing sports）；3. 共同活动：列举周末常做的事，如go for a walk in the park、watch movies等；4. 情感表达：说明爱家庭的原因是家人相互支持、关爱，收尾。
【答案】My Beautiful Family
There are three people in my family. My father is tall and strong. He is very kind and funny. He likes reading books in his free time. My mother is beautiful with long hair. She is kind and loves cooking delicious meals for us. I am an active student and like playing sports. We often go for a walk in the park together on weekends. We also enjoy watching movies and sharing laughter and tears.
I love my family. We always support and care about each other.
【知识点】英语话题写作、there be句型、with介词短语
【点评】本文结构清晰，紧扣主题，全面覆盖题目要求的所有要点，运用了丰富的词汇和多种句型，语言流畅自然，是一篇符合要求的优秀范文，为学生提供了此类话题写作的清晰范例。
【难度系数】0.3
【解析】写作步骤如下：1. 开篇：使用There be句型介绍家庭人数，点题“My Beautiful Family”；2. 介绍成员：分别描述父亲（外貌：tall and strong；性格：kind and funny；兴趣：reading books）、母亲（外貌：beautiful with long hair；性格：kind；兴趣：cooking delicious meals）、自己（active；兴趣：playing sports）；3. 共同活动：列举周末常做的事，如go for a walk in the park、watch movies等；4. 情感表达：说明爱家庭的原因是家人相互支持、关爱，收尾。
【答案】My Beautiful Family
There are three people in my family. My father is tall and strong. He is very kind and funny. He likes reading books in his free time. My mother is beautiful with long hair. She is kind and loves cooking delicious meals for us. I am an active student and like playing sports. We often go for a walk in the park together on weekends. We also enjoy watching movies and sharing laughter and tears.
I love my family. We always support and care about each other.
【知识点】英语话题写作、there be句型、with介词短语
【点评】本文结构清晰，紧扣主题，全面覆盖题目要求的所有要点，运用了丰富的词汇和多种句型，语言流畅自然，是一篇符合要求的优秀范文，为学生提供了此类话题写作的清晰范例。
【难度系数】0.3
跟踪演练
假如你是Lucy, Gina是你的表妹，也是你的好朋友，右边的图是你们的全家福，请你以“My Big Family”为题介绍一下你的大家庭。
参考词汇: Chinese, violin, garden, reading, dumplings
要求:1. 条理清晰，书写规范，涵盖所有要点。
2. 词数70左右。
3. 不能出现真实姓名、班级及学校。
My Big Family
假如你是Lucy, Gina是你的表妹，也是你的好朋友，右边的图是你们的全家福，请你以“My Big Family”为题介绍一下你的大家庭。
参考词汇: Chinese, violin, garden, reading, dumplings
要求:1. 条理清晰，书写规范，涵盖所有要点。
2. 词数70左右。
3. 不能出现真实姓名、班级及学校。
My Big Family
Hello, my name is Lucy. I have a big family. Judy and Bob are my grandparents. They like gardening and grow lots of vegetables. Frank is my father and Grace is my mother.
They work in China, and my father is good at Chinese. My mother likes cooking dumplings. I have two brothers. They are Jack and Mike. They like reading very much. Paul is my uncle and Helen is my aunt. They have two children. They are Gina and David.
Gina is my best friend. She plays the violin really well. The cute dog is Toby. It always brings us a lot of fun. What a big family I have! I love my family.
答案
My Big Family
Hello, my name is Lucy. I have a big family. Judy and Bob are my grandparents. They like gardening and grow lots of vegetables. Frank is my father and Grace is my mother. They work in China, and my father is good at Chinese. My mother likes cooking dumplings. I have two brothers. They are Jack and Mike. They like reading very much. Paul is my uncle and Helen is my aunt. They have two children. They are Gina and David. Gina is my best friend. She plays the violin really well. The cute dog is Toby. It always brings us a lot of fun. What a big family I have! I love my family.
Hello, my name is Lucy. I have a big family. Judy and Bob are my grandparents. They like gardening and grow lots of vegetables. Frank is my father and Grace is my mother. They work in China, and my father is good at Chinese. My mother likes cooking dumplings. I have two brothers. They are Jack and Mike. They like reading very much. Paul is my uncle and Helen is my aunt. They have two children. They are Gina and David. Gina is my best friend. She plays the violin really well. The cute dog is Toby. It always brings us a lot of fun. What a big family I have! I love my family.
解析
【分析】首先以Lucy的身份开篇点明拥有大家庭，接着按辈分依次介绍祖父母的爱好、父母的工作与特长、自己的兄弟的爱好，再介绍叔叔一家的成员，点明Gina的身份与特长，最后介绍宠物狗并表达对家庭的爱，确保涵盖所有人物和参考词汇，符合词数要求。
【解析】My Big Family
Hello, my name is Lucy. I have a big family. Judy and Bob are my grandparents. They like gardening and grow lots of vegetables. Frank is my father and Grace is my mother. They work in China, and my father is good at Chinese. My mother likes cooking dumplings. I have two brothers. They are Jack and Mike. They like reading very much. Paul is my uncle and Helen is my aunt. They have two children. They are Gina and David. Gina is my best friend. She plays the violin really well. The cute dog is Toby. It always brings us a lot of fun. What a big family I have! I love my family.
【答案】My Big Family
Hello, my name is Lucy. I have a big family. Judy and Bob are my grandparents. They like gardening and grow lots of vegetables. Frank is my father and Grace is my mother. They work in China, and my father is good at Chinese. My mother likes cooking dumplings. I have two brothers. They are Jack and Mike. They like reading very much. Paul is my uncle and Helen is my aunt. They have two children. They are Gina and David. Gina is my best friend. She plays the violin really well. The cute dog is Toby. It always brings us a lot of fun. What a big family I have! I love my family.
【知识点】英语写作、家庭话题表达
【点评】本文以第一人称视角介绍大家庭，条理清晰，涵盖所有家庭成员及参考词汇，符合词数要求，语言流畅自然，情感真挚。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】My Big Family
Hello, my name is Lucy. I have a big family. Judy and Bob are my grandparents. They like gardening and grow lots of vegetables. Frank is my father and Grace is my mother. They work in China, and my father is good at Chinese. My mother likes cooking dumplings. I have two brothers. They are Jack and Mike. They like reading very much. Paul is my uncle and Helen is my aunt. They have two children. They are Gina and David. Gina is my best friend. She plays the violin really well. The cute dog is Toby. It always brings us a lot of fun. What a big family I have! I love my family.
【答案】My Big Family
Hello, my name is Lucy. I have a big family. Judy and Bob are my grandparents. They like gardening and grow lots of vegetables. Frank is my father and Grace is my mother. They work in China, and my father is good at Chinese. My mother likes cooking dumplings. I have two brothers. They are Jack and Mike. They like reading very much. Paul is my uncle and Helen is my aunt. They have two children. They are Gina and David. Gina is my best friend. She plays the violin really well. The cute dog is Toby. It always brings us a lot of fun. What a big family I have! I love my family.
【知识点】英语写作、家庭话题表达
【点评】本文以第一人称视角介绍大家庭，条理清晰，涵盖所有家庭成员及参考词汇，符合词数要求，语言流畅自然，情感真挚。
【难度系数】0.6
