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76. 为培养学生的劳动习惯,你校上周开展了“劳动周(Labour Week)”活动。请你根据表格中的信息,写一篇英语短文向学校英语报投稿,分享你的劳动经历和感受。
注意:
（1）短文必须包括表格中的所有要点,并适当发挥(如具体做了什么、感受如何);
（2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
（3）词数80左右;标题和首句已给出,不计入总词数。
Let’s enjoy working!
Last week, our school held a Labour Week.
注意:
（1）短文必须包括表格中的所有要点,并适当发挥(如具体做了什么、感受如何);
（2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
（3）词数80左右;标题和首句已给出,不计入总词数。
Let’s enjoy working!
Last week, our school held a Labour Week.
答案
76. One possible version:
Let’s enjoy working!
Last week, our school held a Labour Week. On Monday, I cleaned the classroom. We not only cleaned the windows but also swept the floor. Seeing the tidy classroom, I got a strong feeling of satisfaction. On Wednesday, I carefully cut the grass on the playground with classmates. We learnt the value of working together. On Saturday, in the city park, we picked up litter to make the park much cleaner. I felt really proud and happy. This experience made me realise the great meaning of labour.
Let’s enjoy working and make the world more beautiful!
Let’s enjoy working!
Last week, our school held a Labour Week. On Monday, I cleaned the classroom. We not only cleaned the windows but also swept the floor. Seeing the tidy classroom, I got a strong feeling of satisfaction. On Wednesday, I carefully cut the grass on the playground with classmates. We learnt the value of working together. On Saturday, in the city park, we picked up litter to make the park much cleaner. I felt really proud and happy. This experience made me realise the great meaning of labour.
Let’s enjoy working and make the world more beautiful!
解析
【分析】
首先明确写作任务：根据表格信息写英语短文向学校英语报投稿，需覆盖所有要点（周一打扫教室、周三割草、周六劳动），适当发挥细节，词数80左右，不得出现真实人名校名。解题思路：1. 紧扣三个时间节点，对应每个时间的劳动内容，补充合理细节（如打扫教室的具体动作、割草的同伴、周六的劳动场景）；2. 结合每项劳动表达真实感受，体现劳动的意义；3. 结构连贯，承接已给首句，结尾升华主题，符合投稿的积极导向。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 承接首句，描述周一劳动：On Monday, I cleaned the classroom. 补充细节We not only cleaned the windows but also swept the floor. 表达感受Seeing the tidy classroom, I got a strong feeling of satisfaction. 2. 描述周三劳动：On Wednesday, I carefully cut the grass on the playground with classmates. 补充We learnt the value of working together. 3. 描述周六劳动：On Saturday, in the city park, we picked up litter to make the park much cleaner. 表达感受I felt really proud and happy. 4. 结尾升华主题：This experience made me realise the great meaning of labour. 最后呼应标题，确保覆盖所有要点、适当发挥，符合词数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Let’s enjoy working!
Last week, our school held a Labour Week. On Monday, I cleaned the classroom. We not only cleaned the windows but also swept the floor. Seeing the tidy classroom, I got a strong feeling of satisfaction. On Wednesday, I carefully cut the grass on the playground with classmates. We learnt the value of working together. On Saturday, in the city park, we picked up litter to make the park much cleaner. I felt really proud and happy. This experience made me realise the great meaning of labour.
Let’s enjoy working and make the world more beautiful!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、话题作文
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，覆盖所有要点，补充了合理细节，情感表达真实自然，结构清晰连贯，符合英语报投稿的积极导向，是一篇优秀的初中英语写作范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
首先明确写作任务：根据表格信息写英语短文向学校英语报投稿，需覆盖所有要点（周一打扫教室、周三割草、周六劳动），适当发挥细节，词数80左右，不得出现真实人名校名。解题思路：1. 紧扣三个时间节点，对应每个时间的劳动内容，补充合理细节（如打扫教室的具体动作、割草的同伴、周六的劳动场景）；2. 结合每项劳动表达真实感受，体现劳动的意义；3. 结构连贯，承接已给首句，结尾升华主题，符合投稿的积极导向。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 承接首句，描述周一劳动：On Monday, I cleaned the classroom. 补充细节We not only cleaned the windows but also swept the floor. 表达感受Seeing the tidy classroom, I got a strong feeling of satisfaction. 2. 描述周三劳动：On Wednesday, I carefully cut the grass on the playground with classmates. 补充We learnt the value of working together. 3. 描述周六劳动：On Saturday, in the city park, we picked up litter to make the park much cleaner. 表达感受I felt really proud and happy. 4. 结尾升华主题：This experience made me realise the great meaning of labour. 最后呼应标题，确保覆盖所有要点、适当发挥，符合词数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Let’s enjoy working!
Last week, our school held a Labour Week. On Monday, I cleaned the classroom. We not only cleaned the windows but also swept the floor. Seeing the tidy classroom, I got a strong feeling of satisfaction. On Wednesday, I carefully cut the grass on the playground with classmates. We learnt the value of working together. On Saturday, in the city park, we picked up litter to make the park much cleaner. I felt really proud and happy. This experience made me realise the great meaning of labour.
Let’s enjoy working and make the world more beautiful!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、话题作文
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，覆盖所有要点，补充了合理细节，情感表达真实自然，结构清晰连贯，符合英语报投稿的积极导向，是一篇优秀的初中英语写作范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
