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【写作导引】
本单元以“季节”为话题，属于“人与自然”主题范畴中“自然生态”这一主题群。此类话题常见的写作角度涉及：①谈论自己最喜欢的天气和季节；②不同天气或者季节对我们的影响。
【写作任务】
大自然赋予了我们美好的四季，每个季节都有不同的特点。树人学校英文杂志社正在举办以“My favourite season”为题的征文活动，请你写一篇英语作文，描述你最喜欢的季节，向杂志社投稿。
要求：1. 表达中必须包含所给要点，并适当发挥；2. 词数不少于90；3. 表达中请勿出现真实校名及姓名。
My favourite season
本单元以“季节”为话题，属于“人与自然”主题范畴中“自然生态”这一主题群。此类话题常见的写作角度涉及：①谈论自己最喜欢的天气和季节；②不同天气或者季节对我们的影响。
【写作任务】
大自然赋予了我们美好的四季，每个季节都有不同的特点。树人学校英文杂志社正在举办以“My favourite season”为题的征文活动，请你写一篇英语作文，描述你最喜欢的季节，向杂志社投稿。
要求：1. 表达中必须包含所给要点，并适当发挥；2. 词数不少于90；3. 表达中请勿出现真实校名及姓名。
My favourite season
答案
My favourite season
Among the four different seasons in a year, autumn is my favourite one.
The weather in autumn is very comfortable. The hot summer is gone, and we will not feel the cold of winter soon. The temperature is usually between 15 and 25 degrees. The sky is blue and clear most of the time, and the gentle wind blows golden leaves down from the trees. It is also a harvest season, and farmers are busy picking fruits and crops in the fields.
I can do lots of fun activities in autumn. My parents often take me to have a picnic in the hills at weekends. I also love to climb the mountains with my friends to enjoy all the beautiful red maple leaves. Sometimes I pick up different kinds of fallen leaves to make lovely bookmarks.
Autumn is a season full of joy and sweetness. I always have a wonderful time in every autumn.
Among the four different seasons in a year, autumn is my favourite one.
The weather in autumn is very comfortable. The hot summer is gone, and we will not feel the cold of winter soon. The temperature is usually between 15 and 25 degrees. The sky is blue and clear most of the time, and the gentle wind blows golden leaves down from the trees. It is also a harvest season, and farmers are busy picking fruits and crops in the fields.
I can do lots of fun activities in autumn. My parents often take me to have a picnic in the hills at weekends. I also love to climb the mountains with my friends to enjoy all the beautiful red maple leaves. Sometimes I pick up different kinds of fallen leaves to make lovely bookmarks.
Autumn is a season full of joy and sweetness. I always have a wonderful time in every autumn.
解析
【分析】首先确定自己最喜欢的季节，围绕题目要求的要点（天气、活动等）展开，先点明最喜欢的季节，再描述该季节的天气特点，接着列举在该季节可进行的活动，最后总结对该季节的喜爱，确保内容连贯、符合词数要求，不出现真实信息。
【解析】第一步：开篇直接点明最喜欢的季节（如autumn）；第二步：描述该季节的天气情况，包括温度、天空、风等特点，补充收获季的属性；第三步：列举在该季节能开展的活动，比如野餐、爬山、制作书签等；第四步：总结表达对该季节的喜爱，呼应主题。
【答案】My favourite season
Among the four different seasons in a year, autumn is my favourite one.
The weather in autumn is very comfortable. The hot summer is gone, and we will not feel the cold of winter soon. The temperature is usually between 15 and 25 degrees. The sky is blue and clear most of the time, and the gentle wind blows golden leaves down from the trees. It is also a harvest season, and farmers are busy picking fruits and crops in the fields.
I can do lots of fun activities in autumn. My parents often take me to have a picnic in the hills at weekends. I also love to climb the mountains with my friends to enjoy all the beautiful red maple leaves. Sometimes I pick up different kinds of fallen leaves to make lovely bookmarks.
Autumn is a season full of joy and sweetness. I always have a wonderful time in every autumn.
【知识点】英语写作、季节话题表达
【点评】本文紧扣题目要求，围绕最喜欢的季节展开，涵盖了天气、活动等核心要点，内容充实，语言流畅，用词准确，清晰表达了对秋天的喜爱，符合征文要求。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】第一步：开篇直接点明最喜欢的季节（如autumn）；第二步：描述该季节的天气情况，包括温度、天空、风等特点，补充收获季的属性；第三步：列举在该季节能开展的活动，比如野餐、爬山、制作书签等；第四步：总结表达对该季节的喜爱，呼应主题。
【答案】My favourite season
Among the four different seasons in a year, autumn is my favourite one.
The weather in autumn is very comfortable. The hot summer is gone, and we will not feel the cold of winter soon. The temperature is usually between 15 and 25 degrees. The sky is blue and clear most of the time, and the gentle wind blows golden leaves down from the trees. It is also a harvest season, and farmers are busy picking fruits and crops in the fields.
I can do lots of fun activities in autumn. My parents often take me to have a picnic in the hills at weekends. I also love to climb the mountains with my friends to enjoy all the beautiful red maple leaves. Sometimes I pick up different kinds of fallen leaves to make lovely bookmarks.
Autumn is a season full of joy and sweetness. I always have a wonderful time in every autumn.
【知识点】英语写作、季节话题表达
【点评】本文紧扣题目要求，围绕最喜欢的季节展开，涵盖了天气、活动等核心要点，内容充实，语言流畅，用词准确，清晰表达了对秋天的喜爱，符合征文要求。
【难度系数】0.6
跟踪演练
春赏繁花，夏享纳凉，秋忙采摘，冬乐滑雪，四季流转，各有韵味。鹿鸣英语社团正在组织题为“一段季节回忆”(A Seasonal Memory) 的征文比赛，请根据以下提示，写一篇短文参赛。
A Seasonal Memory
Introduction Which season holds a special memory for you?
Main Body What did you do
the season?
How did you feel at that time?
Conclusion Why do you think this memory is special to you?
要求:1.文章须包含所有要点,可适当发挥;2.词数90左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
A Seasonal Memory
The season with a special memory for me is
春赏繁花，夏享纳凉，秋忙采摘，冬乐滑雪，四季流转，各有韵味。鹿鸣英语社团正在组织题为“一段季节回忆”(A Seasonal Memory) 的征文比赛，请根据以下提示，写一篇短文参赛。
A Seasonal Memory
Introduction Which season holds a special memory for you?
Main Body What did you do
the season?How did you feel at that time?
Conclusion Why do you think this memory is special to you?
要求:1.文章须包含所有要点,可适当发挥;2.词数90左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
A Seasonal Memory
The season with a special memory for me is
答案
A Seasonal Memory
The season with a special memory for me is spring. When spring arrives, nature wakes up and my heart is filled with hope and joy.
Last spring, my family and I went to the local park to enjoy the lovely flowers. The air was full of the sweet smell of roses and the gentle wind was refreshing. I remember running on the grass, feeling the warmth of the sun on my face. At that time, I felt truly happy and free.
This memory is special to me because it makes me think of the simple joys of life and the love of my family.
The season with a special memory for me is spring. When spring arrives, nature wakes up and my heart is filled with hope and joy.
Last spring, my family and I went to the local park to enjoy the lovely flowers. The air was full of the sweet smell of roses and the gentle wind was refreshing. I remember running on the grass, feeling the warmth of the sun on my face. At that time, I felt truly happy and free.
This memory is special to me because it makes me think of the simple joys of life and the love of my family.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语话题作文，要求围绕“一段季节回忆”展开写作。首先需确定承载特殊回忆的季节，接着在主体部分叙述该季节做的事、当时的感受，最后说明回忆特殊的原因，要包含所有提示要点，适当发挥，词数符合要求。
【解析】
先确定特殊季节为春天，开头引出主题；主体部分叙述去年春天和家人去公园赏花的经历，描述环境与自身感受；结尾点明回忆特殊的意义，确保内容完整、语言通顺。
【答案】
A Seasonal Memory
The season with a special memory for me is spring. When spring arrives, nature wakes up and my heart is filled with hope and joy.
Last spring, my family and I went to the local park to enjoy the lovely flowers. The air was full of the sweet smell of roses and the gentle wind was refreshing. I remember running on the grass, feeling the warmth of the sun on my face. At that time, I felt truly happy and free.
This memory is special to me because it makes me think of the simple joys of life and the love of my family.
【知识点】
英语话题写作；季节话题表达
【点评】
作文紧扣主题，涵盖所有提示要点，内容具体真实，情感真挚，语言流畅自然，符合征文要求，能清晰传递季节回忆的意义。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语话题作文，要求围绕“一段季节回忆”展开写作。首先需确定承载特殊回忆的季节，接着在主体部分叙述该季节做的事、当时的感受，最后说明回忆特殊的原因，要包含所有提示要点，适当发挥，词数符合要求。
【解析】
先确定特殊季节为春天，开头引出主题；主体部分叙述去年春天和家人去公园赏花的经历，描述环境与自身感受；结尾点明回忆特殊的意义，确保内容完整、语言通顺。
【答案】
A Seasonal Memory
The season with a special memory for me is spring. When spring arrives, nature wakes up and my heart is filled with hope and joy.
Last spring, my family and I went to the local park to enjoy the lovely flowers. The air was full of the sweet smell of roses and the gentle wind was refreshing. I remember running on the grass, feeling the warmth of the sun on my face. At that time, I felt truly happy and free.
This memory is special to me because it makes me think of the simple joys of life and the love of my family.
【知识点】
英语话题写作；季节话题表达
【点评】
作文紧扣主题，涵盖所有提示要点，内容具体真实，情感真挚，语言流畅自然，符合征文要求，能清晰传递季节回忆的意义。
【难度系数】
0.5
