写作实例
审主题 审人称：以第一人称为主 审时态：一般现在时
假如你是李明，你是学校英语社团的成员之一。本周二是你们社团的活动日。本周讨论的话题是“How do you celebrate your birthday?”。请你根据提示内容，写一篇短文介绍自己通常如何过生日。
提示：1.Who do you celebrate your birthday with?
2.What food do you have on your birthday?
3.What do you do on your birthday?
要求：1.必须包含上述提示内容，可适当发挥；2.词数70左右。
写作支架

在写作时，要注意开头和结尾。在开头部分可以巧妙地引出主题。比如，可以以提问的方式引出话题。如：Do you know what sport I like best?你知道我最喜欢什么运动吗？
初中英语
七年级
上册
人教版
教材原文
P72 My birthday is on 13th June.
P72 On that day, I always eat birthday noodles with eggs.
P72 Long noodles are a symbol of long life.
优秀范文
My name is Li Ming. My birthday is on 13th June. Let me tell you how I usually celebrate my birthday.①
I usually celebrate it with my family. We often have dinner together. On that day, I always eat birthday noodles with eggs. Long noodles are a symbol of long life.② After dinner, we sing the birthday song together and I blow out the candles on my cake. I can always get a lot of birthday presents from my family.
In a word, celebrating my birthday with my family is really great.③
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智慧背囊
亮点评析
①首段以祈使句引起下文。
②介绍“长寿面”的文化意义，使文章内容更丰富。
③ 使用了“In a word...”总结全文，和首段相呼应。

My name is Li Ming. My birthday is on 13th June. Let me tell you how I usually celebrate my birthday.
I usually celebrate it with my family. We often have dinner together. On that day, I always eat birthday noodles with eggs. Long noodles are a symbol of long life. After dinner, we sing the birthday song together and I blow out the candles on my cake. I can always get a lot of birthday presents from my family.
In a word, celebrating my birthday with my family is really great.

1. 审题要点：本文要求以第一人称李明的视角，使用一般现在时写作，必须覆盖三个提示要点：和谁庆祝生日、生日当天的食物、生日当天的活动，词数控制在70左右，符合七年级上册的英语知识范围。
2. 写作思路：
① 开头：先自我介绍，点明生日日期，用高分句式"Let me tell you..."自然引出下文，介绍自己的庆生方式；
② 主体部分：依次说明自己通常和家人庆生，生日会吃加鸡蛋的长寿面，补充说明长寿面是长寿的文化象征，之后描写饭后唱生日歌、吹蜡烛、收礼物的活动，完整覆盖所有提示内容；
③ 结尾：用"In a word..."总结全文，表达过生日的愉悦感受，和开头形成呼应。
3. 亮点说明：全部使用本册教材的核心句型和词汇，加入传统生日习俗的小知识，内容充实，语法准确，符合写作要求。