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学校英文网站最近正在举行主题为“My favourite invention”的征文比赛。假设你是王华，打算参加这次比赛。请根据以下内容提示，写一篇英语短文，不少于80词。
1. What’s your favourite invention?
2. Who was the inventor?
3. When and how was it invented?
4. What was it used for?
5. How has it developed over time?
My favourite invention
Hello, everyone! My name is Wang Hua. There are lots of great inventions in the world. They have changed our world a lot. However, my favourite invention is
[审题指导]1.体裁:说明文 2.话题:发明创造
3.人称:以第三人称为主
4.时态:以一般过去时和一般现在时为主
[思路构建]
[精彩范文]
My favourite invention
Hello, everyone! My name is Wang Hua. There are lots of great inventions in the world.
They have changed our world a lot. However, my favourite invention is the light bulb.
It was invented by Thomas Edison, a great American inventor. And it was invented in 1879. The first light bulb was made of glass and metal. It was used for providing people with light and the invention made it possible for people to work and study at night. Now the invention is improved a lot. People are making better lighting products. They can help to save energy and protect the environment. What’s more, they are cheaper.
I hope it will become more and more useful in the future.
高分点评: 本文采用“总分总”三段式的结构，思路清晰；介绍发明时恰当地运用了一般过去时的被动语态，体现了作者良好的基本功；灵活运用了一些短语以及结构，比如be made of, what’s more, more and more, in the future, make it possible for sb. to do sth.”为文章添彩。
实战演练
历史上有很多伟大的发明,它们极大地改变了人们的生活。假设你是李辉,你学校的英文社团正在开展以“发明改变命运,智慧创造财富”为主题的征文活动。请你选择一项发明,写一篇字数80~100的短文进行投稿。
内容包括:
1.简单介绍一项发明;2.此项发明的影响及意义。
There have been many great inventions in history.
学校英文网站最近正在举行主题为“My favourite invention”的征文比赛。假设你是王华，打算参加这次比赛。请根据以下内容提示，写一篇英语短文，不少于80词。
1. What’s your favourite invention?
2. Who was the inventor?
3. When and how was it invented?
4. What was it used for?
5. How has it developed over time?
My favourite invention
Hello, everyone! My name is Wang Hua. There are lots of great inventions in the world. They have changed our world a lot. However, my favourite invention is
[审题指导]1.体裁:说明文 2.话题:发明创造
3.人称:以第三人称为主
4.时态:以一般过去时和一般现在时为主
[思路构建]
[精彩范文]
My favourite invention
Hello, everyone! My name is Wang Hua. There are lots of great inventions in the world.
They have changed our world a lot. However, my favourite invention is the light bulb.
It was invented by Thomas Edison, a great American inventor. And it was invented in 1879. The first light bulb was made of glass and metal. It was used for providing people with light and the invention made it possible for people to work and study at night. Now the invention is improved a lot. People are making better lighting products. They can help to save energy and protect the environment. What’s more, they are cheaper.
I hope it will become more and more useful in the future.
高分点评: 本文采用“总分总”三段式的结构，思路清晰；介绍发明时恰当地运用了一般过去时的被动语态，体现了作者良好的基本功；灵活运用了一些短语以及结构，比如be made of, what’s more, more and more, in the future, make it possible for sb. to do sth.”为文章添彩。
实战演练
历史上有很多伟大的发明,它们极大地改变了人们的生活。假设你是李辉,你学校的英文社团正在开展以“发明改变命运,智慧创造财富”为主题的征文活动。请你选择一项发明,写一篇字数80~100的短文进行投稿。
内容包括:
1.简单介绍一项发明;2.此项发明的影响及意义。
There have been many great inventions in history.
I think one of the greatest inventions is the wheel because it is still very important today.
The wheel was invented a few thousand years ago and it was made of wood at that time.
However, we still don't know who invented it.
This invention has made travelling faster and made it easier to carry heavy things.
With wheels, people can travel long distances to farther places.
People can exchange goods between different places.
Besides, knowledge and culture spread all around the world.
It helps the society develop in a rapid way.
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实战演练
There have been many great inventions in history. I think one of the greatest inventions is the wheel because it is still very important today.
The wheel was invented a few thousand years ago and it was made of wood at that time. However, we still don't know who invented it.
This invention has made travelling faster and made it easier to carry heavy things. With wheels, people can travel long distances to farther places. People can exchange goods between different places. Besides, knowledge and culture spread all around the world. It helps the society develop in a rapid way.
【思路分析】第一段:引出话题,向大家介绍发明——轮子;第二段:介绍轮子的发明时间等相关信息;第三段:介绍轮子发明的影响及意义。
实战演练
There have been many great inventions in history. I think one of the greatest inventions is the wheel because it is still very important today.
The wheel was invented a few thousand years ago and it was made of wood at that time. However, we still don't know who invented it.
This invention has made travelling faster and made it easier to carry heavy things. With wheels, people can travel long distances to farther places. People can exchange goods between different places. Besides, knowledge and culture spread all around the world. It helps the society develop in a rapid way.
【思路分析】第一段:引出话题,向大家介绍发明——轮子;第二段:介绍轮子的发明时间等相关信息;第三段:介绍轮子发明的影响及意义。
