八、写作。7分
每个人都有自己的梦想。根据下面的思维导图,请以"My dream"为题,用英文写一篇短文,
说一说你的梦想。
要求:语句通顺、条理清晰、标点正确;不少于5句话。

My dream
I want to be in the future.

One possible version:
My dream
I want to be a teacher in the future. I have
such a dream because teachers are very great.
They teach children lots of useful knowledge
and help them grow up happily. My English
teacher often smiles at us and makes her classes
fun, which makes me love this job even more.
To make my dream come true, I will study hard
every day. I will read more books to learn more
things. I believe if I keep trying, my dream will
come true one day.

【分析】本题为英语话题写作题，主题是“My dream”，需依据思维导图的三个核心问题构思内容：一是明确未来想从事的职业，二是说明拥有该梦想的原因，三是阐述实现梦想的具体做法。写作时要围绕这三点展开，保证语句通顺、条理清晰，句子数量不少于5句，符合英语表达规范。
【解析】首先确定梦想职业（如教师），接着说明原因：教师伟大，能传授知识、助力成长，可结合自身老师的影响增强说服力；最后写实现计划：努力学习、多读书积累知识。写作时注意时态（一般现在时表客观事实，一般将来时表计划）的正确使用，标点符号规范，确保内容连贯。
【答案】One possible version:
My dream
I want to be a teacher in the future. I have such a dream because teachers are very great. They teach children lots of useful knowledge and help them grow up happily. My English teacher often smiles at us and makes her classes fun, which makes me love this job even more. To make my dream come true, I will study hard every day. I will read more books to learn more things. I believe if I keep trying, my dream will come true one day.
【知识点】英语话题写作、英语句子表达
【点评】本题围绕“梦想”话题，借助思维导图提示降低写作难度，考查学生围绕要点组织语言的能力，符合初中英语写作的考查要求，有助于培养学生的表达逻辑。
【难度系数】0.6