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▶“答案与解析”见D6
[97]佳作赏析
品读范文,拆解核心技巧
[2026原创]新学期开始了,你怀着激动又忐忑的心情见到了你的新同学和新老师,你的第一堂课肯定很有趣吧。请以“My first class of the new term”为题,描述课堂上老师与同学们之间发生的故事。词数80左右。
[高分范文]
My first class of the new term
When I walk into the classroom for the first class of the new term¹, I feel very nervous². Our teacher warmly greets me². He looks very friendly². He introduces us to the learning plan for the term. In class, my classmates actively join in discussions, sharing their ideas. I share summer vacation experiences with my deskmate. Our teacher's class is lively, and we not only³ learn knowledge but also⁴ form friendships. This class fills me with confidence and excitement for the new semester.⁴
[名师点评]
① 场景清晰:开头点明时间、地点与事件,直接切入主题,为下文的情感变化和课堂场景描写做好铺垫。
② 自然情感:用feel very nervous写出初次进入课堂的心情,再通过老师warmly greets me、looks very friendly的细节,形成情绪的自然转折,让读者能感受到课堂氛围的变化,增强了文章的画面感。
③ 亮点突出:用“not only ... but also ...”连接课堂收获,既体现了知识学习,也写出了同学友谊的收获,让句子结构更丰富。
④ 首尾呼应:以“This class fills me with confidence and excitement for the new semester.”收束全文,回应了开篇的紧张情绪,传递出对新学期的期待,让文章的情感完整闭环,充满感染力。
[素材积累]
储备金句,提升语言质感
[开头句]
1. You are now in junior high!
2. Are you ready for your new life?
3. I am a seventh-grade student.
4. The new semester has started, and I have made a plan for it.
[中间句]
1. But junior high is like a river.
2. Turn a big task into small ones.
3. I will also learn from my mistakes and correct them.
4. Second, I will take part in more activities to broaden my horizons.
[结尾句]
1. You will go through storms towards the sea.
2. I'm so lucky to have a teacher like him.
3. With hard work, I believe I can make this term a successful one.
[名言警句]
1. A goal without a plan is just a wish.
没有计划的目标只是一个愿望。
2. The only way to do great work is to love what you do.
做出伟大工作的唯一方式是热爱你所做的。
3. The beginning is the most important part of the work.
开头是工作中最重要的部分。
4. A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step.
千里之行,始于足下。
▶“答案与解析”见D6
[97]佳作赏析
品读范文,拆解核心技巧
[2026原创]新学期开始了,你怀着激动又忐忑的心情见到了你的新同学和新老师,你的第一堂课肯定很有趣吧。请以“My first class of the new term”为题,描述课堂上老师与同学们之间发生的故事。词数80左右。
[高分范文]
My first class of the new term
When I walk into the classroom for the first class of the new term¹, I feel very nervous². Our teacher warmly greets me². He looks very friendly². He introduces us to the learning plan for the term. In class, my classmates actively join in discussions, sharing their ideas. I share summer vacation experiences with my deskmate. Our teacher's class is lively, and we not only³ learn knowledge but also⁴ form friendships. This class fills me with confidence and excitement for the new semester.⁴
[名师点评]
① 场景清晰:开头点明时间、地点与事件,直接切入主题,为下文的情感变化和课堂场景描写做好铺垫。
② 自然情感:用feel very nervous写出初次进入课堂的心情,再通过老师warmly greets me、looks very friendly的细节,形成情绪的自然转折,让读者能感受到课堂氛围的变化,增强了文章的画面感。
③ 亮点突出:用“not only ... but also ...”连接课堂收获,既体现了知识学习,也写出了同学友谊的收获,让句子结构更丰富。
④ 首尾呼应:以“This class fills me with confidence and excitement for the new semester.”收束全文,回应了开篇的紧张情绪,传递出对新学期的期待,让文章的情感完整闭环,充满感染力。
[素材积累]
储备金句,提升语言质感
[开头句]
1. You are now in junior high!
2. Are you ready for your new life?
3. I am a seventh-grade student.
4. The new semester has started, and I have made a plan for it.
[中间句]
1. But junior high is like a river.
2. Turn a big task into small ones.
3. I will also learn from my mistakes and correct them.
4. Second, I will take part in more activities to broaden my horizons.
[结尾句]
1. You will go through storms towards the sea.
2. I'm so lucky to have a teacher like him.
3. With hard work, I believe I can make this term a successful one.
[名言警句]
1. A goal without a plan is just a wish.
没有计划的目标只是一个愿望。
2. The only way to do great work is to love what you do.
做出伟大工作的唯一方式是热爱你所做的。
3. The beginning is the most important part of the work.
开头是工作中最重要的部分。
4. A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step.
千里之行,始于足下。
答案
My first class of the new term
When I walk into the classroom for the first class of the new term, I feel very nervous. Our teacher warmly greets me. He looks very friendly. He introduces us to the learning plan for the term. In class, my classmates actively join in discussions, sharing their ideas. I share summer vacation experiences with my deskmate. Our teacher's class is lively, and we not only learn knowledge but also form friendships. This class fills me with confidence and excitement for the new semester.
When I walk into the classroom for the first class of the new term, I feel very nervous. Our teacher warmly greets me. He looks very friendly. He introduces us to the learning plan for the term. In class, my classmates actively join in discussions, sharing their ideas. I share summer vacation experiences with my deskmate. Our teacher's class is lively, and we not only learn knowledge but also form friendships. This class fills me with confidence and excitement for the new semester.
解析
【分析】
这是一道英语写作题，要求以“My first class of the new term”为题，描述新学期第一堂课的师生故事，词数80左右。解题思路：1. 开头点明场景与初始心情，直接切入主题；2. 中间围绕课堂展开，加入老师的友好细节、同学互动等内容，体现课堂生动性；3. 结尾点明课堂收获，呼应开头心情，传递对新学期的期待，同时运用合适句式丰富表达，控制词数符合要求。
【解析】
写作需按以下步骤完成：1. 搭建结构：采用“开头点题—中间叙事—结尾升华”的记叙文结构；2. 填充内容：紧扣主题，写自己进教室的紧张、老师的热情问候、同学的讨论互动等细节；3. 优化表达：用“not only...but also...”连接课堂收获，提升句式多样性；4. 控制词数在80左右，确保内容连贯、情感自然。
【答案】
My first class of the new term
When I walk into the classroom for the first class of the new term, I feel very nervous. Our teacher warmly greets me. He looks very friendly. He introduces us to the learning plan for the term. In class, my classmates actively join in discussions, sharing their ideas. I share summer vacation experiences with my deskmate. Our teacher's class is lively, and we not only learn knowledge but also form friendships. This class fills me with confidence and excitement for the new semester.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作、英语常用句式运用、英语写作情感表达
【点评】
范文紧扣题目要求，场景清晰，开头直接切入主题；情感自然转折，通过细节描写体现课堂氛围变化；运用“not only...but also...”丰富句式，结尾呼应开头，传递对新学期的期待，是符合要求的优秀习作。
【难度系数】
0.6
这是一道英语写作题，要求以“My first class of the new term”为题，描述新学期第一堂课的师生故事，词数80左右。解题思路：1. 开头点明场景与初始心情，直接切入主题；2. 中间围绕课堂展开，加入老师的友好细节、同学互动等内容，体现课堂生动性；3. 结尾点明课堂收获，呼应开头心情，传递对新学期的期待，同时运用合适句式丰富表达，控制词数符合要求。
【解析】
写作需按以下步骤完成：1. 搭建结构：采用“开头点题—中间叙事—结尾升华”的记叙文结构；2. 填充内容：紧扣主题，写自己进教室的紧张、老师的热情问候、同学的讨论互动等细节；3. 优化表达：用“not only...but also...”连接课堂收获，提升句式多样性；4. 控制词数在80左右，确保内容连贯、情感自然。
【答案】
My first class of the new term
When I walk into the classroom for the first class of the new term, I feel very nervous. Our teacher warmly greets me. He looks very friendly. He introduces us to the learning plan for the term. In class, my classmates actively join in discussions, sharing their ideas. I share summer vacation experiences with my deskmate. Our teacher's class is lively, and we not only learn knowledge but also form friendships. This class fills me with confidence and excitement for the new semester.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作、英语常用句式运用、英语写作情感表达
【点评】
范文紧扣题目要求，场景清晰，开头直接切入主题；情感自然转折，通过细节描写体现课堂氛围变化；运用“not only...but also...”丰富句式，结尾呼应开头，传递对新学期的期待，是符合要求的优秀习作。
【难度系数】
0.6
