写作突破
一、题目呈现
旅行可以让人放松身心，增长见识。请你以“My Unforgettable Holiday Story”为题，用英语写一篇短文，叙述一次让你印象深刻的旅行，并谈谈你的感悟及收获。
要求：要点齐全，语句通顺，行文连贯，可适当发挥，不少于80词。
二、写作模板
开篇点题 → 引出话题：
主要内容 → 详细叙述旅行中的重要活动：
收篇结尾 → 升华主题，谈谈感悟及收获：
（标注：图1）
三、经典词句
单词：travel, holiday, beautiful, countryside, surprised, scenery, landscape, sight, relax, explore, smile
短语：such a good experience, get together, so ... that ..., look for
句子：
①I went to ... on vacation.（标注：图2）
②Last autumn, my family and I took a train to ... for a holiday.
③On the first/second/last day, ...
④We felt a little tired but we enjoyed the trip.
⑤It's truly an unforgettable experience.

引出话题：Last winter holiday, I travelled to ...
详细叙述旅行中的重要活动：
We visited ... We also ...
升华主题，谈谈感悟及收获：
This trip not only ... but also ... It's truly an unforgettable experience.

【分析】
本题为英语话题写作题，要求以“My Unforgettable Holiday Story”为题，叙述一次难忘的旅行并分享感悟收获。解题思路：首先开篇点题，用给定的引出句明确旅行的时间与地点；接着详细叙述旅行中的重要活动，结合提供的单词、短语或句子展开；最后升华主题，用指定句子表达旅行带来的感悟与收获，确保要点齐全、语句通顺、行文连贯，满足不少于80词的要求。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 开篇点题：选用给定的引出话题句，如“Last winter holiday, I travelled to a small village in the countryside.”；2. 主要内容：详细描述旅行活动，例如“We visited the local organic farm and picked fresh cabbages. We also walked along the river and took many photos of the beautiful scenery.”；3. 收篇结尾：升华主题，结合感悟，如“This trip not only helped me relax from heavy school work but also made me realize the charm of rural life. It's truly an unforgettable experience.”，全程注意语句通顺、逻辑连贯，符合写作要求。
【答案】
引出话题：Last winter holiday, I travelled to a small village in the countryside.
详细叙述旅行中的重要活动：We visited the local organic farm and picked fresh cabbages. We also walked along the river and took many photos of the beautiful scenery.
升华主题，谈谈感悟及收获：This trip not only helped me relax from heavy school work but also made me realize the charm of rural life. It's truly an unforgettable experience.
【知识点】
英语话题写作、英语记叙文表达
【点评】
本题围绕“难忘的旅行”话题展开，考察学生的英语叙事能力、语言组织能力及对给定词句的运用能力，要求学生结合生活实际完成写作，符合初中英语写作的考察目标，难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.6