2026年上海作业五年级英语上册沪教版五四制第130页答案
Ⅸ. Writing(写作)4%
请以“A letter to future me”为主题,写一篇不少于50词的信。
要求:1.语句通顺,书写规范;
2.必须包含你所面临的问题以及改进措施。
Dear future me,
Do you still remember the shy girl in Grade 5? I was always nervous when speaking in front of the class. But now, I'm trying to change! I practise speaking English with my deskmate every morning. I also joined the school's Storytelling Club. Sometimes I still feel a little nervous, but I never give up.
I hope you're proud of the little steps I'm taking today!








Yourself in Grade 5

答案

参考范文:
Dear future me,
Do you still remember the shy girl in Grade 5? I was always nervous when speaking in front of the class. But now, I'm trying to change! I practise speaking English with my deskmate every morning. I also joined the school's Storytelling Club. Sometimes I still feel a little nervous, but I never give up.
I hope you're proud of the little steps I'm taking today!
Yourself in Grade 5

解析

【分析】
写作时需先明确英语书信的格式,开头用称呼、结尾落款要规范;再紧扣主题,先点明五年级时面临的具体问题,接着写出对应的改进措施,最后表达对未来自己的期许,确保语句通顺、字数达标。
【解析】
按照要求完成写作:1. 遵循英语书信格式,使用正确的称呼与落款;2. 内容包含指定的“面临的问题”(当众发言紧张)和“改进措施”(和同桌练英语、加入讲故事俱乐部);3. 语句通顺,符合小学英语写作要求,满足字数要求。
【答案】
参考范文:
Dear future me,
Do you still remember the shy girl in Grade 5? I was always nervous when speaking in front of the class. But now, I'm trying to change! I practise speaking English with my deskmate every morning. I also joined the school's Storytelling Club. Sometimes I still feel a little nervous, but I never give up.
I hope you're proud of the little steps I'm taking today!
Yourself in Grade 5
【知识点】
英语书信写作、话题作文
【点评】
范文紧扣主题,清晰呈现了当前面临的问题及具体改进措施,结构完整,符合写作要求,适合小学阶段学生参考。
【难度系数】
0.7