任务五 书面表达
(一)写作任务
假如你校学生会正在开展“动物保护周”系列活动,请根据以下问题提示,用英语写一篇短文,介绍你最喜欢的野生动物。
1. What is your favourite wild animal?
2. What does it look like?
3. What are the habits of the animal?
4. What problems is the animal facing? What can we do with them?
(二)写作语料
1. ... are big and heavy/strong/small/lovely/cute.
2. They eat meat/fish/plants/insects...
3. They are good at...
4. They seldom/often...
5. Sadly, there are fewer and fewer...
6. People catch... for...
7. If we do nothing, soon there may be none/no... left.
(三)谋篇布局
Part 1:动物的外貌特征和能力
1. They are small and cute.
2. They have bright eyes, long thin tails and golden fur.
3. They are good at...
Part 2:动物的习性
They are good at climbing trees and jumping. This can protect them from danger.
Part 3:动物当前面临的危险,以及应该采取什么措施来保护它们
1. They will have fewer living areas and less food to eat.
2. We should take action right now.
(四)习作欣赏
Golden monkeys are one of the most precious animals in China. They are small and cute. They have bright eyes, long thin tails and golden fur. I think that they are the most beautiful monkeys in the world.
Golden monkeys are good at climbing trees and jumping. This can protect them from danger. In the forests, they live in groups. They enjoy playing and hunting for food with their family members.
Sadly, they are facing some problems. People cut down too many trees. As a result, they will have fewer living areas and less food to eat. I think that we should make laws to protect them. We can also invite more people to join us to protect these beautiful animals.
(五)我的习作
(一)写作任务
假如你校学生会正在开展“动物保护周”系列活动,请根据以下问题提示,用英语写一篇短文,介绍你最喜欢的野生动物。
1. What is your favourite wild animal?
2. What does it look like?
3. What are the habits of the animal?
4. What problems is the animal facing? What can we do with them?
(二)写作语料
1. ... are big and heavy/strong/small/lovely/cute.
2. They eat meat/fish/plants/insects...
3. They are good at...
4. They seldom/often...
5. Sadly, there are fewer and fewer...
6. People catch... for...
7. If we do nothing, soon there may be none/no... left.
(三)谋篇布局
Part 1:动物的外貌特征和能力
1. They are small and cute.
2. They have bright eyes, long thin tails and golden fur.
3. They are good at...
Part 2:动物的习性
They are good at climbing trees and jumping. This can protect them from danger.
Part 3:动物当前面临的危险,以及应该采取什么措施来保护它们
1. They will have fewer living areas and less food to eat.
2. We should take action right now.
(四)习作欣赏
Golden monkeys are one of the most precious animals in China. They are small and cute. They have bright eyes, long thin tails and golden fur. I think that they are the most beautiful monkeys in the world.
Golden monkeys are good at climbing trees and jumping. This can protect them from danger. In the forests, they live in groups. They enjoy playing and hunting for food with their family members.
Sadly, they are facing some problems. People cut down too many trees. As a result, they will have fewer living areas and less food to eat. I think that we should make laws to protect them. We can also invite more people to join us to protect these beautiful animals.
(五)我的习作
答案
My favourite wild animal is the giant panda.
They are very cute and look like soft white bears. They have black and white fur, round black eye circles and fat bodies. They are the most lovely animals in my eyes.
Pandas are good at climbing trees even though they are fat. They mainly eat fresh bamboo, and they often spend over 10 hours a day eating. They seldom move far away from their home areas.
Sadly, there are fewer and fewer wild pandas now. People cut down too many bamboo forests, so pandas are losing their living areas and have less food to eat. Some people also catch pandas for their soft fur. If we do nothing, soon there may be no pandas left in the wild. We should take action right now. We can build more nature reserves for pandas, and we can also invite more people to learn about the importance of protecting pandas.
They are very cute and look like soft white bears. They have black and white fur, round black eye circles and fat bodies. They are the most lovely animals in my eyes.
Pandas are good at climbing trees even though they are fat. They mainly eat fresh bamboo, and they often spend over 10 hours a day eating. They seldom move far away from their home areas.
Sadly, there are fewer and fewer wild pandas now. People cut down too many bamboo forests, so pandas are losing their living areas and have less food to eat. Some people also catch pandas for their soft fur. If we do nothing, soon there may be no pandas left in the wild. We should take action right now. We can build more nature reserves for pandas, and we can also invite more people to learn about the importance of protecting pandas.
解析
本次写作围绕“介绍最喜欢的野生动物”主题展开,需要覆盖题干给出的4个提示要点,可参考给出的语料和谋篇布局搭建清晰的文章结构:
1. 开篇点明自己最喜欢的野生动物,详细描述它的外貌特征;
2. 第二部分介绍该动物的生活习性、擅长的相关技能,符合动物真实的生存特点;
3. 最后部分点明该动物当前面临的生存危机,给出切实可行的保护举措,贴合“动物保护周”的活动主题,行文尽量使用本单元所学的重点短语,保证语句通顺、逻辑清晰,符合八年级的英语写作要求。
1. 开篇点明自己最喜欢的野生动物,详细描述它的外貌特征;
2. 第二部分介绍该动物的生活习性、擅长的相关技能,符合动物真实的生存特点;
3. 最后部分点明该动物当前面临的生存危机,给出切实可行的保护举措,贴合“动物保护周”的活动主题,行文尽量使用本单元所学的重点短语,保证语句通顺、逻辑清晰,符合八年级的英语写作要求。
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