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[经典例题]
目前,人们对大熊猫保护工作十分关注。假设你是李华,正在参加学校举办的以“Giving pandas a good life”为主题的演讲比赛。请根据图片提示,写一篇英语发言稿。
注意:1. 词数80左右,已给出部分(画直线部分)不计入总词数;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 短文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
[高分范文]
Good morning, everyone,
① I'm Li Hua. My topic is giving pandas a good life.
② Pandas are not only cute but also friendly to people. They like eating bamboo and playing. But, pandas are in danger now. Many people cut down lots of bamboo forests for their own use, ③ so pandas may not have enough food to eat. As a result, they are sad to leave and lose their homes.
④ I hope we can prevent people cutting down bamboo forests and build more natural panda homes.
That's all. Thank you for listening.
[名师点评]
短文是发言稿,要求学生介绍大熊猫的个性、生活习惯和现状,并提出相应措施,呼吁大家保护大熊猫。
① 开篇表明观点,概括了演讲主题;
② “not only ... but also ...”短语的使用体现了作者扎实的写作功底;
③ 连词so和短语as a result的使用使行文流畅;
④ 使用了宾语从句,表达了作者的期盼,提出了措施。
素材积累
[开头句]
1. Giant pandas are so popular all over the world!
2. Let me tell you something about giant pandas.
[中间句]
1. It is difficult for them to have babies.
2. They live in the Arctic.
[结尾句]
1. We believe things will get better and better, for where there is Xiwang, there is hope.
2. Let's take action to protect them.
[名言警句]
1. Be kind to animals and live in harmony! 善待动物,和谐相处!
2. Protect animals and maintain ecological balance. 保护动物,维护生态平衡。
写作演练
[小试身手]
某英文杂志正在征集保护动物方面的文章,你对此很感兴趣,上网了解到国家一级保护动物金丝猴被列为濒危物种。请根据以下提示写一篇介绍金丝猴的英语短文投稿,并呼吁大家保护金丝猴。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 短文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
[思路点拨]
① 人称:以第三人称为主;② 时态:一般现在时;③ 写作时要注意顺序,先介绍金丝猴的外貌、性格和分布,再介绍金丝猴的特点和爱好,最后介绍金丝猴的现状并提出你的建议。
[妙笔生花]
(更多精彩作文素材见“背记手册”)
[经典例题]
目前,人们对大熊猫保护工作十分关注。假设你是李华,正在参加学校举办的以“Giving pandas a good life”为主题的演讲比赛。请根据图片提示,写一篇英语发言稿。
注意:1. 词数80左右,已给出部分(画直线部分)不计入总词数;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 短文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
[高分范文]
Good morning, everyone,
① I'm Li Hua. My topic is giving pandas a good life.
② Pandas are not only cute but also friendly to people. They like eating bamboo and playing. But, pandas are in danger now. Many people cut down lots of bamboo forests for their own use, ③ so pandas may not have enough food to eat. As a result, they are sad to leave and lose their homes.
④ I hope we can prevent people cutting down bamboo forests and build more natural panda homes.
That's all. Thank you for listening.
[名师点评]
短文是发言稿,要求学生介绍大熊猫的个性、生活习惯和现状,并提出相应措施,呼吁大家保护大熊猫。
① 开篇表明观点,概括了演讲主题;
② “not only ... but also ...”短语的使用体现了作者扎实的写作功底;
③ 连词so和短语as a result的使用使行文流畅;
④ 使用了宾语从句,表达了作者的期盼,提出了措施。
素材积累
[开头句]
1. Giant pandas are so popular all over the world!
2. Let me tell you something about giant pandas.
[中间句]
1. It is difficult for them to have babies.
2. They live in the Arctic.
[结尾句]
1. We believe things will get better and better, for where there is Xiwang, there is hope.
2. Let's take action to protect them.
[名言警句]
1. Be kind to animals and live in harmony! 善待动物,和谐相处!
2. Protect animals and maintain ecological balance. 保护动物,维护生态平衡。
写作演练
[小试身手]
某英文杂志正在征集保护动物方面的文章,你对此很感兴趣,上网了解到国家一级保护动物金丝猴被列为濒危物种。请根据以下提示写一篇介绍金丝猴的英语短文投稿,并呼吁大家保护金丝猴。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 短文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
[思路点拨]
① 人称:以第三人称为主;② 时态:一般现在时;③ 写作时要注意顺序,先介绍金丝猴的外貌、性格和分布,再介绍金丝猴的特点和爱好,最后介绍金丝猴的现状并提出你的建议。
[妙笔生花]
Golden monkeys are a kind of special animal. They mainly live in China. As you can see, they are golden and they have round mouths. They are not only cute and beautiful but also very clever and friendly.
They are very good at climbing trees. As for food, they like eating leaves and fruits, and they live in the forests.
Now, the golden monkeys are in great danger, because people cut down trees and kill them for their fur. Let's take action to help save the golden monkeys.
(更多精彩作文素材见“背记手册”)
答案
One possible version:
Golden monkeys are a kind of special animal. They mainly live in China. As you can see, they are golden and they have round mouths. They are not only cute and beautiful but also very clever and friendly.
They are very good at climbing trees. As for food, they like eating leaves and fruits, and they live in the forests.
Now, the golden monkeys are in great danger, because people cut down trees and kill them for their fur. Let's take action to help save the golden monkeys.
Golden monkeys are a kind of special animal. They mainly live in China. As you can see, they are golden and they have round mouths. They are not only cute and beautiful but also very clever and friendly.
They are very good at climbing trees. As for food, they like eating leaves and fruits, and they live in the forests.
Now, the golden monkeys are in great danger, because people cut down trees and kill them for their fur. Let's take action to help save the golden monkeys.
