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如何以动物名义给人类写一封信
本单元的写作主题是“动物的心声”，要求学生以某一动物的视角，向人类传达需求和愿望。写作时需包含以下模块：
1. 开头：问候并说明写信目的；
2. 主体：
介绍动物的习性或“爱好”（如栖息地、食物、行为等）；
描述人类活动对其造成的影响（如环境破坏、捕猎等）；
表达希望人类如何改变。
3. 结尾：呼吁行动并表达愿景。
【抛砖引玉】
假设你是一只北极熊，请写一封信给人类，要点如下：
【写作构思】
【佳作展示】
Dear humans,
My name is Snow, and I am a polar bear. I’m writing to ask for your help to protect polar bears in the wild.
My family and I live on the Arctic ice. We hunt seals here and raise our cubs. But now, the ice is melting faster than ever. Every year, the ocean swallows more of our home. I often swim for days, searching for solid ground. This is happening because the Earth is getting warmer. Your cars, factories, and pollution are taking away our ice. My cubs may not survive if this continues.
Please, can you use cleaner energy? Can you protect the Arctic instead of drilling for oil here? We only want to live peacefully, just like you.
If you save us, you save your planet too. Let’s share this world with kindness.
Sincerely,
Snow, the Polar Bear
本单元的写作主题是“动物的心声”，要求学生以某一动物的视角，向人类传达需求和愿望。写作时需包含以下模块：
1. 开头：问候并说明写信目的；
2. 主体：
介绍动物的习性或“爱好”（如栖息地、食物、行为等）；
描述人类活动对其造成的影响（如环境破坏、捕猎等）；
表达希望人类如何改变。
3. 结尾：呼吁行动并表达愿景。
【抛砖引玉】
假设你是一只北极熊，请写一封信给人类，要点如下：
【写作构思】
【佳作展示】
Dear humans,
My name is Snow, and I am a polar bear. I’m writing to ask for your help to protect polar bears in the wild.
My family and I live on the Arctic ice. We hunt seals here and raise our cubs. But now, the ice is melting faster than ever. Every year, the ocean swallows more of our home. I often swim for days, searching for solid ground. This is happening because the Earth is getting warmer. Your cars, factories, and pollution are taking away our ice. My cubs may not survive if this continues.
Please, can you use cleaner energy? Can you protect the Arctic instead of drilling for oil here? We only want to live peacefully, just like you.
If you save us, you save your planet too. Let’s share this world with kindness.
Sincerely,
Snow, the Polar Bear
答案
Dear humans,
My name is Snow, and I am a polar bear. I’m writing to ask for your help to protect polar bears in the wild.
My family and I live on the Arctic ice. We hunt seals here and raise our cubs. But now, the ice is melting faster than ever. Every year, the ocean swallows more of our home. I often swim for days, searching for solid ground. This is happening because the Earth is getting warmer. Your cars, factories, and pollution are taking away our ice. My cubs may not survive if this continues.
Please, can you use cleaner energy? Can you protect the Arctic instead of drilling for oil here? We only want to live peacefully, just like you.
If you save us, you save your planet too. Let’s share this world with kindness.
Sincerely,
Snow, the Polar Bear
My name is Snow, and I am a polar bear. I’m writing to ask for your help to protect polar bears in the wild.
My family and I live on the Arctic ice. We hunt seals here and raise our cubs. But now, the ice is melting faster than ever. Every year, the ocean swallows more of our home. I often swim for days, searching for solid ground. This is happening because the Earth is getting warmer. Your cars, factories, and pollution are taking away our ice. My cubs may not survive if this continues.
Please, can you use cleaner energy? Can you protect the Arctic instead of drilling for oil here? We only want to live peacefully, just like you.
If you save us, you save your planet too. Let’s share this world with kindness.
Sincerely,
Snow, the Polar Bear
解析
【分析】
写这封信需紧扣“动物的心声”主题，遵循指定的三个模块：首先确定动物身份（如北极熊），开头需问候人类并明确写信目的（请求帮助保护同类）；主体部分依次介绍该动物的习性（栖息地、食物、行为等）、人类活动对其造成的生存危害、希望人类做出的具体改变；结尾呼吁人类行动并表达与自然共存的愿景，全程以动物的第一人称视角写作。
【解析】
以北极熊Snow的身份，严格按照题目要求的模块创作：1. 开头：问候人类并说明写信目的是请求帮助保护野生北极熊；2. 主体：介绍自身及家人栖息在北极冰面，以猎海豹为生、养育幼崽的习性，接着说明人类活动（汽车、工厂等导致全球变暖、石油开采）造成冰面融化、生存空间缩小的危害，最后提出使用清洁能源、保护北极的具体建议；3. 结尾：呼吁人类行动，表达“拯救北极熊就是拯救地球”、与自然友好共存的愿景，语言贴合动物视角，结构完整。
【答案】
Dear humans,
My name is Snow, and I am a polar bear. I’m writing to ask for your help to protect polar bears in the wild.
My family and I live on the Arctic ice. We hunt seals here and raise our cubs. But now, the ice is melting faster than ever. Every year, the ocean swallows more of our home. I often swim for days, searching for solid ground. This is happening because the Earth is getting warmer. Your cars, factories, and pollution are taking away our ice. My cubs may not survive if this continues.
Please, can you use cleaner energy? Can you protect the Arctic instead of drilling for oil here? We only want to live peacefully, just like you.
If you save us, you save your planet too. Let’s share this world with kindness.
Sincerely,
Snow, the Polar Bear
【知识点】
英语书信写作、环保主题写作、动物视角表达
【点评】
这篇范文紧扣写作主题，结构清晰完整，符合书信格式要求，以北极熊的视角真实传达了生存困境与诉求，情感真挚，语言通俗易懂，完全符合题目给定的写作模块要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
写这封信需紧扣“动物的心声”主题，遵循指定的三个模块：首先确定动物身份（如北极熊），开头需问候人类并明确写信目的（请求帮助保护同类）；主体部分依次介绍该动物的习性（栖息地、食物、行为等）、人类活动对其造成的生存危害、希望人类做出的具体改变；结尾呼吁人类行动并表达与自然共存的愿景，全程以动物的第一人称视角写作。
【解析】
以北极熊Snow的身份，严格按照题目要求的模块创作：1. 开头：问候人类并说明写信目的是请求帮助保护野生北极熊；2. 主体：介绍自身及家人栖息在北极冰面，以猎海豹为生、养育幼崽的习性，接着说明人类活动（汽车、工厂等导致全球变暖、石油开采）造成冰面融化、生存空间缩小的危害，最后提出使用清洁能源、保护北极的具体建议；3. 结尾：呼吁人类行动，表达“拯救北极熊就是拯救地球”、与自然友好共存的愿景，语言贴合动物视角，结构完整。
【答案】
Dear humans,
My name is Snow, and I am a polar bear. I’m writing to ask for your help to protect polar bears in the wild.
My family and I live on the Arctic ice. We hunt seals here and raise our cubs. But now, the ice is melting faster than ever. Every year, the ocean swallows more of our home. I often swim for days, searching for solid ground. This is happening because the Earth is getting warmer. Your cars, factories, and pollution are taking away our ice. My cubs may not survive if this continues.
Please, can you use cleaner energy? Can you protect the Arctic instead of drilling for oil here? We only want to live peacefully, just like you.
If you save us, you save your planet too. Let’s share this world with kindness.
Sincerely,
Snow, the Polar Bear
【知识点】
英语书信写作、环保主题写作、动物视角表达
【点评】
这篇范文紧扣写作主题，结构清晰完整，符合书信格式要求，以北极熊的视角真实传达了生存困境与诉求，情感真挚，语言通俗易懂，完全符合题目给定的写作模块要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
【实战演练】
请以“A Letter from the Forest”为题,以森林动物(如松鼠、兔子)的名义写一封信，包含以下内容：
1.介绍森林中的生活；
2.说明人类砍树或建房子的影响；
3.请求人类种更多树。
要求：
1. 词数80左右;
2.使用书信格式，开头已给出(不计入总词数)；
3.避免真实人名或地名。
A Letter from the Forest
Dear humans,
I am a
请以“A Letter from the Forest”为题,以森林动物(如松鼠、兔子)的名义写一封信，包含以下内容：
1.介绍森林中的生活；
2.说明人类砍树或建房子的影响；
3.请求人类种更多树。
要求：
1. 词数80左右;
2.使用书信格式，开头已给出(不计入总词数)；
3.避免真实人名或地名。
A Letter from the Forest
Dear humans,
I am a
答案
单元写作指导
【参考范文】
A Letter from the Forest
Dear humans,
I am a squirrel. My name is Coco. I live in the forest. I love jumping on trees and hiding nuts.
But now, big machines cut down trees to build houses. My home is gone. I have nowhere to sleep. My nuts are buried under broken branches. My friends are scared and hungry.
Please stop cutting trees. Plant new ones instead. If you grow more trees, we can play safely again. Thank you for listening!
Sincerely,
Coco, the Squirrel
【参考范文】
A Letter from the Forest
Dear humans,
I am a squirrel. My name is Coco. I live in the forest. I love jumping on trees and hiding nuts.
But now, big machines cut down trees to build houses. My home is gone. I have nowhere to sleep. My nuts are buried under broken branches. My friends are scared and hungry.
Please stop cutting trees. Plant new ones instead. If you grow more trees, we can play safely again. Thank you for listening!
Sincerely,
Coco, the Squirrel
解析
【分析】
本题为英语应用文写作题，要求以森林动物的名义写书信，需包含三个核心要点：介绍森林生活、说明人类砍树/建屋的影响、请求人类种树。解题思路为：①承接已给开头，补充动物身份、名字及日常森林生活；②转折阐述人类破坏森林的具体危害；③提出明确请求并礼貌收尾，同时控制词数、遵循书信格式，避免真实信息。
【解析】
1. 承接开头“I am a”，补充动物身份（松鼠squirrel）、名字（Coco）及森林日常活动（jumping on trees, hiding nuts）；
2. 转折说明人类砍树建屋的危害：失去家园、坚果被埋、同伴受惊饥饿；
3. 提出请求：停止砍树，多种树，表达对安全生活的期望；
4. 结尾致谢，按书信格式署名，控制词数在80左右。
【答案】
A Letter from the Forest
Dear humans,
I am a squirrel. My name is Coco. I live in the forest. I love jumping on trees and hiding nuts.
But now, big machines cut down trees to build houses. My home is gone. I have nowhere to sleep. My nuts are buried under broken branches. My friends are scared and hungry.
Please stop cutting trees. Plant new ones instead. If you grow more trees, we can play safely again. Thank you for listening!
Sincerely,
Coco, the Squirrel
【知识点】
英语书信写作、环境保护主题表达、英语应用文写作
【点评】
本题结合环保主题考查英语书信写作，要点明确、格式清晰，既考察学生的英语语言运用能力，又渗透环保意识，适合单元基础写作练习。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语应用文写作题，要求以森林动物的名义写书信，需包含三个核心要点：介绍森林生活、说明人类砍树/建屋的影响、请求人类种树。解题思路为：①承接已给开头，补充动物身份、名字及日常森林生活；②转折阐述人类破坏森林的具体危害；③提出明确请求并礼貌收尾，同时控制词数、遵循书信格式，避免真实信息。
【解析】
1. 承接开头“I am a”，补充动物身份（松鼠squirrel）、名字（Coco）及森林日常活动（jumping on trees, hiding nuts）；
2. 转折说明人类砍树建屋的危害：失去家园、坚果被埋、同伴受惊饥饿；
3. 提出请求：停止砍树，多种树，表达对安全生活的期望；
4. 结尾致谢，按书信格式署名，控制词数在80左右。
【答案】
A Letter from the Forest
Dear humans,
I am a squirrel. My name is Coco. I live in the forest. I love jumping on trees and hiding nuts.
But now, big machines cut down trees to build houses. My home is gone. I have nowhere to sleep. My nuts are buried under broken branches. My friends are scared and hungry.
Please stop cutting trees. Plant new ones instead. If you grow more trees, we can play safely again. Thank you for listening!
Sincerely,
Coco, the Squirrel
【知识点】
英语书信写作、环境保护主题表达、英语应用文写作
【点评】
本题结合环保主题考查英语书信写作，要点明确、格式清晰，既考察学生的英语语言运用能力，又渗透环保意识，适合单元基础写作练习。
【难度系数】
0.6
