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五、书面表达
想象一下,你计划进行一次梦寐以求的自行车旅行。请以“My
dream cycling trip”为题写一篇80个词左右的短文,描述你的旅行计
划。短文需包含以下几个要点：
1. 你想去哪里进行这次自行车旅行?
2. 你为什么选择这个地方作为目的地?
3. 你打算和谁一起去?
4. 你将如何准备这次旅行?
5. 你期待在旅途中遇到什么?
My dream cycling trip
想象一下,你计划进行一次梦寐以求的自行车旅行。请以“My
dream cycling trip”为题写一篇80个词左右的短文,描述你的旅行计
划。短文需包含以下几个要点：
1. 你想去哪里进行这次自行车旅行?
2. 你为什么选择这个地方作为目的地?
3. 你打算和谁一起去?
4. 你将如何准备这次旅行?
5. 你期待在旅途中遇到什么?
My dream cycling trip
答案
五、One possible version:
My dream cycling trip
My dream cycling trip is to the countryside near the mountains. I choose this place because I love the
fresh air, green trees and beautiful scenery there. It's a perfect place to escape from the city noise and enjoy
nature.
I plan to go with my best friend, Xiaoming. We both love cycling and exploring new places. To prepare
for the trip, we will check our bikes carefully, pack some food and water, and wear comfortable clothes and
helmets.
During the trip, I hope to see lots of wild flowers, hear the birds sing, and see some other wildlife. I'm
also looking forward to the sense of freedom and adventure that cycling brings. It will be an enjoyable
experience for both of us!
My dream cycling trip
My dream cycling trip is to the countryside near the mountains. I choose this place because I love the
fresh air, green trees and beautiful scenery there. It's a perfect place to escape from the city noise and enjoy
nature.
I plan to go with my best friend, Xiaoming. We both love cycling and exploring new places. To prepare
for the trip, we will check our bikes carefully, pack some food and water, and wear comfortable clothes and
helmets.
During the trip, I hope to see lots of wild flowers, hear the birds sing, and see some other wildlife. I'm
also looking forward to the sense of freedom and adventure that cycling brings. It will be an enjoyable
experience for both of us!
解析
【分析】
这是一篇要点类英语书面表达，解题时首先对照题目给出的5个要求，对应思维导图的五个维度逐个梳理内容：第一步开篇直接点题，明确骑行的目的地；第二步说明选择该目的地的理由，贴合亲近自然的常规写作逻辑；第三步说明同行的伙伴，补充共同爱好让内容更真实；第四步列举骑行出行前的准备工作，符合生活常识；第五步写出旅途的期待，最后收尾表达对这次旅行的向往。写作时注意使用表示计划的对应表达和时态，控制总词数在要求范围内，不要遗漏任何给定要点。
【解析】
1. 开篇点题：直接点明自己梦想的骑行目的地是山边的乡村，紧接着说明选择这里的原因：有新鲜空气、优美景色，可以逃离城市喧嚣、亲近自然，完成Where和Why两个要点的表述。
2. 接着介绍同行的伙伴是同样热爱骑行的好友，完成Who的要点；之后列举出行前的准备：仔细检查自行车、备好食物和水、穿戴舒适的衣物和头盔，完成How的要点。
3. 最后描述自己在旅途中的期待：看到野花、听到鸟鸣、感受骑行的自由感，收尾点明这会是非常愉快的体验，完成Hope的要点，全文逻辑连贯，所有要点全部覆盖。
【答案】
My dream cycling trip
My dream cycling trip is to the countryside near the mountains. I choose this place because I love the fresh air, green trees and beautiful scenery there. It's a perfect place to escape from the city noise and enjoy nature.
I plan to go with my best friend, Xiaoming. We both love cycling and exploring new places. To prepare for the trip, we will check our bikes carefully, pack some food and water, and wear comfortable clothes and helmets.
During the trip, I hope to see lots of wild flowers, hear the birds sing, and see some other wildlife. I'm also looking forward to the sense of freedom and adventure that cycling brings. It will be an enjoyable experience for both of us!
【知识点】
提纲类英语写作，一般将来时应用，要点整合
【点评】
本文完整覆盖了题目要求的全部5个写作要点，逻辑层次清晰，行文衔接自然，内容贴合骑行旅行的真实场景，用词准确符合初中英语写作的要求，是一篇合格的参考范文。同学们写作时要注意不要遗漏给定要点，适当补充细节可以让作文内容更生动。
【难度系数】
0.7
这是一篇要点类英语书面表达，解题时首先对照题目给出的5个要求，对应思维导图的五个维度逐个梳理内容：第一步开篇直接点题，明确骑行的目的地；第二步说明选择该目的地的理由，贴合亲近自然的常规写作逻辑；第三步说明同行的伙伴，补充共同爱好让内容更真实；第四步列举骑行出行前的准备工作，符合生活常识；第五步写出旅途的期待，最后收尾表达对这次旅行的向往。写作时注意使用表示计划的对应表达和时态，控制总词数在要求范围内，不要遗漏任何给定要点。
【解析】
1. 开篇点题：直接点明自己梦想的骑行目的地是山边的乡村，紧接着说明选择这里的原因：有新鲜空气、优美景色，可以逃离城市喧嚣、亲近自然，完成Where和Why两个要点的表述。
2. 接着介绍同行的伙伴是同样热爱骑行的好友，完成Who的要点；之后列举出行前的准备：仔细检查自行车、备好食物和水、穿戴舒适的衣物和头盔，完成How的要点。
3. 最后描述自己在旅途中的期待：看到野花、听到鸟鸣、感受骑行的自由感，收尾点明这会是非常愉快的体验，完成Hope的要点，全文逻辑连贯，所有要点全部覆盖。
【答案】
My dream cycling trip
My dream cycling trip is to the countryside near the mountains. I choose this place because I love the fresh air, green trees and beautiful scenery there. It's a perfect place to escape from the city noise and enjoy nature.
I plan to go with my best friend, Xiaoming. We both love cycling and exploring new places. To prepare for the trip, we will check our bikes carefully, pack some food and water, and wear comfortable clothes and helmets.
During the trip, I hope to see lots of wild flowers, hear the birds sing, and see some other wildlife. I'm also looking forward to the sense of freedom and adventure that cycling brings. It will be an enjoyable experience for both of us!
【知识点】
提纲类英语写作，一般将来时应用，要点整合
【点评】
本文完整覆盖了题目要求的全部5个写作要点，逻辑层次清晰，行文衔接自然，内容贴合骑行旅行的真实场景，用词准确符合初中英语写作的要求，是一篇合格的参考范文。同学们写作时要注意不要遗漏给定要点，适当补充细节可以让作文内容更生动。
【难度系数】
0.7
