2026年初中英语话题复习暑假作业七年级人教版第49页答案
四、书面表达。
假如你是李华,你的笔友 Kevin 很爱吃薯条,作为关心他的朋友,请根据以下图示写一封英文邮件给他。

注意:1. 邮件须反映图示所有信息,不能照抄;
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
3. 词数 60 左右。






答案

评分标准:
(一)内容要点认定及分值(12分)
1. 格式(1分)、开头(1分)
2. 总述吃太多薯条有坏处(1分)、分述原因(1点1分,共2分)
3. 总述建议(1分)、分述(1点1分,共3分)
4. 好处(1点1分,共2分)
5. 结尾(1分)
(二)行文认定及分值(3分)
参考范文:
Dear Kevin, (0.5分)
I know chips are your favourite. (1分) I’m writing to tell you that eating too many chips is not good for your health. (1分) There is lots of salt and fat in them, and eating too much of them may cause heart problems. (2分)
Here is some useful advice for you. (1分) Why not eat some fruit instead? (1分) It’s delicious and healthy. (1分) It’s important to drink more water too. (1分) Also, you should do more exercise. (1分) It can help keep your weight down. (1分)
Hope you can have a healthy life. (1分)
Yours,
Li Hua (0.5分)