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请根据表格中的内容，以“A girl's life was changed by WWF”为题写一篇短文，不少于90词。
请根据表格中的内容，以“A girl's life was changed by WWF”为题写一篇短文，不少于90词。
One possible version
A girl's life was changed by WWF
Lila is a girl from Brazil. Her family depended on the forest for everything they needed, but they watched it disappear little by little. Lila didn't know it is important to protect it until she met the WWF worker.
A girl's life was changed by WWF
Lila is a girl from Brazil. Her family depended on the forest for everything they needed, but they watched it disappear little by little. Lila didn't know it is important to protect it until she met the WWF worker.
One day, a WWF worker came to Lila's town and talked about why people needed to save forests. He said that it was very important for children to protect the environment. He wanted all the children in the town to learn about wild animals and how to protect their homes.
A month later, Lila joined an environmental education programme. Now she goes to nature classes every week. She enjoys exploring nature and is grateful to WWF.
Lila says that she wants to be a nature protector in the future. She hopes she can help protect forests and wild animals in the future.
答案
One possible version
A girl's life was changed by WWF
Lila is a girl from Brazil. Her family depended on the forest for everything they needed, but they watched it disappear little by little. Lila didn't know it is important to protect it until she met the WWF worker.
One day, a WWF worker came to Lila's town and talked about why people needed to save forests. He said that it was very important for children to protect the environment. He wanted all the children in the town to learn about wild animals and how to protect their homes.
A month later, Lila joined an environmental education programme. Now she goes to nature classes every week. She enjoys exploring nature and is grateful to WWF.
Lila says that she wants to be a nature protector in the future. She hopes she can help protect forests and wild animals in the future.
A girl's life was changed by WWF
Lila is a girl from Brazil. Her family depended on the forest for everything they needed, but they watched it disappear little by little. Lila didn't know it is important to protect it until she met the WWF worker.
One day, a WWF worker came to Lila's town and talked about why people needed to save forests. He said that it was very important for children to protect the environment. He wanted all the children in the town to learn about wild animals and how to protect their homes.
A month later, Lila joined an environmental education programme. Now she goes to nature classes every week. She enjoys exploring nature and is grateful to WWF.
Lila says that she wants to be a nature protector in the future. She hopes she can help protect forests and wild animals in the future.
解析
【分析】
这是一篇提示类叙事英语写作题，解题思路非常清晰：首先第一步先审题，明确作文标题和核心主题是WWF改变了女孩Lila的人生，要求不少于90词；第二步梳理表格给出的所有要点，按照时间线排序：先介绍人物Lila的基本背景→交代过去她家依靠森林生存、亲眼看着森林一点点消失的过往→描述转折点：某天WWF工作人员到访的事件→写后续Lila加入环保教育项目的经历→最后补充合理的未来规划内容；第三步串联所有要点，补充符合逻辑的细节，注意对应场景使用正确的时态，过去发生的事用一般过去时，现在和未来的内容用对应的时态，最后通读检查要点是否全部覆盖、词数是否达标、语句是否通顺连贯即可。
【解析】
写作可按照四步完成规范创作：
1. 开篇引入：直接点明主角身份，把表格里“家庭依靠森林、过去看着森林逐渐消失”的背景信息自然融入，交代故事的初始状态。
2. 情节转折：补充WWF工作人员到访后的合理行为细节，比如宣讲森林保护的意义、科普环保相关知识，顺理成章引出后续Lila的转变。
3. 过程描述：对应表格里“加入环保教育项目”的要点，补充她参与相关课程、亲近自然的细节，体现她的状态变化。
4. 结尾升华：围绕环保主题自拟未来的规划内容，表达她想要成为自然保护者、守护森林和野生动物的愿望，完成完整叙事。
最后通读全文，确认所有表格给出的信息点都已用到，词数满足不少于90词的要求，语法和语句逻辑没有错误即可。
【答案】
A girl's life was changed by WWF
Lila is a girl from Brazil. Her family depended on the forest for everything they needed, but they watched it disappear little by little. Lila didn't know it is important to protect it until she met the WWF worker.
One day, a WWF worker came to Lila's town and talked about why people needed to save forests. He said that it was very important for children to protect the environment. He wanted all the children in the town to learn about wild animals and how to protect their homes.
A month later, Lila joined an environmental education programme. Now she goes to nature classes every week. She enjoys exploring nature and is grateful to WWF.
Lila says that she wants to be a nature protector in the future. She hopes she can help protect forests and wild animals in the future.
【知识点】
提纲类英语写作，一般过去时应用，环保主题表达
【点评】
本题属于叙事类提示写作，所有核心情节都通过表格给出了明确指引，不需要学生自主搭建完全陌生的故事框架，只需要梳理时间线串联给定要点、补充少量合理细节，注意时态的正确切换，就可以完成符合要求的作品，能够很好地锻炼学生的叙事逻辑梳理和信息整合表达能力。
【难度系数】
0.7
这是一篇提示类叙事英语写作题，解题思路非常清晰：首先第一步先审题，明确作文标题和核心主题是WWF改变了女孩Lila的人生，要求不少于90词；第二步梳理表格给出的所有要点，按照时间线排序：先介绍人物Lila的基本背景→交代过去她家依靠森林生存、亲眼看着森林一点点消失的过往→描述转折点：某天WWF工作人员到访的事件→写后续Lila加入环保教育项目的经历→最后补充合理的未来规划内容；第三步串联所有要点，补充符合逻辑的细节，注意对应场景使用正确的时态，过去发生的事用一般过去时，现在和未来的内容用对应的时态，最后通读检查要点是否全部覆盖、词数是否达标、语句是否通顺连贯即可。
【解析】
写作可按照四步完成规范创作：
1. 开篇引入：直接点明主角身份，把表格里“家庭依靠森林、过去看着森林逐渐消失”的背景信息自然融入，交代故事的初始状态。
2. 情节转折：补充WWF工作人员到访后的合理行为细节，比如宣讲森林保护的意义、科普环保相关知识，顺理成章引出后续Lila的转变。
3. 过程描述：对应表格里“加入环保教育项目”的要点，补充她参与相关课程、亲近自然的细节，体现她的状态变化。
4. 结尾升华：围绕环保主题自拟未来的规划内容，表达她想要成为自然保护者、守护森林和野生动物的愿望，完成完整叙事。
最后通读全文，确认所有表格给出的信息点都已用到，词数满足不少于90词的要求，语法和语句逻辑没有错误即可。
【答案】
A girl's life was changed by WWF
Lila is a girl from Brazil. Her family depended on the forest for everything they needed, but they watched it disappear little by little. Lila didn't know it is important to protect it until she met the WWF worker.
One day, a WWF worker came to Lila's town and talked about why people needed to save forests. He said that it was very important for children to protect the environment. He wanted all the children in the town to learn about wild animals and how to protect their homes.
A month later, Lila joined an environmental education programme. Now she goes to nature classes every week. She enjoys exploring nature and is grateful to WWF.
Lila says that she wants to be a nature protector in the future. She hopes she can help protect forests and wild animals in the future.
【知识点】
提纲类英语写作，一般过去时应用，环保主题表达
【点评】
本题属于叙事类提示写作，所有核心情节都通过表格给出了明确指引，不需要学生自主搭建完全陌生的故事框架，只需要梳理时间线串联给定要点、补充少量合理细节，注意时态的正确切换，就可以完成符合要求的作品，能够很好地锻炼学生的叙事逻辑梳理和信息整合表达能力。
【难度系数】
0.7
