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假如你是《美食天下》节目的主持人,请你按照下面的图示,用英语介绍一下西红柿炒鸡蛋的做法。
词数100左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
→审时态: 一般现在时
→审要点 →审词数
提示:1.所需原料:西红柿、鸡蛋各两个,少许食用油、盐和糖;2.烹饪时间:约三分钟。
参考词汇:oil 油;salt 盐;pan 平底锅;mix 混合;scrambled eggs 炒鸡蛋
Ladies and gentlemen,
Glad to meet you here!
写作支架
开头 —— 点明主旨 —— Today, let me tell you ——a delicious dish.（高分句式1）
中间 —— 介绍制作方法 —— You need . Now let’s practise together.
First, you should break the two eggs .
Next, the tomatoes.
Then, pour into .
After a while, put in , and then .（高分句式2）
Finally, add . Now the dish is ready!
结尾 —— 结束语 —— Thanks for . next time!
→审人称: 第二人称
→审主题
假如你是《美食天下》节目的主持人,请你按照下面的图示,用英语介绍一下西红柿炒鸡蛋的做法。
词数100左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
→审时态: 一般现在时
→审要点 →审词数
提示:1.所需原料:西红柿、鸡蛋各两个,少许食用油、盐和糖;2.烹饪时间:约三分钟。
参考词汇:oil 油;salt 盐;pan 平底锅;mix 混合;scrambled eggs 炒鸡蛋
Ladies and gentlemen,
Glad to meet you here!
写作支架
开头 —— 点明主旨 —— Today, let me tell you ——a delicious dish.（高分句式1）
中间 —— 介绍制作方法 —— You need . Now let’s practise together.
First, you should break the two eggs .
Next, the tomatoes.
Then, pour into .
After a while, put in , and then .（高分句式2）
Finally, add . Now the dish is ready!
结尾 —— 结束语 —— Thanks for . next time!
答案
【解析】：本题为译林版八年级上册操作类说明文写作题，要求以美食节目主持人的身份介绍西红柿炒鸡蛋的做法：1. 写作规范：使用第二人称叙事，全程采用一般现在时，用表先后顺序的连接词串联操作步骤，逻辑清晰；2. 内容要求：完整覆盖提示给出的食材清单、约3分钟的烹饪时长两个核心要点，对应四幅图示的操作流程，词数控制在100左右，符合对应单元的写作难度要求。
【答案】：
写作支架填空答案：
1. the way to make tomato and egg stir-fry
2. two tomatoes, two eggs, some cooking oil, a little salt and sugar
3. into a bowl and mix them up well
4. cut up
5. some cooking oil
6. the hot pan
7. the mixed eggs
8. the pan
9. add the cut tomatoes and cook for about two minutes
10. a little salt and sugar to make it taste nice
11. your watching
12. See you
完整参考范文：
Ladies and gentlemen,
Glad to meet you here! Today, let me tell you the way to make tomato and egg stir-fry — a delicious dish.
You need two tomatoes, two eggs, some cooking oil, a little salt and sugar. Now let's practise together.
First, break the two eggs into a bowl and mix them up well. Next, cut up the tomatoes. Then pour some cooking oil into the hot pan. After a while, put the mixed eggs in the pan, and then add the cut tomatoes and cook for about two minutes. The whole cooking time is only 3 minutes. Finally, add a little salt and sugar to make it taste nice. Now the dish is ready!
Thanks for your watching. See you next time!
【答案】：
写作支架填空答案：
1. the way to make tomato and egg stir-fry
2. two tomatoes, two eggs, some cooking oil, a little salt and sugar
3. into a bowl and mix them up well
4. cut up
5. some cooking oil
6. the hot pan
7. the mixed eggs
8. the pan
9. add the cut tomatoes and cook for about two minutes
10. a little salt and sugar to make it taste nice
11. your watching
12. See you
完整参考范文：
Ladies and gentlemen,
Glad to meet you here! Today, let me tell you the way to make tomato and egg stir-fry — a delicious dish.
You need two tomatoes, two eggs, some cooking oil, a little salt and sugar. Now let's practise together.
First, break the two eggs into a bowl and mix them up well. Next, cut up the tomatoes. Then pour some cooking oil into the hot pan. After a while, put the mixed eggs in the pan, and then add the cut tomatoes and cook for about two minutes. The whole cooking time is only 3 minutes. Finally, add a little salt and sugar to make it taste nice. Now the dish is ready!
Thanks for your watching. See you next time!
