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三、书面表达。
假如你是张华，现在已经是晚上九点半了，你的好朋友吴林发信息说他睡不着，想问问你睡了没有，你的家人都在做什么。请你根据表格中提供的信息，描述一下你和家人此刻的活动情况。
要求:1.内容可适当发挥;不得出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名;
2.语句连贯,词数70左右。
假如你是张华，现在已经是晚上九点半了，你的好朋友吴林发信息说他睡不着，想问问你睡了没有，你的家人都在做什么。请你根据表格中提供的信息，描述一下你和家人此刻的活动情况。
要求:1.内容可适当发挥;不得出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名;
2.语句连贯,词数70左右。
答案
One possible version:
My name is Zhang Hua. Now it’s 9:30 p. m. My family are at home. My father is an engineer. He is still working in his study. He is very busy every day. My mother has nothing to do, so she is watching a soap opera on the sofa now. I am doing my homework in my bedroom now. I don’t want to go to bed early. I want to go to bed at 10:00 p. m. As for my sister, she needs much sleep, so she is sleeping in her room.
My name is Zhang Hua. Now it’s 9:30 p. m. My family are at home. My father is an engineer. He is still working in his study. He is very busy every day. My mother has nothing to do, so she is watching a soap opera on the sofa now. I am doing my homework in my bedroom now. I don’t want to go to bed early. I want to go to bed at 10:00 p. m. As for my sister, she needs much sleep, so she is sleeping in her room.
解析
【分析】
首先明确题目要求：以张华的身份，在晚上九点半时，给好友吴林描述家人此刻的活动，需用到表格中的信息，适当发挥，语句连贯，词数约70。解题思路：1. 确定时态为现在进行时（描述此刻正在进行的动作）；2. 开头点明时间、身份及家人都在家的背景；3. 依次介绍爸爸（工程师，在工作）、妈妈（看肥皂剧）、自己（做作业）、姐姐（在房间睡觉）的活动，补充细节让内容自然；4. 呼应好友的问题，说明自己还未早睡，符合语境。
【解析】
1. 开头：My name is Zhang Hua. Now it’s 9:30 p.m. My family are at home. 点明身份、时间和场景。
2. 描述爸爸：My father is an engineer. He is still working in his study. He is very busy every day. 结合表格信息，补充细节。
3. 描述妈妈：My mother has nothing to do, so she is watching a soap opera on the sofa now. 符合表格内容，补充场景。
4. 描述自己：I am doing my homework in my bedroom now. I don’t want to go to bed early. I want to go to bed at 10:00 p.m. 结合表格，补充个人想法。
5. 描述姐姐：As for my sister, she needs much sleep, so she is sleeping in her room. 对应表格信息，补充原因让内容连贯。整体语句连贯，词数符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
My name is Zhang Hua. Now it’s 9:30 p. m. My family are at home. My father is an engineer. He is still working in his study. He is very busy every day. My mother has nothing to do, so she is watching a soap opera on the sofa now. I am doing my homework in my bedroom now. I don’t want to go to bed early. I want to go to bed at 10:00 p. m. As for my sister, she needs much sleep, so she is sleeping in her room.
【知识点】
现在进行时、英语书面表达、日常话题写作
【点评】
本题为日常话题的英语书面表达题，考查学生对现在进行时的运用能力，要求结合给定信息适当拓展内容，贴近学生生活实际，难度适中，能有效考查学生的语言组织和表达能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先明确题目要求：以张华的身份，在晚上九点半时，给好友吴林描述家人此刻的活动，需用到表格中的信息，适当发挥，语句连贯，词数约70。解题思路：1. 确定时态为现在进行时（描述此刻正在进行的动作）；2. 开头点明时间、身份及家人都在家的背景；3. 依次介绍爸爸（工程师，在工作）、妈妈（看肥皂剧）、自己（做作业）、姐姐（在房间睡觉）的活动，补充细节让内容自然；4. 呼应好友的问题，说明自己还未早睡，符合语境。
【解析】
1. 开头：My name is Zhang Hua. Now it’s 9:30 p.m. My family are at home. 点明身份、时间和场景。
2. 描述爸爸：My father is an engineer. He is still working in his study. He is very busy every day. 结合表格信息，补充细节。
3. 描述妈妈：My mother has nothing to do, so she is watching a soap opera on the sofa now. 符合表格内容，补充场景。
4. 描述自己：I am doing my homework in my bedroom now. I don’t want to go to bed early. I want to go to bed at 10:00 p.m. 结合表格，补充个人想法。
5. 描述姐姐：As for my sister, she needs much sleep, so she is sleeping in her room. 对应表格信息，补充原因让内容连贯。整体语句连贯，词数符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
My name is Zhang Hua. Now it’s 9:30 p. m. My family are at home. My father is an engineer. He is still working in his study. He is very busy every day. My mother has nothing to do, so she is watching a soap opera on the sofa now. I am doing my homework in my bedroom now. I don’t want to go to bed early. I want to go to bed at 10:00 p. m. As for my sister, she needs much sleep, so she is sleeping in her room.
【知识点】
现在进行时、英语书面表达、日常话题写作
【点评】
本题为日常话题的英语书面表达题，考查学生对现在进行时的运用能力，要求结合给定信息适当拓展内容，贴近学生生活实际，难度适中，能有效考查学生的语言组织和表达能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
