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Ⅸ. Writing(写作)4%
请以“I tried my best”为题，写一篇不少于50词的短文。
要求:1.语句通顺，书写规范。
2.必须包含以下信息:What was the problem? What did you do to overcome the problem? What did you learn from it?
请以“I tried my best”为题，写一篇不少于50词的短文。
要求:1.语句通顺，书写规范。
2.必须包含以下信息:What was the problem? What did you do to overcome the problem? What did you learn from it?
Last year,I was very weak in English speaking. When the teacher asked me to answer questions,my heart raced fast and I could hardly say a word. I practised speaking English every morning for 30 minutes. I read aloud after the recordings again and again. After a term,I could speak bravely in class and got good grades in English exams.
From this experience,I learned that practice makes progress. If I keep trying,I can overcome any difficulty.
答案
参考范文:
Last year,I was very weak in English speaking. When the teacher asked me to answer questions,my heart raced fast and I could hardly say a word. I practised speaking English every morning for 30 minutes. I read aloud after the recordings again and again. After a term,I could speak bravely in class and got good grades in English exams.
From this experience,I learned that practice makes progress. If I keep trying,I can overcome any difficulty.
Last year,I was very weak in English speaking. When the teacher asked me to answer questions,my heart raced fast and I could hardly say a word. I practised speaking English every morning for 30 minutes. I read aloud after the recordings again and again. After a term,I could speak bravely in class and got good grades in English exams.
From this experience,I learned that practice makes progress. If I keep trying,I can overcome any difficulty.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语写作题，需紧扣主题“I tried my best”，完成不少于50词的短文，且必须包含三个核心信息：遇到的问题、克服问题的行动、从经历中获得的感悟。解题思路：首先选取贴近自身的具体困难（如英语口语薄弱）；接着描述问题的具体表现（如课堂不敢发言）；然后详细写克服困难的具体努力（如每日晨读练习）；最后点明收获的道理，确保语句通顺、符合词数要求。
【解析】
按照写作要求组织内容：先点明遇到的问题（去年英语口语差，课堂上不敢发言），再写克服问题的行动（每天晨读30分钟，反复跟读录音练习），最后点明从经历中获得的感悟（实践能带来进步，坚持努力可克服困难），形成完整短文。
【答案】
Last year,I was very weak in English speaking. When the teacher asked me to answer questions,my heart raced fast and I could hardly say a word. I practised speaking English every morning for 30 minutes. I read aloud after the recordings again and again. After a term,I could speak bravely in class and got good grades in English exams.
From this experience,I learned that practice makes progress. If I keep trying,I can overcome any difficulty.
【知识点】
英语短文写作、要点覆盖写作、英语感悟表达
【点评】
该范文紧扣主题，完整覆盖题目要求的三个核心信息，内容具体有细节，感悟真实贴合主题，语句通顺，符合写作的各项规范要求，是合格的参考短文。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语写作题，需紧扣主题“I tried my best”，完成不少于50词的短文，且必须包含三个核心信息：遇到的问题、克服问题的行动、从经历中获得的感悟。解题思路：首先选取贴近自身的具体困难（如英语口语薄弱）；接着描述问题的具体表现（如课堂不敢发言）；然后详细写克服困难的具体努力（如每日晨读练习）；最后点明收获的道理，确保语句通顺、符合词数要求。
【解析】
按照写作要求组织内容：先点明遇到的问题（去年英语口语差，课堂上不敢发言），再写克服问题的行动（每天晨读30分钟，反复跟读录音练习），最后点明从经历中获得的感悟（实践能带来进步，坚持努力可克服困难），形成完整短文。
【答案】
Last year,I was very weak in English speaking. When the teacher asked me to answer questions,my heart raced fast and I could hardly say a word. I practised speaking English every morning for 30 minutes. I read aloud after the recordings again and again. After a term,I could speak bravely in class and got good grades in English exams.
From this experience,I learned that practice makes progress. If I keep trying,I can overcome any difficulty.
【知识点】
英语短文写作、要点覆盖写作、英语感悟表达
【点评】
该范文紧扣主题，完整覆盖题目要求的三个核心信息，内容具体有细节，感悟真实贴合主题，语句通顺，符合写作的各项规范要求，是合格的参考短文。
【难度系数】
0.6
