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📖 写作提优专题
话题分析
本单元核心写作话题是环保行动与个人/社区环保实践，包含两类高频写作方向：一是分享个人/家庭的环保做法（如垃圾分类、减少浪费）及带来的改变；二是倡议类写作：呼吁大家践行“3R原则”，解决身边的环境问题。写作要求围绕主题，从“存在的环境问题、具体行动方法、行动带来的积极影响/个人感受”等方面展开，引导学生分享环保经验、锻炼说明与倡议类书面表达能力。
写作积累
[高分词汇]
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[高分句式]
1. 过去我总觉得环保离自己很远，直到我看到家附近的小河变脏了。
2. 每个人都可以为环保出一份力，我最常做的事就是自带购物袋去超市。
3. 我总是把可回收物品和其他垃圾分开，这能让回收工作变得更轻松。
4. 保护地球的责任永远在我们每个人身上，这些环保习惯会永远陪伴着我们。
典例讲解
假定你是李华，你们学校将举办以“绿色校园，你我共建”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据右边的思维导图提示，写一篇英语演讲稿，呼吁同学们共同建设绿色校园。
注意:1.词数100左右，开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数;2.短文须包含提示要点，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯;3.不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Building a Green School
Good morning, everyone! It's my honour to share my ideas about building a green school here.
Thank you!
[审题思路]
▶审体裁:本篇写作核心是校园环保英语演讲稿，包含现状问题、具体建议、行动呼吁，兼具说明性
话题分析
本单元核心写作话题是环保行动与个人/社区环保实践，包含两类高频写作方向：一是分享个人/家庭的环保做法（如垃圾分类、减少浪费）及带来的改变；二是倡议类写作：呼吁大家践行“3R原则”，解决身边的环境问题。写作要求围绕主题，从“存在的环境问题、具体行动方法、行动带来的积极影响/个人感受”等方面展开，引导学生分享环保经验、锻炼说明与倡议类书面表达能力。
写作积累
[高分词汇]
1.
improve the environment
改善环境2.
reduce waste/pollution
减少浪费/污染3.
focus on waste sorting
集中注意力于垃圾分类4.
connect daily habits with environmental protection
将日常习惯与环保联系起来5.
reuse items regularly
定期重复使用物品6.
make a recycling poster
制作回收宣传海报7.
remember the importance of protecting the Earth
记住保护地球的重要性8.
a meaningful environmental experience
一段有意义的环保经历[高分句式]
1. 过去我总觉得环保离自己很远，直到我看到家附近的小河变脏了。
I used to think environmental protection was far from me, until I saw the river near my home getting dirty.
2. 每个人都可以为环保出一份力，我最常做的事就是自带购物袋去超市。
Everyone can do something for environment protection, and what I do most often is bring my own shopping bags to the supermarket.
3. 我总是把可回收物品和其他垃圾分开，这能让回收工作变得更轻松。
I always separate recyclable items from other waste, which makes recycling much easier.
4. 保护地球的责任永远在我们每个人身上，这些环保习惯会永远陪伴着我们。
The responsibility to protect the Earth always lies with each of us, and these green habits will stay with us forever.
典例讲解
假定你是李华，你们学校将举办以“绿色校园，你我共建”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据右边的思维导图提示，写一篇英语演讲稿，呼吁同学们共同建设绿色校园。
注意:1.词数100左右，开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数;2.短文须包含提示要点，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯;3.不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Building a Green School
Good morning, everyone! It's my honour to share my ideas about building a green school here.
Thank you!
[审题思路]
▶审体裁:本篇写作核心是校园环保英语演讲稿，包含现状问题、具体建议、行动呼吁，兼具说明性
答案
[高分词汇]
1. improve the environment
2. reduce waste/pollution
3. focus on waste sorting
4. connect daily habits with environmental protection
5. reuse items regularly
6. make a recycling poster
7. remember the importance of protecting the Earth
8. a meaningful environmental experience
[高分句式]
1. I used to think environmental protection was far from me, until I saw the river near my home getting dirty.
2. Everyone can do something for environment protection, and what I do most often is bring my own shopping bags to the supermarket.
3. I always separate recyclable items from other waste, which makes recycling much easier.
4. The responsibility to protect the Earth always lies with each of us, and these green habits will stay with us forever.
1. improve the environment
2. reduce waste/pollution
3. focus on waste sorting
4. connect daily habits with environmental protection
5. reuse items regularly
6. make a recycling poster
7. remember the importance of protecting the Earth
8. a meaningful environmental experience
[高分句式]
1. I used to think environmental protection was far from me, until I saw the river near my home getting dirty.
2. Everyone can do something for environment protection, and what I do most often is bring my own shopping bags to the supermarket.
3. I always separate recyclable items from other waste, which makes recycling much easier.
4. The responsibility to protect the Earth always lies with each of us, and these green habits will stay with us forever.
解析
【分析】本题是英语写作提优的词汇与句式积累题，需根据中文提示，结合环保主题的常用英语表达，匹配对应的英文短语或句子。解题时先明确每个中文内容的核心语义，再回忆符合英语写作规范的对应表达，确保准确且贴合语境。
【解析】高分词汇部分，需将中文短语转换为常用的环保主题英文短语，确保语义对应、表达地道；高分句式部分，需将中文句子转换为符合英语书面表达的对应句子，保证语法正确、语义完整。具体匹配如下：
1. “改善环境”对应improve the environment；
2. “减少浪费/污染”对应reduce waste/pollution；
3. “集中注意力于垃圾分类”对应focus on waste sorting；
4. “将日常习惯与环保联系起来”对应connect daily habits with environmental protection；
5. “定期重复使用物品”对应reuse items regularly；
6. “制作回收宣传海报”对应make a recycling poster；
7. “记住保护地球的重要性”对应remember the importance of protecting the Earth；
8. “一段有意义的环保经历”对应a meaningful environmental experience；
高分句式依次对应正确的英文表达，符合英语写作的常用句式结构。
【答案】[高分词汇]1. improve the environment 2. reduce waste/pollution 3. focus on waste sorting 4. connect daily habits with environmental protection 5. reuse items regularly 6. make a recycling poster 7. remember the importance of protecting the Earth 8. a meaningful environmental experience [高分句式]1. I used to think environmental protection was far from me, until I saw the river near my home getting dirty. 2. Everyone can do something for environment protection, and what I do most often is bring my own shopping bags to the supermarket. 3. I always separate recyclable items from other waste, which makes recycling much easier. 4. The responsibility to protect the Earth always lies with each of us, and these green habits will stay with us forever.
【知识点】英语词汇积累、英语句式运用、环保主题英语表达
【点评】本题围绕环保主题，聚焦英语写作的基础词汇与句式积累，帮助学生夯实写作素材，贴合单元核心话题，实用性较强，能有效提升学生的书面表达能力。
【难度系数】0.3
【解析】高分词汇部分，需将中文短语转换为常用的环保主题英文短语，确保语义对应、表达地道；高分句式部分，需将中文句子转换为符合英语书面表达的对应句子，保证语法正确、语义完整。具体匹配如下：
1. “改善环境”对应improve the environment；
2. “减少浪费/污染”对应reduce waste/pollution；
3. “集中注意力于垃圾分类”对应focus on waste sorting；
4. “将日常习惯与环保联系起来”对应connect daily habits with environmental protection；
5. “定期重复使用物品”对应reuse items regularly；
6. “制作回收宣传海报”对应make a recycling poster；
7. “记住保护地球的重要性”对应remember the importance of protecting the Earth；
8. “一段有意义的环保经历”对应a meaningful environmental experience；
高分句式依次对应正确的英文表达，符合英语写作的常用句式结构。
【答案】[高分词汇]1. improve the environment 2. reduce waste/pollution 3. focus on waste sorting 4. connect daily habits with environmental protection 5. reuse items regularly 6. make a recycling poster 7. remember the importance of protecting the Earth 8. a meaningful environmental experience [高分句式]1. I used to think environmental protection was far from me, until I saw the river near my home getting dirty. 2. Everyone can do something for environment protection, and what I do most often is bring my own shopping bags to the supermarket. 3. I always separate recyclable items from other waste, which makes recycling much easier. 4. The responsibility to protect the Earth always lies with each of us, and these green habits will stay with us forever.
【知识点】英语词汇积累、英语句式运用、环保主题英语表达
【点评】本题围绕环保主题，聚焦英语写作的基础词汇与句式积累，帮助学生夯实写作素材，贴合单元核心话题，实用性较强，能有效提升学生的书面表达能力。
【难度系数】0.3
